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author please come back!!! 😭😭😭 and continue this novel, I really like this novel, its' different to the other novel i been read so far and this story is pretty interesting and so so good !!! so please come back 😭 😭 😭
farewell I guess will come from time to time if author somehow returns story was awesome but well what a pity
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I really like you're novel especially you are a beginner.. .hope you make more novel I'm here to support 💗💗
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Why do some of the authors from the Philippines that I follow always update their stories late or even take a long time to update? It's different, most authors from India are diligent, some even admit they're late but actually they always update their stories every day.
Is this on hiatus? It was fun to read but ic ouldnt help but notice its been 2 months since last update
author where the heck are you ??! are you even alive ! please come back for god's sake !
Au début j'étais mitigé mais j'aime bien la personnalité du mc et sa façon d'être. L'harem j'aime rarement pourtant ça ce construit bien avec la personnalité du mc. L'histoire est super bien ! Les points de vue qui varie sont super bien placé, à un point que c'est parfait ! J'aime le système, j'aime sa reincarnation que sa personnalité soit pas endommagé. J'aime sa façon de faire les choses. Il manque quelques choses pour que sa soit parfait. C'est la tram du fond de l'histoire : on a eu petit détail sur la planète mais pas grand choses, ni sur les technologies, les villes, les races(il devrait avoir au moins des demi-race dans le domaine humain). Peu de détails sur l'environnement.. Même si grâce à cela l'histoire avance assez vite, cela manque. Ses projets aussi sur ses investissements manques.. j'ai bien aimé voir son compte bancaire, j'aimerais le revoir souvent ! J'aimerais aussi voir ses achats de temps en temps. J'aime qu'il n'y a pas de grade sur les artefacts, j'espère aussi qu'il va en acheter dans des magasins ou en hôtel des ventes. Il peut de détails sur les cours .. et ses livres à la bibliothèque. J'adore le faîte qu'ils comprennent vite des choses mais on sait pas ce qu'il apprend. J'adore qu'il soit un écrivain. Bref, super histoire qui m'a accroché et plonger dedans bravo ! Merci pour ton travail acharné.
Story and plot are great. There are some really cringey moments in the series but I like how these moments are self aware and fun to read. . . . . . . . . . Need more cat moments though ;3
i am in love with this novel it starts somewhat anoying but getting better at each chapter.. keep it up author!
i like this one qnd i bought all chapters and tge privilege chapters. enough said.
It starts well, but then the harem kicks in. Everything went downhill after that. Mc started to act cringey and flirty. His teacher came and kiss him on the cheek in front of everyone in the class and Mc did some cringey stuff too. I tried to put up with it a couple chapters more, but the cringey stuff was always the same, so I dropped it.
overall story and plot is great , it matches the vibe I was searching for in extra novels keep up the good work !!!
wonderful story, can see it's going in the right direction and something good is planned out for the end! I hope you keep this on and don't give up! keep writing, my best wishes ![img=Loving it]
Personally, there's still not enough chapters to be able to give a proper rate but at least i love the characters, they are truly well developed. I'm waiting impatiently for the data there are at least 300 chapters. I hope you wont drop this novel, it's a really good one !
Hey author,this is the best book in have read in a few days. The story is amazing and how the characters are well described. But author-kun I just have a small question. I want to know is this story will have godd or sad ending because raven get so bored easily and when he become the strongest he will get bored too. And he can sacrifice himself because he got bored or die of his old age because he doesn't want to extend his lifespan because he got bored. I just wanna say don't let him die or get bored. So just wanna know. btw very good novel.
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This novel is amazing. writing quality is good, story is good, the characters are well written. overall it's very enjoyable and fun to read. good work author
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keep up the good work man your story is both Funny and interesting enough to keep readers entertained. Thankyou for presenting such a good work😌👍
this novel is really good 👍 specially mc is bold and smart and I like his character. His being a clean freak is really spectacular idea as it makes the novel more realistic and interesting. As of now I love this novel except for few illogical things like he fought and survived an A+ spirit, otherwise everything is really good and I like the way romance goes. Anyways thanks to the author for hard work I am waiting for more chapters.
cons:- some higer being creating universe with just snap of finger............................ system having his own will and cursing mc and mc whining................... higer being making m=our mc suffer for entertainment.................. mc being over kind who feel guilty for every single thing that is not his fault (may be he should adapt to this world quickly)...... pros:- story is good , world building is good , characters are okey
Mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm... Mmmmmmmm.... Mmm. Mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm. Mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm. Mmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
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until chapter 50 the novel was really good but from 50 onwards it became a little boring and after 80 chaps the writing quality went really bad,bro I suggest take a rest for sometime cause the novel is really good but these 30 40 latest chaps are quite boring and look to forced and the main thing is mc isn't growing at all plz make it so atleast grows faster most people like it that way
Everyone thanks for the support! Expect thay I will try my best to make the story even better. Also, if you have any thought about my work, just comment it! I honestly enjoy and feel happy reading other's comment to my novel! And please if you can, I would really appreciate if you leave a honest review about my work. ⊂(￣(ｴ)￣)⊃
author please come back!!! 😭😭😭 and continue this novel, I really like this novel, its' different to the other novel i been read so far and this story is pretty interesting and so so good !!! so please come back 😭 😭 😭
farewell I guess will come from time to time if author somehow returns story was awesome but well what a pity
PLEASE UPDATE😭😭😭PLEASE UPDATE😭😭😭PLEASE UPDATE😭😭😭PLEASE UPDATE😭😭😭PLEASE UPDATE😭😭😭PLEASE UPDATE😭😭😭PLEASE UPDATE😭😭😭PLEASE UPDATE😭😭😭PLEASE UPDATE😭😭😭PLEASE UPDATE😭😭😭
I really like you're novel especially you are a beginner.. .hope you make more novel I'm here to support 💗💗
this review is sponsored by grammarly, try it out its free. it helps you with spelling, punctuations and more!grammarly please give me money please please please please please, also eve best girl
Why do some of the authors from the Philippines that I follow always update their stories late or even take a long time to update? It's different, most authors from India are diligent, some even admit they're late but actually they always update their stories every day.
Is this on hiatus? It was fun to read but ic ouldnt help but notice its been 2 months since last update
author where the heck are you ??! are you even alive ! please come back for god's sake !
Au début j'étais mitigé mais j'aime bien la personnalité du mc et sa façon d'être. L'harem j'aime rarement pourtant ça ce construit bien avec la personnalité du mc. L'histoire est super bien ! Les points de vue qui varie sont super bien placé, à un point que c'est parfait ! J'aime le système, j'aime sa reincarnation que sa personnalité soit pas endommagé. J'aime sa façon de faire les choses. Il manque quelques choses pour que sa soit parfait. C'est la tram du fond de l'histoire : on a eu petit détail sur la planète mais pas grand choses, ni sur les technologies, les villes, les races(il devrait avoir au moins des demi-race dans le domaine humain). Peu de détails sur l'environnement.. Même si grâce à cela l'histoire avance assez vite, cela manque. Ses projets aussi sur ses investissements manques.. j'ai bien aimé voir son compte bancaire, j'aimerais le revoir souvent ! J'aimerais aussi voir ses achats de temps en temps. J'aime qu'il n'y a pas de grade sur les artefacts, j'espère aussi qu'il va en acheter dans des magasins ou en hôtel des ventes. Il peut de détails sur les cours .. et ses livres à la bibliothèque. J'adore le faîte qu'ils comprennent vite des choses mais on sait pas ce qu'il apprend. J'adore qu'il soit un écrivain. Bref, super histoire qui m'a accroché et plonger dedans bravo ! Merci pour ton travail acharné.
Story and plot are great. There are some really cringey moments in the series but I like how these moments are self aware and fun to read. . . . . . . . . . Need more cat moments though ;3
i am in love with this novel it starts somewhat anoying but getting better at each chapter.. keep it up author!
i like this one qnd i bought all chapters and tge privilege chapters. enough said.
It starts well, but then the harem kicks in. Everything went downhill after that. Mc started to act cringey and flirty. His teacher came and kiss him on the cheek in front of everyone in the class and Mc did some cringey stuff too. I tried to put up with it a couple chapters more, but the cringey stuff was always the same, so I dropped it.
overall story and plot is great , it matches the vibe I was searching for in extra novels keep up the good work !!!
wonderful story, can see it's going in the right direction and something good is planned out for the end! I hope you keep this on and don't give up! keep writing, my best wishes ![img=Loving it]
Personally, there's still not enough chapters to be able to give a proper rate but at least i love the characters, they are truly well developed. I'm waiting impatiently for the data there are at least 300 chapters. I hope you wont drop this novel, it's a really good one !
Hey author,this is the best book in have read in a few days. The story is amazing and how the characters are well described. But author-kun I just have a small question. I want to know is this story will have godd or sad ending because raven get so bored easily and when he become the strongest he will get bored too. And he can sacrifice himself because he got bored or die of his old age because he doesn't want to extend his lifespan because he got bored. I just wanna say don't let him die or get bored. So just wanna know. btw very good novel.
揭示劇透 This novel is amazing. writing quality is good, story is good, the characters are well written. overall it's very enjoyable and fun to read. good work author
揭示劇透 keep up the good work man your story is both Funny and interesting enough to keep readers entertained. Thankyou for presenting such a good work😌👍
this novel is really good 👍 specially mc is bold and smart and I like his character. His being a clean freak is really spectacular idea as it makes the novel more realistic and interesting. As of now I love this novel except for few illogical things like he fought and survived an A+ spirit, otherwise everything is really good and I like the way romance goes. Anyways thanks to the author for hard work I am waiting for more chapters.
cons:- some higer being creating universe with just snap of finger............................ system having his own will and cursing mc and mc whining................... higer being making m=our mc suffer for entertainment.................. mc being over kind who feel guilty for every single thing that is not his fault (may be he should adapt to this world quickly)...... pros:- story is good , world building is good , characters are okey
Mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm... Mmmmmmmm.... Mmm. Mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm. Mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm. Mmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
揭示劇透 until chapter 50 the novel was really good but from 50 onwards it became a little boring and after 80 chaps the writing quality went really bad,bro I suggest take a rest for sometime cause the novel is really good but these 30 40 latest chaps are quite boring and look to forced and the main thing is mc isn't growing at all plz make it so atleast grows faster most people like it that way
Everyone thanks for the support! Expect thay I will try my best to make the story even better. Also, if you have any thought about my work, just comment it! I honestly enjoy and feel happy reading other's comment to my novel! And please if you can, I would really appreciate if you leave a honest review about my work. ⊂(￣(ｴ)￣)⊃