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it is very enjoyable with good characters, i just wish it would update. I think about this story often.i hope the author didn't drop it.
people just exist so MC can bed them. They have no personality, typical harem npc. and the story stop moving with "pick up girl" chapters in a row. else lts decent.
a ripoff of an already good completely translated novel. The novel I'm talking about is inspired by TNE, which the author acknowledged from the beginning. and it turned to be better than TNE. This novel, is just a sad attempt to recreate that.
It's good. most of the (extra) type novel mc Doesn't have background but in this novel like real extra type mc nor have high backer or nor have weak backer. More like medium backer that's good. And the story is also good. It's flow smoothly and the Foundation is also good. Overall I like it.But please reales it soon possible if you can.
Great story, five stars! I like the Harem tag, and it's appropriate and doesn't overwhelm the work. The characters are lively and the main hero grows and is interesting. Looking forward to updates) I definitely fell in love with this story.
good story, i like it mc op. i like it great pacing, i like it everything else? i like it awdawdawdawdawdawdawdawdawdawdawdawdawdawdawdawdawdawdaw
I read 11 chapters. The problem I see with the novel isn't just the typos but the pointless {Raven's POV}. A {name POV} is nice if it indicates a change in pov but the author just adds it in for no reason. It almost seems like an insult towards the readers.
Reasons to read this novel: 1. Mc is smooth and an absolute chad. 2. Good development and plot. 3. Mc is smart af. 4. The writing quality is good. *** the only things that i'm a little bit confused is... 1. How in the world is he talentlees if his parents have a monstrous stats... 2. Harem. However i trust the author that he won't be making mistakes like the other authors of this platform... That is all, and if the author is reading this then i have a message for you: Stay well and make sure to have a proper rest. This novel is good and have a lot of potential, I'm honestly a bit baffled why this novel isn't in the top list. But i have faith that you could make it there. Stay safe brother and Have a nice Christmas. -Ugly_Fox : Reviewed @Chapter 65...December 20, 2022
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it's so gooood!! i want more!! author where's the new chapter it's been 15 days I'm going crazy!!!! jokes aside, do you author have updating schedule or do you like update on your free time ohh and I'm not pressuring you to make new chapter so just take your time 😉
Its a good work.Character development is good and the multiple povs shows different perspectives. Keep Up The good work ♥️
So many reviews here that I can't even find mine, if I did wrote one... anyways this is a good novel, and seeing as how it has 70+ reviews you could have noticed it's pretty good. The characters, story, writing, and everything is great! especially the characters. There are twists and turns, reveals and things like that but also the spice. I would write more bit im feeling tired so I guess only 400 words
This novel has a curse! after you read it, you can't stop liking it. And because of the update delay you will try to find a novel similar to this. Once you find it and read it you will find yourself comparing them to this novel because this novel has it's own uniqueness that the other novel don't have and that uniqueness are the MC's mindset and Protagonist, heroines's Character development and good plot that is to your liking that you want to find in other novel. Once you can't find it, you'll go back to this novel and then find it still don't have new chapter it's irritating but I still recommended it for new readers. This is my honest review and i really like this novel. If I'm not broke now, i will buy the privilege hahaha
why is update getting delayed this week. plz can you update more regularly author. fans are waiting for new chapters.
I should have made a review when I first saw this hidden gem but I was to entranced by the beauty of this story! An MC that won't follow the son of fate like a lost puppy and would give up his chances of power to the fated one, I love it! Raven is by far my most favorite character out of all the transmigrated/reincarnated Author Extra's. I'm sick and tired of MC's like Ren Dover or Kim Hajin always protecting the child of prophecy, like they're heroes!! They can protect themselves, due to hiding their power, they even allow teachers, students, basically everyone to mock and insult them because they are "weak", even 6 months of suffering didn't change Ren and that's sad, worry about yourself first, like a powerful and wise warrior once said, "Close your heart to their desperation, close your heart to their suffering, do not allow yourself to feel for them, they will not feel for you."
I'm truly glad a friend recommended this to me!! This is better compared to that boot-licking, azzkissing Ren Dover or other 99% similar MC's (extra), always hiding their potential, always helping the shetty chosen one in the shadows, allowing themselves to be insulted by everyone, teachers students, heroines, everyone!! Finally, an MC (extra) that doesn't babysit the protagonist?!? What a dream come true!! He feels similar to Gu Changge and Mr. Pet Shop and I love it!!
Minha primeira resenha. Eu ja tinha visto um manga coreano com a mesma premissa o autor vai parar no corpo de um figurante na sua novel . mais e ai que as diferenças começa a aparecer esse não e o tipico mc que esconde sua força deixa os figurante fazerem bully com ele sem reagir esse mc não esconde sua força e humilha os figurante não e um beta japonês escravo de mulher alem de ser muito inteligente e manipulador você não ficara desapontado com ele . No começo fiquei um pouco desapontado por ele escolher uma arma de fogo para usar mais não desanimen por causa dissso a arma principal do mc e uma espada . E uma otima novel para ler e a primeira novel do autor e ele mostrou que tem talento e evolui a cada capítulo melhorando a qualidade da novel. Se traduzirem esse comentário de uma chance com certeza vale a pena ler essa novel.
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I like the story though there are some grammatical mistakes (I don't know how to write a review)
This is one of those few system novels where the MC has a good sense of humour and didn't turn into the best being in the world solely because of the system. I'm not really a harem fan nonetheless, I liked the pace work of this. No forced scenes that seems so unbelievable and everything was allowed to develop organically. I'm not great at writing action scenes myself but I enjoyed reading yours, they were properly grafted and not too complicated so it was easy to imagine everything as quickly as they happened. Keep it up author, your book is really good!
i only read the first 5 chapters so my review may not be too accurate for future development. Overall, i think this novel is good with the battle phase, there is explanation so you won't feel lost and mc from weak to strong. Though, a criticism i have is the way the explanations are given. I don't know how to explain it in detail but its like the info is given too straightforwardly and it would be better to be more subtle. And the theme looks a bit too similar to the novel's extra with the mc using a gun though maybe the story will be completely different later. I hope that the fact that there are 'higher-existences' and 'transcendents' will later play a role in the story. i think it will be a good read for newcomers.
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Awesome i really like the mc's personality. And even if its a harem the situation is not forced not like some harem novels. I can't get enough of it so i will rate it 5 star.
bro liked the story, good work bro ..........................................................
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Amazing novel. I really like the relationship between the System/Sariel and Raven. It is also interesting to see his progress and to see him catching up to Alec. Another aspect I like is his unidentified power, which we do not know about, because the Higher Beings want him to find out about these himself. There is also Ravens personality which I really like and how he and his family have the motto "Be neutral. Be good to those who are good, and be evil to those who are evil." To conclude, I really like you novel and I hope you are going to continue writing.
i like the story ................................................................................................................................
Great work, although plot is pretty common, the unique storyline and characters make up for it. Looking forward to faster releases. Thanks for your efforts, keep up the effort. [img=recommend]
did author drop it ? I liked this novel I hope author will come back with new updates
it is very enjoyable with good characters, i just wish it would update. I think about this story often.i hope the author didn't drop it.
people just exist so MC can bed them. They have no personality, typical harem npc. and the story stop moving with "pick up girl" chapters in a row. else lts decent.
a ripoff of an already good completely translated novel. The novel I'm talking about is inspired by TNE, which the author acknowledged from the beginning. and it turned to be better than TNE. This novel, is just a sad attempt to recreate that.
It's good. most of the (extra) type novel mc Doesn't have background but in this novel like real extra type mc nor have high backer or nor have weak backer. More like medium backer that's good. And the story is also good. It's flow smoothly and the Foundation is also good. Overall I like it.But please reales it soon possible if you can.
Great story, five stars! I like the Harem tag, and it's appropriate and doesn't overwhelm the work. The characters are lively and the main hero grows and is interesting. Looking forward to updates) I definitely fell in love with this story.
good story, i like it mc op. i like it great pacing, i like it everything else? i like it awdawdawdawdawdawdawdawdawdawdawdawdawdawdawdawdawdawdaw
I read 11 chapters. The problem I see with the novel isn't just the typos but the pointless {Raven's POV}. A {name POV} is nice if it indicates a change in pov but the author just adds it in for no reason. It almost seems like an insult towards the readers.
Reasons to read this novel: 1. Mc is smooth and an absolute chad. 2. Good development and plot. 3. Mc is smart af. 4. The writing quality is good. *** the only things that i'm a little bit confused is... 1. How in the world is he talentlees if his parents have a monstrous stats... 2. Harem. However i trust the author that he won't be making mistakes like the other authors of this platform... That is all, and if the author is reading this then i have a message for you: Stay well and make sure to have a proper rest. This novel is good and have a lot of potential, I'm honestly a bit baffled why this novel isn't in the top list. But i have faith that you could make it there. Stay safe brother and Have a nice Christmas. -Ugly_Fox : Reviewed @Chapter 65...December 20, 2022
揭示劇透 it's so gooood!! i want more!! author where's the new chapter it's been 15 days I'm going crazy!!!! jokes aside, do you author have updating schedule or do you like update on your free time ohh and I'm not pressuring you to make new chapter so just take your time 😉
Its a good work.Character development is good and the multiple povs shows different perspectives. Keep Up The good work ♥️
So many reviews here that I can't even find mine, if I did wrote one... anyways this is a good novel, and seeing as how it has 70+ reviews you could have noticed it's pretty good. The characters, story, writing, and everything is great! especially the characters. There are twists and turns, reveals and things like that but also the spice. I would write more bit im feeling tired so I guess only 400 words
This novel has a curse! after you read it, you can't stop liking it. And because of the update delay you will try to find a novel similar to this. Once you find it and read it you will find yourself comparing them to this novel because this novel has it's own uniqueness that the other novel don't have and that uniqueness are the MC's mindset and Protagonist, heroines's Character development and good plot that is to your liking that you want to find in other novel. Once you can't find it, you'll go back to this novel and then find it still don't have new chapter it's irritating but I still recommended it for new readers. This is my honest review and i really like this novel. If I'm not broke now, i will buy the privilege hahaha
why is update getting delayed this week. plz can you update more regularly author. fans are waiting for new chapters.
I should have made a review when I first saw this hidden gem but I was to entranced by the beauty of this story! An MC that won't follow the son of fate like a lost puppy and would give up his chances of power to the fated one, I love it! Raven is by far my most favorite character out of all the transmigrated/reincarnated Author Extra's. I'm sick and tired of MC's like Ren Dover or Kim Hajin always protecting the child of prophecy, like they're heroes!! They can protect themselves, due to hiding their power, they even allow teachers, students, basically everyone to mock and insult them because they are "weak", even 6 months of suffering didn't change Ren and that's sad, worry about yourself first, like a powerful and wise warrior once said, "Close your heart to their desperation, close your heart to their suffering, do not allow yourself to feel for them, they will not feel for you."
I'm truly glad a friend recommended this to me!! This is better compared to that boot-licking, azzkissing Ren Dover or other 99% similar MC's (extra), always hiding their potential, always helping the shetty chosen one in the shadows, allowing themselves to be insulted by everyone, teachers students, heroines, everyone!! Finally, an MC (extra) that doesn't babysit the protagonist?!? What a dream come true!! He feels similar to Gu Changge and Mr. Pet Shop and I love it!!
Minha primeira resenha. Eu ja tinha visto um manga coreano com a mesma premissa o autor vai parar no corpo de um figurante na sua novel . mais e ai que as diferenças começa a aparecer esse não e o tipico mc que esconde sua força deixa os figurante fazerem bully com ele sem reagir esse mc não esconde sua força e humilha os figurante não e um beta japonês escravo de mulher alem de ser muito inteligente e manipulador você não ficara desapontado com ele . No começo fiquei um pouco desapontado por ele escolher uma arma de fogo para usar mais não desanimen por causa dissso a arma principal do mc e uma espada . E uma otima novel para ler e a primeira novel do autor e ele mostrou que tem talento e evolui a cada capítulo melhorando a qualidade da novel. Se traduzirem esse comentário de uma chance com certeza vale a pena ler essa novel.
揭示劇透 I like the story though there are some grammatical mistakes (I don't know how to write a review)
This is one of those few system novels where the MC has a good sense of humour and didn't turn into the best being in the world solely because of the system. I'm not really a harem fan nonetheless, I liked the pace work of this. No forced scenes that seems so unbelievable and everything was allowed to develop organically. I'm not great at writing action scenes myself but I enjoyed reading yours, they were properly grafted and not too complicated so it was easy to imagine everything as quickly as they happened. Keep it up author, your book is really good!
i only read the first 5 chapters so my review may not be too accurate for future development. Overall, i think this novel is good with the battle phase, there is explanation so you won't feel lost and mc from weak to strong. Though, a criticism i have is the way the explanations are given. I don't know how to explain it in detail but its like the info is given too straightforwardly and it would be better to be more subtle. And the theme looks a bit too similar to the novel's extra with the mc using a gun though maybe the story will be completely different later. I hope that the fact that there are 'higher-existences' and 'transcendents' will later play a role in the story. i think it will be a good read for newcomers.
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Awesome i really like the mc's personality. And even if its a harem the situation is not forced not like some harem novels. I can't get enough of it so i will rate it 5 star.
bro liked the story, good work bro ..........................................................
How is the romance in this light novel story essential information for me …………………………………………… How is the romance in this light novel story essential information for me ……………………………………………
Amazing novel. I really like the relationship between the System/Sariel and Raven. It is also interesting to see his progress and to see him catching up to Alec. Another aspect I like is his unidentified power, which we do not know about, because the Higher Beings want him to find out about these himself. There is also Ravens personality which I really like and how he and his family have the motto "Be neutral. Be good to those who are good, and be evil to those who are evil." To conclude, I really like you novel and I hope you are going to continue writing.
i like the story ................................................................................................................................
Great work, although plot is pretty common, the unique storyline and characters make up for it. Looking forward to faster releases. Thanks for your efforts, keep up the effort. [img=recommend]
did author drop it ? I liked this novel I hope author will come back with new updates