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Fri123 can you come back or drop a new discord link. I love this novel. hopefully it has 2 chapters a day like shadow slave. Overall I love the mc and the romances so far.
Awesome novel!! I especially loved the fact that the mc is not babysitting the plot like what is usual in these types of novel.
I love mc that he didn't change much after learning future. I hope he torture luke and his subordinates before killing them. Will there be 1lover and 2,3 lovers for mc?
read 10 chapters so far and am loving this novel. super unique premise and mc that doesn't make me want to pull my hair out with how stupid he is. my only critique would be mainly the grammar which i suggest that you use grammarly.
5 star cause broo,your summary.The way you described it is soo interesting and pulling
I like how the story is steadily developing, the mc is smart ruthless and has more qualities left to be explored, i hope that you'll focus more on world building cause that what will make your novel shine more Shokran,
Ah, I am also a bit curious as to why he cares about humanity, to be honest. He genuinely seems more like a person who could care less about everyone except his loyal subordinates. His mindset is absolutely cold and ensures that almost no sentimentality clouds his thoughts so it's really confusing. It just brings up the question of why does he care about humanity? That goal in itself does not align with the mc personality. At least to me.
It's a very good and I absolutely love this one. The story is good and mc is not op from the start. The downside is only the novel does not have many chapters. I hope this novel reaches others. All the best author
this is the novel ive been looking for mc is cold blooded,but u see why he is like that, mc has personality which u rarely see,love ths novel,imma now pile up chapters
amazing development with steady pace and smart male lead that is desicive and ruthless and also overpowered
this is just perfect novel I would even say its compared to heavenly destined villain and even better ....................................................
ok so i usually don't write reviews but here goes nothing, quality: to be honest its kind of lacking, story doesn't have a natural flow, but its is steadily improving. no prob in updates. development: mc is showing some growth ,character's are well defined . world background has the most potential to develop.
the only bad thing is that it made me addicted to reading this story, I need more. moreeeeeee.I also hope that the author follows his story, that he doesn't get too influenced by his readers about the plot, some follow the demands and ruin the novel, I think it has a lot of potential as well as one of the best novels of this type
one word "Awesome" this book is engaging exciting and most of all unpredictable. never in my reading years have I found the pinnacle Mc the best in all aspects, and you sir did it. Good job truly wonderful.
Very good overall. only thing that annoy me are the editor/author note in the middle of a chapter. it break the immersion, it could be nice yo either put it at the end.
its actually good with something different from typical story... here a modern earth famous scientist was in process of transmigration to the world which he read in mystyrious book by a mysterious man but instead his soul was devoured by that villain and our mc got the knowledge of that scientist from modern earth.when mc saw how peaceful earth was he also wanted that peaceful life because from birth his life was tragic although he have power but he didn't get any love and peace his whole life.
The novel is very good, but the chapters are very short and the number of sharing is low, I recommend you to increase them ..................
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It's a good novel. MC development is stable (unlike other where MC is op). Also if you can create auxiliary chapter to introduce all characters. Good luck.
Underrated Only drawback is the world is not thoroughly explained author should explain about world power holders before rather than every chapter I am only stating my opinion Though i like it 🙂🙂.
This is such a underrated and a hidden gem man...I hope in the near future it will get the recognition it needed to soar to the ranking. Its kinda slow at the start but it get better and better in my opinion that is...
One of my favourite novel. It is one of those rare gems in webnovel with a cold, ruthless, fearless and op protagonist 😎😎. The story development and character design is one of the best, if not the best. A must read novel
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author i think the novel have a good story , but there is a big problem , i feel like iam reading events with no connection , iam not a writer nor an expert reader ., but when iam reading the chapter i feel something wrong as if someone is forcing the events to form a novel
love it.. the novel has a feel of a mysterious mc whose past is unknown, strong enough to force his way around and a clever mc
I believe this one to be one of the few good novels on this site , the plot is interesting enough , i don't even remember when was the last time i saw a MC who tries to protect humanity instead of aspiring for equality and peace between all species and races , the only things that are somewhat anoying are the misunderstanding that happen from time to time since some are a bit forced in my opinion. The world building is good , not overwhelming detailed or dense , and i am yet so see some major plotholes
it's a great novel the interaction between character does not feel like it's not real the main character is ruthless and will do anything to achieve his goal of saving humanity if you haven't started reading it yet then you are missing a gem read it
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I wish the chapters were longer but this is an overall good story. I like the premise and the fact that the MC is not afraid to get his hands dirty. One thing I don't like is how the feelings of the previous owner of the body are inherited by the current MC, so it makes him feel certain emotions whenever he looks at certain heroines. I wish he only inherited the memories, so it would make it so he doesn't love certain heroines, but that's just me.
So the plot itself is kind of unique in a way with the whole yassine getting absorbed instead of absorbing and I like that. I don’t know much about the update stability since I just Binged read it. One thing I don’t like though is it seems that the mc is still in love with The heroine, kind of a turnoff if I am being honest. World background it seems kind of good though a lot of things remain as mysterious due to “ Ancient history”. Now onto the Mc himself I really think that he satisfies the role of the villain and hope that he remains as that and not start having the soul he mixed affecting him emotionally and all. I don’t really want the mc to care about taking the protagonist chances or anything of the sort. All this novel needs is a good romance and please don’t mess it up, as it save or destroy the story. This is my first time writing a review this long and probably will be a lot of grammar mistakes, I added it to the library so I hope it get updated soon
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Fri123 can you come back or drop a new discord link. I love this novel. hopefully it has 2 chapters a day like shadow slave. Overall I love the mc and the romances so far.
Awesome novel!! I especially loved the fact that the mc is not babysitting the plot like what is usual in these types of novel.
I love mc that he didn't change much after learning future. I hope he torture luke and his subordinates before killing them. Will there be 1lover and 2,3 lovers for mc?
read 10 chapters so far and am loving this novel. super unique premise and mc that doesn't make me want to pull my hair out with how stupid he is. my only critique would be mainly the grammar which i suggest that you use grammarly.
5 star cause broo,your summary.The way you described it is soo interesting and pulling
I like how the story is steadily developing, the mc is smart ruthless and has more qualities left to be explored, i hope that you'll focus more on world building cause that what will make your novel shine more Shokran,
Ah, I am also a bit curious as to why he cares about humanity, to be honest. He genuinely seems more like a person who could care less about everyone except his loyal subordinates. His mindset is absolutely cold and ensures that almost no sentimentality clouds his thoughts so it's really confusing. It just brings up the question of why does he care about humanity? That goal in itself does not align with the mc personality. At least to me.
It's a very good and I absolutely love this one. The story is good and mc is not op from the start. The downside is only the novel does not have many chapters. I hope this novel reaches others. All the best author
this is the novel ive been looking for mc is cold blooded,but u see why he is like that, mc has personality which u rarely see,love ths novel,imma now pile up chapters
amazing development with steady pace and smart male lead that is desicive and ruthless and also overpowered
this is just perfect novel I would even say its compared to heavenly destined villain and even better ....................................................
ok so i usually don't write reviews but here goes nothing, quality: to be honest its kind of lacking, story doesn't have a natural flow, but its is steadily improving. no prob in updates. development: mc is showing some growth ,character's are well defined . world background has the most potential to develop.
the only bad thing is that it made me addicted to reading this story, I need more. moreeeeeee.I also hope that the author follows his story, that he doesn't get too influenced by his readers about the plot, some follow the demands and ruin the novel, I think it has a lot of potential as well as one of the best novels of this type
one word "Awesome" this book is engaging exciting and most of all unpredictable. never in my reading years have I found the pinnacle Mc the best in all aspects, and you sir did it. Good job truly wonderful.
Very good overall. only thing that annoy me are the editor/author note in the middle of a chapter. it break the immersion, it could be nice yo either put it at the end.
its actually good with something different from typical story... here a modern earth famous scientist was in process of transmigration to the world which he read in mystyrious book by a mysterious man but instead his soul was devoured by that villain and our mc got the knowledge of that scientist from modern earth.when mc saw how peaceful earth was he also wanted that peaceful life because from birth his life was tragic although he have power but he didn't get any love and peace his whole life.
The novel is very good, but the chapters are very short and the number of sharing is low, I recommend you to increase them ..................
.................................................................................................................................................
It's a good novel. MC development is stable (unlike other where MC is op). Also if you can create auxiliary chapter to introduce all characters. Good luck.
Underrated Only drawback is the world is not thoroughly explained author should explain about world power holders before rather than every chapter I am only stating my opinion Though i like it 🙂🙂.
This is such a underrated and a hidden gem man...I hope in the near future it will get the recognition it needed to soar to the ranking. Its kinda slow at the start but it get better and better in my opinion that is...
One of my favourite novel. It is one of those rare gems in webnovel with a cold, ruthless, fearless and op protagonist 😎😎. The story development and character design is one of the best, if not the best. A must read novel
I really enjoyed too character's Also Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp ExpExp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp
author i think the novel have a good story , but there is a big problem , i feel like iam reading events with no connection , iam not a writer nor an expert reader ., but when iam reading the chapter i feel something wrong as if someone is forcing the events to form a novel
love it.. the novel has a feel of a mysterious mc whose past is unknown, strong enough to force his way around and a clever mc
I believe this one to be one of the few good novels on this site , the plot is interesting enough , i don't even remember when was the last time i saw a MC who tries to protect humanity instead of aspiring for equality and peace between all species and races , the only things that are somewhat anoying are the misunderstanding that happen from time to time since some are a bit forced in my opinion. The world building is good , not overwhelming detailed or dense , and i am yet so see some major plotholes
it's a great novel the interaction between character does not feel like it's not real the main character is ruthless and will do anything to achieve his goal of saving humanity if you haven't started reading it yet then you are missing a gem read it
揭示劇透 I wish the chapters were longer but this is an overall good story. I like the premise and the fact that the MC is not afraid to get his hands dirty. One thing I don't like is how the feelings of the previous owner of the body are inherited by the current MC, so it makes him feel certain emotions whenever he looks at certain heroines. I wish he only inherited the memories, so it would make it so he doesn't love certain heroines, but that's just me.
So the plot itself is kind of unique in a way with the whole yassine getting absorbed instead of absorbing and I like that. I don’t know much about the update stability since I just Binged read it. One thing I don’t like though is it seems that the mc is still in love with The heroine, kind of a turnoff if I am being honest. World background it seems kind of good though a lot of things remain as mysterious due to “ Ancient history”. Now onto the Mc himself I really think that he satisfies the role of the villain and hope that he remains as that and not start having the soul he mixed affecting him emotionally and all. I don’t really want the mc to care about taking the protagonist chances or anything of the sort. All this novel needs is a good romance and please don’t mess it up, as it save or destroy the story. This is my first time writing a review this long and probably will be a lot of grammar mistakes, I added it to the library so I hope it get updated soon
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