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Alternate novel title should be "Hero disguised as villain side of the story" overused generic "villain" plot lines and mc is a living in a fantasy Dreamland of saving the world. Garbage in other words
I don't like novels where I feel like the MC is like a puppet on strings, and this novel make me feel like the MC is Not in any way in control with his fate.
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author at least tell me why did our mc was cheated on by that girl with his rival (i.e. world's protagonists). I want revenge on that b*t h and protag .
This novel is perfection just wish there was some romance because if there was it would of been 10/10
I feel bad for the new readers that were able to reach the latest chapter. The novel got dropped and the author is missing, no notice or whatever, they just vanish.
I liked the novel a lot. The Mc is ruthless which I prefer. But is this novel dropped? Tell me the author didn't drop it. I am gonna be disappointed.
The update is quite slow. I request the author to update more frequently. And another thing is that MC's double standard personality sometimes he seems to be a ruthless perfect villain but sometimes it’s seems like he is just a below average level MC with an unstable mind.
Love it and no jinx, my type of mc[img=nervous][img=nervous] please lend some wisdom
This novel offers great potential and a compelling read. The story maintains a good pace with consistent character development. While there are a few two-dimensional characters the main character is quite appealing. The magic concept, though slightly unclear, is not overly confusing. However a recurring issue that bothered me was the frequent introduction of mysteries in several chapters, often left unanswered. While a certain level of intrigue is welcome, leaving readers with numerous unresolved questions and swiftly advancing the plot without explanations became frustrating. Additionally, there was an inconsistent shift in the writing tone with some chapters appearing to have been written with AI assistance. Personally I preferred the simpler writing style even if it included occasional grammar mistakes. The world-building needs improvement and the update frequency is somewhat slow.Despite these issues I genuinely enjoy the novel and eagerly await answers to the mysteries.
one of the best novel in existence. I love the development and MC. The only downside is the less chapters per week. [img=coins]
I love the novel but why have you decreased the rate in which u release your chapters just when the plot was unfolding. Ur blue balling me man😨.
I don't knowwhat happened to the honest reviews, I only see 5 stars and 4 stars. Maybe this will get deleted too. For all EVIL MC lovers, this ain't it. The mc isnt't a villain, the tags are misleading. Read the first 25 chapters for you to be assured. I came looking for a villain but the mc is anti-hero at best. I also read one of the author's comments stating that there will be ROMANCE. Most of the evil readers I know won't sit well with this. Be warned the tags are misleading. Once again, we were baited by the tags.
children written as old folks and old as regular. it is annoying to read. otherwise decent novel.
The novel is good. I have seen Al-Fadl 174. Currently, I want to collect many chapters because I know that the upcoming events will not be completed in the current chapters. It was an enjoyable experience, but some of the events had a touch of childishness and immaturity, and I did not like much ambiguity in the events, as questions abound and answers are few. Other than that excellent. Also, I hope that the download will be accelerated and not stopped, and thanks to the author
Nice novel. I learned more than 50 new English words just from reading this. Are you from an aristocratic lineage from England, Author?
You caught my attention from the Synopsis alone.And then the novel itself...very beautiful.But I must advice. The trick with webnovel is a consistent update. in fact, it's a trick at anything...Don't stop no matter what. whether you are encouraged or not. let your tenacity speak for itself.Drop chapters on a daily. Try one if you can't do two. Write a schedule for it.it would be a Shame if u don't grow this to the full potential it has.
Correction to synopsis, not gonna say that all protagonists are bad, but 99 are evil, narcissistic, etc, who wouldn't care if everything died
I can only say "I love this novel" If you're looking for smart and realistic mc who is making decisions without letting his emotion get in his way and a no Harem story then this novel is for you.
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very nice story man, but please author update properly not like this sometimes you do sometimes you not. i am loving your novel, thank you for this gem please it's a request if possible give a very deadly blow to the protagonist(luke) so we can be satisfied life killing Lisa ronal or something
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What happened with the abrupt ending? The story had so much potential, but it was all cut off so quickly.
Alternate novel title should be "Hero disguised as villain side of the story" overused generic "villain" plot lines and mc is a living in a fantasy Dreamland of saving the world. Garbage in other words
I don't like novels where I feel like the MC is like a puppet on strings, and this novel make me feel like the MC is Not in any way in control with his fate.
g gb b b v v g v v v v b b v h h h t h j j n d h bh h g h g hg h g g gyvh h h g v v v v b b b b b b b b b b bb bbb b vh b h b vv vb b b bb nj h h
author at least tell me why did our mc was cheated on by that girl with his rival (i.e. world's protagonists). I want revenge on that b*t h and protag .
This novel is perfection just wish there was some romance because if there was it would of been 10/10
I feel bad for the new readers that were able to reach the latest chapter. The novel got dropped and the author is missing, no notice or whatever, they just vanish.
I liked the novel a lot. The Mc is ruthless which I prefer. But is this novel dropped? Tell me the author didn't drop it. I am gonna be disappointed.
The update is quite slow. I request the author to update more frequently. And another thing is that MC's double standard personality sometimes he seems to be a ruthless perfect villain but sometimes it’s seems like he is just a below average level MC with an unstable mind.
Love it and no jinx, my type of mc[img=nervous][img=nervous] please lend some wisdom
This novel offers great potential and a compelling read. The story maintains a good pace with consistent character development. While there are a few two-dimensional characters the main character is quite appealing. The magic concept, though slightly unclear, is not overly confusing. However a recurring issue that bothered me was the frequent introduction of mysteries in several chapters, often left unanswered. While a certain level of intrigue is welcome, leaving readers with numerous unresolved questions and swiftly advancing the plot without explanations became frustrating. Additionally, there was an inconsistent shift in the writing tone with some chapters appearing to have been written with AI assistance. Personally I preferred the simpler writing style even if it included occasional grammar mistakes. The world-building needs improvement and the update frequency is somewhat slow.Despite these issues I genuinely enjoy the novel and eagerly await answers to the mysteries.
one of the best novel in existence. I love the development and MC. The only downside is the less chapters per week. [img=coins]
I love the novel but why have you decreased the rate in which u release your chapters just when the plot was unfolding. Ur blue balling me man😨.
I don't knowwhat happened to the honest reviews, I only see 5 stars and 4 stars. Maybe this will get deleted too. For all EVIL MC lovers, this ain't it. The mc isnt't a villain, the tags are misleading. Read the first 25 chapters for you to be assured. I came looking for a villain but the mc is anti-hero at best. I also read one of the author's comments stating that there will be ROMANCE. Most of the evil readers I know won't sit well with this. Be warned the tags are misleading. Once again, we were baited by the tags.
children written as old folks and old as regular. it is annoying to read. otherwise decent novel.
The novel is good. I have seen Al-Fadl 174. Currently, I want to collect many chapters because I know that the upcoming events will not be completed in the current chapters. It was an enjoyable experience, but some of the events had a touch of childishness and immaturity, and I did not like much ambiguity in the events, as questions abound and answers are few. Other than that excellent. Also, I hope that the download will be accelerated and not stopped, and thanks to the author
Nice novel. I learned more than 50 new English words just from reading this. Are you from an aristocratic lineage from England, Author?
You caught my attention from the Synopsis alone.And then the novel itself...very beautiful.But I must advice. The trick with webnovel is a consistent update. in fact, it's a trick at anything...Don't stop no matter what. whether you are encouraged or not. let your tenacity speak for itself.Drop chapters on a daily. Try one if you can't do two. Write a schedule for it.it would be a Shame if u don't grow this to the full potential it has.
Correction to synopsis, not gonna say that all protagonists are bad, but 99 are evil, narcissistic, etc, who wouldn't care if everything died
I can only say "I love this novel" If you're looking for smart and realistic mc who is making decisions without letting his emotion get in his way and a no Harem story then this novel is for you.
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very nice story man, but please author update properly not like this sometimes you do sometimes you not. i am loving your novel, thank you for this gem please it's a request if possible give a very deadly blow to the protagonist(luke) so we can be satisfied life killing Lisa ronal or something
揭示劇透 
What happened with the abrupt ending? The story had so much potential, but it was all cut off so quickly.