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I like the simulation and every other thing about this fan fic but few of his actions seems stupid to me.
So the MC is a bit racist but overeall I like the system, though I believe it should be slightly nerfed and the character can use some development. The relationships are unrealistic but for the most part it doesen't really matter. I believe that the plot armor of the MC is a bit to powerful but overall o good novel, hope to see it out of hiatus,
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low quality mtl the story on it self is already bad but the mtl just take to a whole new low
The novel is very wonderful, and I read it on the Chinese site, but it was not free. I tried to search on other Chinese sites, but I did not find the novel on any site for free. But when I found that there was someone publishing the novel here in English, I thought that he would stop at the end of the free chapters, but after a while I was really surprised when I noticed that the publisher had published even more than a hundred chapters. Thank you very much I hope to continue publishing the novel in the near future.^_________^
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Racista de mais.................horrível péssimo racista,racista, racista.................................aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaáaaaáaaaaaaaaaááaadf
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I actually enjoyed the early parts of this fanfic, however, when it started to develop, I realized the MC's true color. A racist, he is a clear racist. He literally says "One of the two things I hate is black skin" Like tf. It was a barely decent fanfic to begin with, but that blew it out of the water. I mean, the grammar and dialogue is plain pathetic. Wouldn't be surprised if someone 'courts death' or spits out blood. Overall, wouldn't recommend.
I like the simulation and every other thing about this fan fic but few of his actions seems stupid to me.
So the MC is a bit racist but overeall I like the system, though I believe it should be slightly nerfed and the character can use some development. The relationships are unrealistic but for the most part it doesen't really matter. I believe that the plot armor of the MC is a bit to powerful but overall o good novel, hope to see it out of hiatus,
you can judge it yourself [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
low quality mtl the story on it self is already bad but the mtl just take to a whole new low
The novel is very wonderful, and I read it on the Chinese site, but it was not free. I tried to search on other Chinese sites, but I did not find the novel on any site for free. But when I found that there was someone publishing the novel here in English, I thought that he would stop at the end of the free chapters, but after a while I was really surprised when I noticed that the publisher had published even more than a hundred chapters. Thank you very much I hope to continue publishing the novel in the near future.^_________^
mc brain not working.mc brain not working.mc brain not working.mc brain not working.mc brain not working.mc brain not working.mc brain not working.mc brain not working.
Racista de mais.................horrível péssimo racista,racista, racista.................................aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaáaaaáaaaaaaaaaááaadf
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I actually enjoyed the early parts of this fanfic, however, when it started to develop, I realized the MC's true color. A racist, he is a clear racist. He literally says "One of the two things I hate is black skin" Like tf. It was a barely decent fanfic to begin with, but that blew it out of the water. I mean, the grammar and dialogue is plain pathetic. Wouldn't be surprised if someone 'courts death' or spits out blood. Overall, wouldn't recommend.
é extremamente triste que essa novel não tenha sido finalizada nem em RaW