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Android huh? I don't know what he can do. but this novel looks interesting
Great story. Please make more regular updates can't wait for the Namek and Frieza saga. MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
A good fanfict story, a unique mc with swaping personalities that gives the story more spice to it, the only complaimt i have is the update speed, at one point i thought the author abandon the story, look what i am trying to say is that the author should update us with a chapter, once a month maybe twice months i would be fine with that speed, the author geets alot of time to do his personal stuff and we get a chapter to entertain ourselves.
seems like an interesting story but the whole multiple personalities thing is more confusing than majin boo, the mc seems like he can only get stronger by absorbing and it's not known if he can train, otherwise it seems the mc is more interested in leaving of the earth, I hope it comes back from time to time, otherwise it is well written.
apart from some mistakes when the characters launch ki attacks from their arms even though they are completely broken and turned at a weird angle and the MC is often caught off guard for no reason, the fic is good.
Shameless Author Review: Hello people of Webnovel. First time Author here trying to find my footing with a DBZ/DBS Fan Fiction. The MC is a transmigrated individual who has his memory sealed. Please give it a while for the story to develop before dropping quick reviews. I always felt that stories should have a sense of mystery and not have everything revealed chapter 1 like most people expect to. Hopefully you enjoy the story and look over some wrong cannon facts as I’m not a expert in the series. Please drop some positive constructive feedback and I’ll review and take it onboard as a learning experience.
Android huh? I don't know what he can do. but this novel looks interesting
Great story. Please make more regular updates can't wait for the Namek and Frieza saga. MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
A good fanfict story, a unique mc with swaping personalities that gives the story more spice to it, the only complaimt i have is the update speed, at one point i thought the author abandon the story, look what i am trying to say is that the author should update us with a chapter, once a month maybe twice months i would be fine with that speed, the author geets alot of time to do his personal stuff and we get a chapter to entertain ourselves.
seems like an interesting story but the whole multiple personalities thing is more confusing than majin boo, the mc seems like he can only get stronger by absorbing and it's not known if he can train, otherwise it seems the mc is more interested in leaving of the earth, I hope it comes back from time to time, otherwise it is well written.
apart from some mistakes when the characters launch ki attacks from their arms even though they are completely broken and turned at a weird angle and the MC is often caught off guard for no reason, the fic is good.
Shameless Author Review: Hello people of Webnovel. First time Author here trying to find my footing with a DBZ/DBS Fan Fiction. The MC is a transmigrated individual who has his memory sealed. Please give it a while for the story to develop before dropping quick reviews. I always felt that stories should have a sense of mystery and not have everything revealed chapter 1 like most people expect to. Hopefully you enjoy the story and look over some wrong cannon facts as I’m not a expert in the series. Please drop some positive constructive feedback and I’ll review and take it onboard as a learning experience.