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Some would say giving 5stars is too much, but I want the rating of this to go up even for just a little. 🥺👍It's not perfect, but it's realistically good, like Uncle is good(wait, that sounded weirdnin my head😅).If you're wondering if you should read this, DO IT, READ THIS, SAVE IT, SHARE IT.
The character development is good, this story is very interesting to read. Good job author. i love your work
this fic is good, but i dislike the MC due to his immature, im currently in chapter 20/21, and hope mc get character development fast since i dont want to read this fic while cringing at the mc lol
Interesting start, this is fun.. some errors here and there but not much, hope the story continue to be interesting and fun as well in the future development 👍
the mcs and other characters are much better than most fanfics. tho it is annoying that fully half the chapters are notices for the readers. does Noone know how to put things in the comments section? or edit chapters with an author note?
This story is better as the Chapters go one... can't wait for the Arcs and the Characters to develop...I recommend it to everyone as it's interesting, addictive, engaging and most of all... 😁FUNNY
Love the story but just tone the slapping. It was funny before but now it is becoming annoying. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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a guy put 1 star without giving his opinion, that's why I put 5 stars, the only thing that is missing is updates but I understand, the author works.
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This Novel is an Amazing work, plenty of funny things to read and laugh with (face slapping)... never get bored of it and expect every single chapter to be even better then the one before👍🏻... so to say... I Love this story and it's giving me many ideas for something I'm writing ✍️... it may be no good... but this story surely is.
This is a great fanfic, the humor and writing is really good. I love the story and the format of the story You're original characters are also great, funny and done really well, I'm truly enjoying this and who cares if you don't get the top spots keep up the hard work because this is a rare gem.. I can't get enough!
No está mal la historia, agradecería un pequeño resumen al inicio de los nuevos capítulos si se alarga la diferencia de tiempo entre capítulos. Tiene un buen fondo y es interesante. No sube muy seguido, pero son capítulos bastante largos
Interesting story has Actual plot instead of just going with original plot of the world! I love it! Would be better with more stable updates.
honestly it's a good fic i like the dynamics between the characters but the problem is that it's a world hopping fanfics and it's taking too long in just a mere harry potter world when the next one is dxd ... the update is too slow plus the author sadly dropped for some time making all the hype cool down
The Fanfiction has a lot of potential and so far i have no issues with it, the author is very nice, welcoming, and open to creative criticism. He is very open to ideas or suggestions that may improve or help the story.
The story is good and I have nothing to complain about when it comes to writing quality I don’t really know much about the update stability but when it comes to character design I still don’t know what the Mc looks like and all the development in the story is doing exactly what the system says the Mc is the system’s slave and every quest is so basic that it gets mind numbing and makes reading more so annoying
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just found this story today and i instantly fell in love with it. cant wait for more chapters For the word count I am the bone of my games Code is my body and AI is my blood I have created over a thousand games Unknown to bad reviews, Nor known to casuals Have withstood GamerGaters to create many games Yet, those hands will never play anything So as I pray, unlimited game works.
Need more blood[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
Writing Qualität is definitely on the better side of things although the author mixes up his/her, him/her quite often it can definitely be rectified by the story and the 2 main protagonists. Can't say much about story development but from what I've seen it's decently enough. Overall its a good past time read.
I love the Fate crossover to harry potter. The story development is pretty good and the pace is also even. The updates are a little slow but the large chapter makes up for it. The story is fanfiction, so most cannon characters are already established, making them a little more consistent with their personalities. The only big downside that I can personally see to certain readers is there are some info dumps scattered around the book. There aren't many but I understand that it will turn some readers away. Otherwise, it's a really good novel! -Hope you keep up the good work!
Writing Quality: It's neither the best nor the worst, it's average. Though I would say that articulation of sentences have improved over the chapters. Hopefully the writing keeps improving. Story Development: Honestly, the author is quite good with the development and planning of the story. I quite enjoy the way the story has developed so far, I hope it will be the same in the future. Character Design: Not chuuni enough 🤣 (that's not a complaint btw) Updating Stability: Probably the only weak point on why this fanfic is not popular enough. If it updated more regularly, I am sure this would be high on rankings. World Background: Masterfully done, there are some mysteries that haven't been solved but I feel that it's better that way.
Some would say giving 5stars is too much, but I want the rating of this to go up even for just a little. 🥺👍It's not perfect, but it's realistically good, like Uncle is good(wait, that sounded weirdnin my head😅).If you're wondering if you should read this, DO IT, READ THIS, SAVE IT, SHARE IT.
The character development is good, this story is very interesting to read. Good job author. i love your work
this fic is good, but i dislike the MC due to his immature, im currently in chapter 20/21, and hope mc get character development fast since i dont want to read this fic while cringing at the mc lol
Interesting start, this is fun.. some errors here and there but not much, hope the story continue to be interesting and fun as well in the future development 👍
the mcs and other characters are much better than most fanfics. tho it is annoying that fully half the chapters are notices for the readers. does Noone know how to put things in the comments section? or edit chapters with an author note?
This story is better as the Chapters go one... can't wait for the Arcs and the Characters to develop...I recommend it to everyone as it's interesting, addictive, engaging and most of all... 😁FUNNY
Love the story but just tone the slapping. It was funny before but now it is becoming annoying. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
揭示劇透 a guy put 1 star without giving his opinion, that's why I put 5 stars, the only thing that is missing is updates but I understand, the author works.
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This Novel is an Amazing work, plenty of funny things to read and laugh with (face slapping)... never get bored of it and expect every single chapter to be even better then the one before👍🏻... so to say... I Love this story and it's giving me many ideas for something I'm writing ✍️... it may be no good... but this story surely is.
This is a great fanfic, the humor and writing is really good. I love the story and the format of the story You're original characters are also great, funny and done really well, I'm truly enjoying this and who cares if you don't get the top spots keep up the hard work because this is a rare gem.. I can't get enough!
No está mal la historia, agradecería un pequeño resumen al inicio de los nuevos capítulos si se alarga la diferencia de tiempo entre capítulos. Tiene un buen fondo y es interesante. No sube muy seguido, pero son capítulos bastante largos
Interesting story has Actual plot instead of just going with original plot of the world! I love it! Would be better with more stable updates.
honestly it's a good fic i like the dynamics between the characters but the problem is that it's a world hopping fanfics and it's taking too long in just a mere harry potter world when the next one is dxd ... the update is too slow plus the author sadly dropped for some time making all the hype cool down
The Fanfiction has a lot of potential and so far i have no issues with it, the author is very nice, welcoming, and open to creative criticism. He is very open to ideas or suggestions that may improve or help the story.
The story is good and I have nothing to complain about when it comes to writing quality I don’t really know much about the update stability but when it comes to character design I still don’t know what the Mc looks like and all the development in the story is doing exactly what the system says the Mc is the system’s slave and every quest is so basic that it gets mind numbing and makes reading more so annoying
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just found this story today and i instantly fell in love with it. cant wait for more chapters For the word count I am the bone of my games Code is my body and AI is my blood I have created over a thousand games Unknown to bad reviews, Nor known to casuals Have withstood GamerGaters to create many games Yet, those hands will never play anything So as I pray, unlimited game works.
Need more blood[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
Writing Qualität is definitely on the better side of things although the author mixes up his/her, him/her quite often it can definitely be rectified by the story and the 2 main protagonists. Can't say much about story development but from what I've seen it's decently enough. Overall its a good past time read.
I love the Fate crossover to harry potter. The story development is pretty good and the pace is also even. The updates are a little slow but the large chapter makes up for it. The story is fanfiction, so most cannon characters are already established, making them a little more consistent with their personalities. The only big downside that I can personally see to certain readers is there are some info dumps scattered around the book. There aren't many but I understand that it will turn some readers away. Otherwise, it's a really good novel! -Hope you keep up the good work!
Writing Quality: It's neither the best nor the worst, it's average. Though I would say that articulation of sentences have improved over the chapters. Hopefully the writing keeps improving. Story Development: Honestly, the author is quite good with the development and planning of the story. I quite enjoy the way the story has developed so far, I hope it will be the same in the future. Character Design: Not chuuni enough 🤣 (that's not a complaint btw) Updating Stability: Probably the only weak point on why this fanfic is not popular enough. If it updated more regularly, I am sure this would be high on rankings. World Background: Masterfully done, there are some mysteries that haven't been solved but I feel that it's better that way.
........Idk what to write, i like the story