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Hasta el capítulo en que se escribe esta reseña, cap 10, puedo decir que promete muy buen contenido para el futuro. solo espero que conforme avance la historia, el carácter del protagonista siga mejorando. Pdta: Hermione para el harem, por favor.
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It seems to have potential, I liked how the story is progressing, I'll be supporting you in future chapters, as long as you don't let it fall... Thanks for the work
Looking forward to this also need to update faster [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=exp]
Shameless author making a self review as tradition. Well I hope everyone that read this history enjoys it, and if you don't like it that's fine I can't make everyone happy hahaha. If you have constructive criticism please go a head, that will help me a lot to improve my writing skills and make me grow as an author.
Just for ruining plot in a story you deserve this :P but otherwise it is very funny and good read thank you :)
Hasta el capítulo en que se escribe esta reseña, cap 10, puedo decir que promete muy buen contenido para el futuro. solo espero que conforme avance la historia, el carácter del protagonista siga mejorando. Pdta: Hermione para el harem, por favor.
it is good ,go update regularly 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃
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It seems to have potential, I liked how the story is progressing, I'll be supporting you in future chapters, as long as you don't let it fall... Thanks for the work
Looking forward to this also need to update faster [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=exp]
Shameless author making a self review as tradition. Well I hope everyone that read this history enjoys it, and if you don't like it that's fine I can't make everyone happy hahaha. If you have constructive criticism please go a head, that will help me a lot to improve my writing skills and make me grow as an author.
Just for ruining plot in a story you deserve this :P but otherwise it is very funny and good read thank you :)