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mmann I caught up and gotta say it's good man the chapters are satisfying cause it's long🤣 though sometimes its hard to swallow the whole chapter in one sitting because I've gotten used to majority of novels being short. It would be fun to see reactions or POV's of other characters though just a suggestion but it's been a blast reading thanks!
Obviously there’s ntr, but the thing I hated the most was how the mc handled the situation. For those wondering, here is a summary of the ntr: Jean thinks the mc is unfaithful because he doesn’t open his mind to her (he has previous life memories) so while he’s out helping mutants, she starts sleeping with Scott…. Everyone in the xavior mansion knew this but kept quiet. This happens for weeks-months. jean decides it’s time to tell him, and instead of what you would expect, he wipes all the feelings he has for jean from his mind and basically runs away from it entirely. Not one time did he do anything to scott or jean. The only thing close to revenge was when scott cheated on jean with Emma , and she tore his eyes out.… but that’s it. The mc did nothing at all.
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It’s a good realistic look at transmigration. I like that some relationships don’t workout. Although I was hoping for no romance. the author thinks before he writes.
NTR RUN!!!!!!!!!! NTR RUN NTR RUN NTR RUN!!!!!!!!! ........................................................................................
Good work ...........................................................................................................................................................
To the AUTHOR, Hope the MC becomes ANTI-HERO with Strong sense JUSTICE also all his family members with it, But make them act in a balance way of the world in Grey not in Black and White. As it is mix of comics(Earth-616) N movies(MCU). Make his suit mix of black and grey Assassin suit with the mix of Uru, Admantium, Vibranium with defensive runes and magic in Nano-Tech instead of Spandex. Change Mutants into Meta-Humans. MC- Make him a Nigh Immortal with unlimeted potential, Master in Combat Arts(All Martial arts, Weaponary as well as Chi, etc.,), Magic , Runes , Smith/Smithery, Science( Math, Che , Phy, Bio), a brain better than super-computer all in all a master to every thing to level according to author leveling system. Make MC save Earth from Pollution, making the Earth richer in Natural, Chi, Ki/Qi Mana and cosmiic energy and teach people of Tech-Magic(Technomancy), Chi and Many other Arts. Also kindly Bring the Asian Characters as there are Western Characters. Make MC's child be twins a Son and a Daughter-( a DAUGHTER who carries both father and mother powers and DNA also being Genies) but Make MC's SON better than all of them as Jack of all trades and as well a master of all so to say "Perfectum" but make all of them get powers above as it cited in Paragraph. As it an OP comment not make it OP just make it slowly step by step for making MC more OP, his Children's and also a bit of power up to Cap. Marvel as his wife to always remain only below or equal to him. Thanks- Reader!
Many bad review because the MC got betrayed by his gf. But the overall story quality is good, and each chapter has good word count maybe 2k or more.
Its pretty good. People should have some amount of maturity to read this how ever! Don’t let the immature reviewers push you guys away. Honestly. If you read prn and can’t differentiate between this and a NTR story, that’s a shame.
I love it Jhfdutrskhgfkjgdkhgfhgkfkhgkhgsiyrekjgdhkfdjkgckhfdkhgfhkfdvjfxhkgxhkgxjhfdkjgfkjgfhkgsgedjlhcvjfxnhk jhfdjhffhjlchkgdirjigckhgcnlbvjlgfihtfkhockhgc
This a heretic's work, do not take a step further if you haven't read it! i would burn the author at the stake if the times were still like back in the day.
NTR trash NTR trash NTR trash , cuck boi cuck boi, don't read if you don't like NTR trash .NTR trash NTR trash NTR trash , cuck boi cuck boi, don't read if you don't like NTR trash .NTR trash NTR trash NTR trash , cuck boi cuck boi, don't read if you don't like NTR trash
I dont like ntr chapter, but all other was very good, it could be one of the Best Marvel fanfic on webnovel, but civil war arc is too long Hdhdgdgdvdvdvvdhdhdhdhdhdhdbbxbxbdhhdydhdhdbbdbdbdbdbbdbdbdbdbdbdbdbbdbdbd
Romance muito bom, cada vez fica melhor, o autor é muito bom, esperando ansiosamente por mais capitulos. Romance muito bom, cada vez fica melhor, o autor é muito bom, esperando ansiosamente por mais capitulos. Romance muito bom, cada vez fica melhor, o autor é muito bom, esperando ansiosamente por mais capitulos.
Dispite the NTR the story is still good and for anyone who has not read comics NTR happens a lot great book everything from charecters to plot has been great so far can’t wait for the next update
Ótima fanfic ..........................................................................................................................................
MC is ntrd but I can understand cause he looks like this llllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll
why, did u do that Jean part they could have just broken up, and why does MC try shouldering the weight of the world, this fic is not nice
Pretty good, mc is relatable, not a murder hobo or superman. NTR warning. Deals with it like you should irl... I hope he gets a stable relationship even if its just a friendship soon as its getting a bit depressing.
Slowly and with good handwriting¹. This is how I would describe this story if it were like that, it only has good lyrics, really. Well at least the first 9 chapters to be honest. The story seems to move quickly in the first few chapters, but oddly enough, the more you read, it doesn't seem to. Although it is true that after chapter 9 it could be said that the story, now, goes slowly and with good lyrics. The plot is captivating but loose in some places the first 9 chapters, even so, then it completely caught me, really. There's a huge overall improvement to the story, which leaves me wanting more to be honest. In short, it is one of the few FanFiction that I recommend reading and having in your library. That is, doing something slowly/calmly and neatly/orderly results in a better quality product.¹ Atte, by magic.
Factível com a realidade! Gostei..........................................................................................................................
I will join the campaign against NTR writers .....................................................................................................................................................................................................................
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Sorry bruh this is god awful. I tried I really did. It seems fate always laughs at me for wanted a well written superman/super strong character in marvel. They either are written by idiots, or never go past 30k words. Such a letdown it is.
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mmann I caught up and gotta say it's good man the chapters are satisfying cause it's long🤣 though sometimes its hard to swallow the whole chapter in one sitting because I've gotten used to majority of novels being short. It would be fun to see reactions or POV's of other characters though just a suggestion but it's been a blast reading thanks!
Obviously there’s ntr, but the thing I hated the most was how the mc handled the situation. For those wondering, here is a summary of the ntr: Jean thinks the mc is unfaithful because he doesn’t open his mind to her (he has previous life memories) so while he’s out helping mutants, she starts sleeping with Scott…. Everyone in the xavior mansion knew this but kept quiet. This happens for weeks-months. jean decides it’s time to tell him, and instead of what you would expect, he wipes all the feelings he has for jean from his mind and basically runs away from it entirely. Not one time did he do anything to scott or jean. The only thing close to revenge was when scott cheated on jean with Emma , and she tore his eyes out.… but that’s it. The mc did nothing at all.
揭示劇透 It’s a good realistic look at transmigration. I like that some relationships don’t workout. Although I was hoping for no romance. the author thinks before he writes.
NTR RUN!!!!!!!!!! NTR RUN NTR RUN NTR RUN!!!!!!!!! ........................................................................................
Good work ...........................................................................................................................................................
To the AUTHOR, Hope the MC becomes ANTI-HERO with Strong sense JUSTICE also all his family members with it, But make them act in a balance way of the world in Grey not in Black and White. As it is mix of comics(Earth-616) N movies(MCU). Make his suit mix of black and grey Assassin suit with the mix of Uru, Admantium, Vibranium with defensive runes and magic in Nano-Tech instead of Spandex. Change Mutants into Meta-Humans. MC- Make him a Nigh Immortal with unlimeted potential, Master in Combat Arts(All Martial arts, Weaponary as well as Chi, etc.,), Magic , Runes , Smith/Smithery, Science( Math, Che , Phy, Bio), a brain better than super-computer all in all a master to every thing to level according to author leveling system. Make MC save Earth from Pollution, making the Earth richer in Natural, Chi, Ki/Qi Mana and cosmiic energy and teach people of Tech-Magic(Technomancy), Chi and Many other Arts. Also kindly Bring the Asian Characters as there are Western Characters. Make MC's child be twins a Son and a Daughter-( a DAUGHTER who carries both father and mother powers and DNA also being Genies) but Make MC's SON better than all of them as Jack of all trades and as well a master of all so to say "Perfectum" but make all of them get powers above as it cited in Paragraph. As it an OP comment not make it OP just make it slowly step by step for making MC more OP, his Children's and also a bit of power up to Cap. Marvel as his wife to always remain only below or equal to him. Thanks- Reader!
Many bad review because the MC got betrayed by his gf. But the overall story quality is good, and each chapter has good word count maybe 2k or more.
Its pretty good. People should have some amount of maturity to read this how ever! Don’t let the immature reviewers push you guys away. Honestly. If you read prn and can’t differentiate between this and a NTR story, that’s a shame.
I love it Jhfdutrskhgfkjgdkhgfhgkfkhgkhgsiyrekjgdhkfdjkgckhfdkhgfhkfdvjfxhkgxhkgxjhfdkjgfkjgfhkgsgedjlhcvjfxnhk jhfdjhffhjlchkgdirjigckhgcnlbvjlgfihtfkhockhgc
This a heretic's work, do not take a step further if you haven't read it! i would burn the author at the stake if the times were still like back in the day.
NTR trash NTR trash NTR trash , cuck boi cuck boi, don't read if you don't like NTR trash .NTR trash NTR trash NTR trash , cuck boi cuck boi, don't read if you don't like NTR trash .NTR trash NTR trash NTR trash , cuck boi cuck boi, don't read if you don't like NTR trash
I dont like ntr chapter, but all other was very good, it could be one of the Best Marvel fanfic on webnovel, but civil war arc is too long Hdhdgdgdvdvdvvdhdhdhdhdhdhdbbxbxbdhhdydhdhdbbdbdbdbdbbdbdbdbdbdbdbdbbdbdbd
Romance muito bom, cada vez fica melhor, o autor é muito bom, esperando ansiosamente por mais capitulos. Romance muito bom, cada vez fica melhor, o autor é muito bom, esperando ansiosamente por mais capitulos. Romance muito bom, cada vez fica melhor, o autor é muito bom, esperando ansiosamente por mais capitulos.
Dispite the NTR the story is still good and for anyone who has not read comics NTR happens a lot great book everything from charecters to plot has been great so far can’t wait for the next update
Ótima fanfic ..........................................................................................................................................
MC is ntrd but I can understand cause he looks like this llllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll
why, did u do that Jean part they could have just broken up, and why does MC try shouldering the weight of the world, this fic is not nice
Pretty good, mc is relatable, not a murder hobo or superman. NTR warning. Deals with it like you should irl... I hope he gets a stable relationship even if its just a friendship soon as its getting a bit depressing.
Slowly and with good handwriting¹. This is how I would describe this story if it were like that, it only has good lyrics, really. Well at least the first 9 chapters to be honest. The story seems to move quickly in the first few chapters, but oddly enough, the more you read, it doesn't seem to. Although it is true that after chapter 9 it could be said that the story, now, goes slowly and with good lyrics. The plot is captivating but loose in some places the first 9 chapters, even so, then it completely caught me, really. There's a huge overall improvement to the story, which leaves me wanting more to be honest. In short, it is one of the few FanFiction that I recommend reading and having in your library. That is, doing something slowly/calmly and neatly/orderly results in a better quality product.¹ Atte, by magic.
Factível com a realidade! Gostei..........................................................................................................................
I will join the campaign against NTR writers .....................................................................................................................................................................................................................
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Sorry bruh this is god awful. I tried I really did. It seems fate always laughs at me for wanted a well written superman/super strong character in marvel. They either are written by idiots, or never go past 30k words. Such a letdown it is.
It sure is like roller-coaster read, if you want calculative MC then this is your find
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