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Obtain the First Upper Moon Template and reincarnate in the world of Naruto to reach the pinnacle of the sword and rule in the world of Naruto.
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寫檢討I have to recommend this to anyone this fanfic is going super well so far and as long as the author doesn't drop it it's diff gonna be on the trending anyways good luck author
scam don't recommend it . [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
The protagonist is quite op I hope he manages to get the blood of hashirama to get the wood jutsu👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌
The first chapter determined the continuation of the story , this cliché hated by all is stupid,he shouldn't have been born with so many eyes , kokushibo had a human face before , he should have been born with a human face , his energy should not have bothered so much , Kushina was a receptacle of Biju but it is not visible from the outside , he hasn't grown enough to emit that much and would have grown to control it before it was noticed , The hokage would not abandon the child. he's the guy who turned his kid into a demon vessel for the good of the Village , he would have made him a weapon of the Village . In short, the author is not very good at creating a plot worthy of reading, he just took a few things from the existing pile but without improvement
Alas, the author, but this is very bad. The author does not know how to choose the right characters, Kokushibyou and Naruto are just a "brilliant" combination. He has a "Breath of the Moon" style, and it is logical that it should be at least somewhat connected with the Moon, for example, Ootsutsuki Toneri was well suited instead of Naruto.
The chapters are impressive so far I hope you upload more chapters that I will be waiting for them!👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀
The chapters are very good so far I hope more🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳.....................
This novel has a lot of potential I hope you upload the next chapters as soon as possible😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃
This is my first time writing a review but I have to say that the novel is doing very well!! I'll be waiting for the next chapters 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Although the grammar is not so good it is readable and since I loved the novel you dare 5 stars.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
You have been doing well I hope you upload more chapters that I will be reading carefully👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
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