/ Anime & Comics / DORAEMON PARADOX NOBITA
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OLD DESCRIPTION: I was simple normal dude in my past life but now I'm Nobita from Doraemon.
But when I become Nobita I realised what Nobita had to bear on series.
But all this change when Nobita movie plot started.
and I got A Sign- In System.
Follow for more!
To know about my journey into the Doraemon world.
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THIS IS DORAEMON FANFIC BUT WITH TWIST AND ALL.
IT WILL GET ALL KIND OF OLD CARTOON LIKE CHIMPUI AND PERMAN.
BUT THIS IS JUST EXAMPLE AS THERE ARE MORE TO ADD.
ADVENTURE WILL NEVER BE SAME WITH OUR NOBITA CUASE HE GOT BIG MIND AND HE IS OVERPOWERED BY THE SIGN-IN SYSTEM WHICH GIVE HIM ITEM AND SKILLS OF GOD-LEVEL.
I AM NEW AUTHOR AND I WILL TRY TO UPDATE DAILY BUT IM ALSO STUDENT SO MAYBE IT WILL LATE SOMETIME SO SORRY .
AND ENGLIST IS NOT MY FIRST LANGUAGE SO SORRY FOR GRAMMAR MISTAKE.
AND HERION IS NOT FIXED FOR NOW FEEL FREE TO GIVE SUGGESTION OR I WLL MAKE IT HAREM FANFIC.
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I like it please upload more chapters [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
i would say 3 things :- dont neglet other world development and make ch a little bigger make it a slice of life and bring doraemon 2nd DONT MAKE IT A HAREM PLZZZone girl is enough harem are stupid in my opinion 3rd dont make him too op in the start make it a progressful
Novel has some problems in writing quality otherwise its all good so far as I have only read till 11th chapter. Please include all doremon movies in it, and some other cartoon's characters if you want some more content. If you increase conversations in characters and describe a bit more about not only characters but also places and situations it will be more interesting. You can change POV from time to time. Actually keeping 1st person POV all the time brings a bit of bad aftertaste. Other than that good work👍 [27-03-2023]
bro please continue this novel [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
It's super rare to see a doremon fanfic. it is good and all but as you said your a new author so i would suggest that you use this as a draft and rewrite after you gain experience and improve the writing skills and all. also don't mush many things up as in all movies and other things and personally I didn't like the he is part of GP and did enchantment part. the rewrite is only if you want to but consider it. and i think a proficiency system would have been better than a sign in system say something along the lines of his brain damage is healing and slowly maybe a little fast become smart and all.
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I don't know what to say, just that keep posting more. I love it very much👍👍😄
Good Doraemon fanfic for me And if this is harem💗💗💗 then I am gonna continue.... so far story development is good.................👍👍👍👍👍👍
This is the best doraemon fanfiction on webnovel as of now. dont't drop this.[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Please don't drop. this is the first Nobita fanfic of this decade. please don't drop
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- 20 Before the Re-work it was like this. 1 years ago
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- 22 EXTRA CHAPTER AFTER THIS ONE. 1 years ago
- 23 author give away this account 1 years ago
- 24 Reboot 1 1 years ago
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- 27 CHANGING PICTURE OF NOVEL. 1 years ago
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