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I have read till chapter 36 before dropping it cuz it got too boring. It started nice and I really loved how the MC evolved and got stronger slowly over the chapters. However eventually I got annoyed by the evolution system which wasn't explained very well, and it appeared the MC has lost sight of his goal, he started to train his legion monsters instead of getting stronger himself. The writing quality was excellent without any mistakes and the world background was fine as far as I read. The MC personality was also okay so I guess I'll give this a five-star in everything except for the Story Development.
The story is really carried by its genre and worn out tropes. A reincarnated monster mc who can evolve by eating. It’s been done countless times because it works well. That’s where anything good stops. The spelling and grammar are terrible and the quality of writing really is quite poor. Grammar aside it reads like a chat bot or like google translate. Its very awkward to read. It’s full of weird info dumps that bore. The system doesn’t make sense and lacks an intuition. The author introduces things only to forget or change it. It just overall feels like a story written by someone very young / early in their writing. Definitely their first try.
The story starts out normal like every othet novel of this category. But it keeps getting worse. Every chapters is a info dump trash can that gives readers information that would be irrelevant in the next chapter. It has no story progress, the novels has nothing besides useless info and fight scene that feels repetitive and boring af.
It had a good start but when I continued to read it to chapter 149 I got confused with everything, with how he died how the world changed and the system. also what are the uses of the coins except for upgrading skill where did they find the coins. and they are coins but no shop to buy things
Hello Guys I have a question is their another LN where the mc is a zombie in a apocalypse world because I don't find any LN like this
It is has bad grammar, a bad story, no world building and the caracter Design is exceptionally idiotic.
Above average novel at most. It has "I'm a Spider, So What" vibes, but the development of the story feels slightly bland? It's too straightforward, so it became difficult to maintain interest as I kept reading. It's not a bad book, but it can certainly be improved as the author is a bit lazy in his writing style.
One of the best non-human stories out there. The only thing that did bot sit right with me was the rushed ending but apart from that its definitely above average. I recommend
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So so, I guess. After reading several chapter, it didn't build up enough interest in me.
Review at ch40 This is one of the best evolution novels I've read so far The character is very life like and his thought process and reasoning are clear The world background is basically a dungeon with many floors at the moment... there is info on the outside world but mc hasn't gone out yet Already there is some interaction with the outside world I like how the author has shown the potential evolution pathways and the various pros and cons for each possibility Vibes from 'kumo desuka, nani ka?' (the spider evolution manga) Good work author 👍 Keep it up 💪
I did not expect to like this read this much!! Bro really worked hard to level up here, and he didn't just get a cheat that basically did everything for him. He really had to struggle up those levels to be stronger than everyone else. Hope to see more
Not gonna lie, started the story because I was just looking for something to read while i waited for stories to update but now I’m hooked, it’s a good read so far and hopefully it continues
I like these game system, dungen, monster mc, villain mc, evolution genres but to be honest they werent executed well. I am a junky of these genres but even for me after reading 1 volum of the book it was really hard to continue reading it. ı can see thar author trying their best and serms like its their first novel but I am really cant read it. Start was ğretty good even though it was classic starting scnerio. Had a good cheat advantage but after a few chapters, cheat advantages started to pile up. %70 of the chapters wrre mad rof reading mc's growth messages and character panel. Other 20% was just talking about how he was superior now against the monsters and humans even though his lvl was much lower them. The remaining %10 was about bad jokes and a few references to famous manwhas or animes( which was a good twist at the start but then later on it become a bit too much...). I will not get into too much detail for this review but if you like novels with certain baseline seriousness and balanced mc growth systems then this is not a novel for you. At later 40-70 chapters I was power reading the novel by speed scrolling the wrtings like how you read a chünese novrl with 3000 chapters which has many filler words and dialoges so that author can reach his daily word count. Its really sad but this can happen as no one is pro when they start doing something. Getting good takes time. I hope you can achiev a fast growth with this novel and ypur community as an Author. Keep up the hard work 👍
at first the story had way too much potential to be true, I liked the MC abilities and evolution stuff until it became a copy of solo leveling, hear me out, the author had to give MC an ability to rise zombies with the same activation word as solo leveling, similar characters. For me I would have enjoyed it more if instead of becoming a solo leveling copy it focused on MC and after that he started to meet powerful zombies who decided to follow him instead of a necromancer who summons zombies out of thin air. luv to the author <3
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1. I got a dig bick 2. You that read wrong 3. You read that wrong too 4. You checked 5. You smiled 7. You are wandering why you are still reading this 8. You saw that mistake, right? (On 7) 10. But did you see that I skipped 6? 10. You checked 11. And saw you that I doubled 10 and skipped 9 12. I said "saw you" not you saw 13. I also skipped 2 14. You got tricked 15. I'm just wasting your time, but if you were entertained, leave a like and happy reading!
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Bread
Honestly I just saw this and thought why not i just didn't expect to find a top notch novel, like this was unexpected. It's simply an incredible novel and I hope to read more.
Your writing is completely indelible. Unique storyline ,unlike most novels as of recent. naija never carry last 👍🏾 -secret naij brother
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there were often times where the author just forgot about things like the ancestral dragons corpse meat
I have read till chapter 36 before dropping it cuz it got too boring. It started nice and I really loved how the MC evolved and got stronger slowly over the chapters. However eventually I got annoyed by the evolution system which wasn't explained very well, and it appeared the MC has lost sight of his goal, he started to train his legion monsters instead of getting stronger himself. The writing quality was excellent without any mistakes and the world background was fine as far as I read. The MC personality was also okay so I guess I'll give this a five-star in everything except for the Story Development.
The story is really carried by its genre and worn out tropes. A reincarnated monster mc who can evolve by eating. It’s been done countless times because it works well. That’s where anything good stops. The spelling and grammar are terrible and the quality of writing really is quite poor. Grammar aside it reads like a chat bot or like google translate. Its very awkward to read. It’s full of weird info dumps that bore. The system doesn’t make sense and lacks an intuition. The author introduces things only to forget or change it. It just overall feels like a story written by someone very young / early in their writing. Definitely their first try.
The story starts out normal like every othet novel of this category. But it keeps getting worse. Every chapters is a info dump trash can that gives readers information that would be irrelevant in the next chapter. It has no story progress, the novels has nothing besides useless info and fight scene that feels repetitive and boring af.
It had a good start but when I continued to read it to chapter 149 I got confused with everything, with how he died how the world changed and the system. also what are the uses of the coins except for upgrading skill where did they find the coins. and they are coins but no shop to buy things
Hello Guys I have a question is their another LN where the mc is a zombie in a apocalypse world because I don't find any LN like this
It is has bad grammar, a bad story, no world building and the caracter Design is exceptionally idiotic.
Above average novel at most. It has "I'm a Spider, So What" vibes, but the development of the story feels slightly bland? It's too straightforward, so it became difficult to maintain interest as I kept reading. It's not a bad book, but it can certainly be improved as the author is a bit lazy in his writing style.
One of the best non-human stories out there. The only thing that did bot sit right with me was the rushed ending but apart from that its definitely above average. I recommend
Стало скучно после 20 главы!!! История идет слишком медленно !!!дааддадададададдададададададададдададададададдадаадададдададададададдаддадададададдададададад дааддадададададдададададададададдададададададдадаадададдададададададдаддадададададдададададад
So so, I guess. After reading several chapter, it didn't build up enough interest in me.
Review at ch40 This is one of the best evolution novels I've read so far The character is very life like and his thought process and reasoning are clear The world background is basically a dungeon with many floors at the moment... there is info on the outside world but mc hasn't gone out yet Already there is some interaction with the outside world I like how the author has shown the potential evolution pathways and the various pros and cons for each possibility Vibes from 'kumo desuka, nani ka?' (the spider evolution manga) Good work author 👍 Keep it up 💪
I did not expect to like this read this much!! Bro really worked hard to level up here, and he didn't just get a cheat that basically did everything for him. He really had to struggle up those levels to be stronger than everyone else. Hope to see more
Not gonna lie, started the story because I was just looking for something to read while i waited for stories to update but now I’m hooked, it’s a good read so far and hopefully it continues
I like these game system, dungen, monster mc, villain mc, evolution genres but to be honest they werent executed well. I am a junky of these genres but even for me after reading 1 volum of the book it was really hard to continue reading it. ı can see thar author trying their best and serms like its their first novel but I am really cant read it. Start was ğretty good even though it was classic starting scnerio. Had a good cheat advantage but after a few chapters, cheat advantages started to pile up. %70 of the chapters wrre mad rof reading mc's growth messages and character panel. Other 20% was just talking about how he was superior now against the monsters and humans even though his lvl was much lower them. The remaining %10 was about bad jokes and a few references to famous manwhas or animes( which was a good twist at the start but then later on it become a bit too much...). I will not get into too much detail for this review but if you like novels with certain baseline seriousness and balanced mc growth systems then this is not a novel for you. At later 40-70 chapters I was power reading the novel by speed scrolling the wrtings like how you read a chünese novrl with 3000 chapters which has many filler words and dialoges so that author can reach his daily word count. Its really sad but this can happen as no one is pro when they start doing something. Getting good takes time. I hope you can achiev a fast growth with this novel and ypur community as an Author. Keep up the hard work 👍
at first the story had way too much potential to be true, I liked the MC abilities and evolution stuff until it became a copy of solo leveling, hear me out, the author had to give MC an ability to rise zombies with the same activation word as solo leveling, similar characters. For me I would have enjoyed it more if instead of becoming a solo leveling copy it focused on MC and after that he started to meet powerful zombies who decided to follow him instead of a necromancer who summons zombies out of thin air. luv to the author <3
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1. I got a dig bick 2. You that read wrong 3. You read that wrong too 4. You checked 5. You smiled 7. You are wandering why you are still reading this 8. You saw that mistake, right? (On 7) 10. But did you see that I skipped 6? 10. You checked 11. And saw you that I doubled 10 and skipped 9 12. I said "saw you" not you saw 13. I also skipped 2 14. You got tricked 15. I'm just wasting your time, but if you were entertained, leave a like and happy reading!
gimmmee moreeegimmmee moreeegimmmee moreeegimmmee moreeegimmmee moreeegimmmee moreeegimmmee moreeegimmmee moreeegimmmee moreeegimmmee moreeegimmmee moreeegimmmee moreee
nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice
Bread
Honestly I just saw this and thought why not i just didn't expect to find a top notch novel, like this was unexpected. It's simply an incredible novel and I hope to read more.
Your writing is completely indelible. Unique storyline ,unlike most novels as of recent. naija never carry last 👍🏾 -secret naij brother
Exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp
there were often times where the author just forgot about things like the ancestral dragons corpse meat