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Story is intricate and when I first started reading I thought that the character was getting too strong to quickly. But I was wrong. Very wrong. Characters abilities mesh well with the story and how it develops. Still in the beginning of story so haven't seen much world building yet but with authors current work I'm sure I won't be disappointed. We're starting to see the beginning of some character development from being a standard zombie with quirks to remembering when he was human. ex, Doesn't inherently hate humans, doesn't eat brains and so on. Author is putting his own twist to zombies and systems via a chimera like system where the main character can evolve so to speak. Was very impressed with the idea/concept and excited to see where it leads knowing that our MC still desires a companion like that of a spouse/partner so to speak. Current abilities/evolution prevent that from being possible due to current circumstances that's something he doesn't need to worry about though. I'm overall impressed by the authors editing and consistent updates, I only wish I could read more chapters per day. lol 🤣 sorry author I read 480 words a minute so you gotta your work cut out. Keep up the hard work, you've definitely got me as someone who will consistently follow your novel.
Cool premise let down by inconsistent character writing as well as blatant copying of solo levelling characters and traits, decent writing quality let down by trying to be something it’s not.
After the first 10-11 chapters, I was glad that I kept on reading. There’s a good reason as tk why the MC was the way he was at the start, so don’t drop it at the beginning! Aside from the incorrect words used here and there, the writing quality is rather good as well.
pretty good not to much note worthy to say and didn't change anything from most novels like this but still good. the story moves very fast so this one won't be 1000 long read if you got nothing else you should read it.
The only thing i can criticize is that there are sometime spelling mistakes but other than that it seems to be good I feel like there is something the author can improve upon but I cant indentify it so I will just forget it
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Overall beautiful concept. Original feel all the way through with a uniqueness, that is a breath of fresh air. 5 stars all the way through. Excited to see what the future of this story holds.
Nao sei falar ingles, o que posso dizer sobre esse romance e que eu gostei👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Although the idea Is fresh its not new I have seen it only 2 time and the authors of the novels dropped it so I hope you can do better and not drop I also hope you get a bit original in the all the new race names like cursed undead, necrosis undead , blood abomination, and some baddass sounding name( my one sound awful U _ U ) instead of using words like warrior high comander and what not just feels like some mobs In some rpg to collect exp it dosent feels exclusive to the mc and the idea that he can combine two beneficial trait from two eace like the night vision from owls and farsight from eagel wings from doves eco location and from bats and combine them their is a lot of potential but you just focus on zombies who due to constantly being shown as week and pathetic just feels off and its not that zombie are some unique things all undead have the perks for not getting tired hope you rename the novel to something better get past naming the the race of the mc as some weak sounding mob form rpg English is not my native language
good content ........................................................................................................................
Too good. Too good! Too good!!! . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . ...... . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
Although the main character is a zombie, he is too emotional. Such main characters are not interesting and often they always want to return to human life or form, although it would be much more interesting if they were chasing only force
Good Story . . . .. .. . . . .. . . . .. . . .. . . . .. . . .. . .. . . .. . . .. . . .. . . . .. . . .. . . .. . . . .. . . . .. . . .. . . . ..
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Pretty good start but i think the pace was to fast [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
Really enjoying it so far, wish there was a lot more to read, I knocked out the released content in like 30minutes. It’s a fun read with a lot of good points and potential to develop lope
One thing people need to understand is that books with undead MCs are great. Because why not?! Go ahead and read this book, I promise you won't regret reading this piece of art! [img=recommend][img=recommend]
Great book, interesting and very well written. I hope you continue writing it and don't drop it. The story is very unique and I am hooked to see what will happen next. I love the villain mc very much and hope you don't add any romance or harem in the future. That is all I have to say, stay well and keep writing.
Honestly I just saw this and thought why not i just didn't expect to find a top notch novel, like this was unexpected. It's simply an incredible novel and I hope to read more.
Im addicted already, I really like the concept it new and refreshing. I Love the idea of improving the foundations for evolution. Please come out with more chapters soon.
currently at chapter 10. novel looks good. keep up the good work author. . . . . . .
▪︎Writing Quality...............☆☆☆☆☆ ▪︎Story Development........☆☆☆☆☆ ▪︎Character Design...........☆☆☆☆☆ ▪︎Updating Stability..........☆☆☆☆☆ ▪︎World Background.........☆☆☆☆☆
Author here, with a shameless 5star review. Please vote your power stones for this wonderful book, and do leave a review. The story will update every other day, and if you have any questions or complaints, comment. Thanks.
Ok this is just anoying. Too much internal monologues. The experience is useless since we can’t even see what it says just the author telling us “oh it is at 50%”. Fix this Please. It would only take 1min to change it to %. OVERALL THIS CAN BE GREAT BUT THE LITTLE PR ARE PROBLEM ARE BRINGING IT DOWN.
Story is intricate and when I first started reading I thought that the character was getting too strong to quickly. But I was wrong. Very wrong. Characters abilities mesh well with the story and how it develops. Still in the beginning of story so haven't seen much world building yet but with authors current work I'm sure I won't be disappointed. We're starting to see the beginning of some character development from being a standard zombie with quirks to remembering when he was human. ex, Doesn't inherently hate humans, doesn't eat brains and so on. Author is putting his own twist to zombies and systems via a chimera like system where the main character can evolve so to speak. Was very impressed with the idea/concept and excited to see where it leads knowing that our MC still desires a companion like that of a spouse/partner so to speak. Current abilities/evolution prevent that from being possible due to current circumstances that's something he doesn't need to worry about though. I'm overall impressed by the authors editing and consistent updates, I only wish I could read more chapters per day. lol 🤣 sorry author I read 480 words a minute so you gotta your work cut out. Keep up the hard work, you've definitely got me as someone who will consistently follow your novel.
Cool premise let down by inconsistent character writing as well as blatant copying of solo levelling characters and traits, decent writing quality let down by trying to be something it’s not.
After the first 10-11 chapters, I was glad that I kept on reading. There’s a good reason as tk why the MC was the way he was at the start, so don’t drop it at the beginning! Aside from the incorrect words used here and there, the writing quality is rather good as well.
pretty good not to much note worthy to say and didn't change anything from most novels like this but still good. the story moves very fast so this one won't be 1000 long read if you got nothing else you should read it.
The only thing i can criticize is that there are sometime spelling mistakes but other than that it seems to be good I feel like there is something the author can improve upon but I cant indentify it so I will just forget it
Just reading introduction! Just reading introduction Just reading introduction! Just reading introduction Just reading introduction! Just reading introduction Just reading introduction! Just reading introduction
Overall beautiful concept. Original feel all the way through with a uniqueness, that is a breath of fresh air. 5 stars all the way through. Excited to see what the future of this story holds.
Nao sei falar ingles, o que posso dizer sobre esse romance e que eu gostei👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Although the idea Is fresh its not new I have seen it only 2 time and the authors of the novels dropped it so I hope you can do better and not drop I also hope you get a bit original in the all the new race names like cursed undead, necrosis undead , blood abomination, and some baddass sounding name( my one sound awful U _ U ) instead of using words like warrior high comander and what not just feels like some mobs In some rpg to collect exp it dosent feels exclusive to the mc and the idea that he can combine two beneficial trait from two eace like the night vision from owls and farsight from eagel wings from doves eco location and from bats and combine them their is a lot of potential but you just focus on zombies who due to constantly being shown as week and pathetic just feels off and its not that zombie are some unique things all undead have the perks for not getting tired hope you rename the novel to something better get past naming the the race of the mc as some weak sounding mob form rpg English is not my native language
good content ........................................................................................................................
Too good. Too good! Too good!!! . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . ...... . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
Although the main character is a zombie, he is too emotional. Such main characters are not interesting and often they always want to return to human life or form, although it would be much more interesting if they were chasing only force
Good Story . . . .. .. . . . .. . . . .. . . .. . . . .. . . .. . .. . . .. . . .. . . .. . . . .. . . .. . . .. . . . .. . . . .. . . .. . . . ..
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Pretty good start but i think the pace was to fast [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
Really enjoying it so far, wish there was a lot more to read, I knocked out the released content in like 30minutes. It’s a fun read with a lot of good points and potential to develop lope
One thing people need to understand is that books with undead MCs are great. Because why not?! Go ahead and read this book, I promise you won't regret reading this piece of art! [img=recommend][img=recommend]
Great book, interesting and very well written. I hope you continue writing it and don't drop it. The story is very unique and I am hooked to see what will happen next. I love the villain mc very much and hope you don't add any romance or harem in the future. That is all I have to say, stay well and keep writing.
Honestly I just saw this and thought why not i just didn't expect to find a top notch novel, like this was unexpected. It's simply an incredible novel and I hope to read more.
Im addicted already, I really like the concept it new and refreshing. I Love the idea of improving the foundations for evolution. Please come out with more chapters soon.
currently at chapter 10. novel looks good. keep up the good work author. . . . . . .
▪︎Writing Quality...............☆☆☆☆☆ ▪︎Story Development........☆☆☆☆☆ ▪︎Character Design...........☆☆☆☆☆ ▪︎Updating Stability..........☆☆☆☆☆ ▪︎World Background.........☆☆☆☆☆
Author here, with a shameless 5star review. Please vote your power stones for this wonderful book, and do leave a review. The story will update every other day, and if you have any questions or complaints, comment. Thanks.
Ok this is just anoying. Too much internal monologues. The experience is useless since we can’t even see what it says just the author telling us “oh it is at 50%”. Fix this Please. It would only take 1min to change it to %. OVERALL THIS CAN BE GREAT BUT THE LITTLE PR ARE PROBLEM ARE BRINGING IT DOWN.