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I Started To Gain Sentience In An Eroge

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作者: Parmesan

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Have you ever wondered what a character in a novel or in a game should be?

Do they eat? Sleep? Do they have their own life when you are not reading or playing?

They do not.

When you are not doing anything, we stay still.

To be fair, think about your own life. Is it different from a game without a system? You can not see behind your back, similar to how a character has to render it in a game.

But at least, you have your own life.

While I have to watch the protagonist of the novel find his way into the pants of the female leads.

This is my destiny.

I'm not jealous. Not at all.

Tags: Psychological, Yandere, Harem, Gore, Dark, Rape, Resets, R-18, School life, ...

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Truly, I do enjoy this story. This is not a string of words. Nor is it some form of half made concept. This is a fully fledged novel, with every word making you wish to read more. Many times, I'll catch myself with a grin on my face as I read a chapter. It is simply great. It contains neither powerful heroes or some terrifying opponent from the depths of villainy. This is far simpler than any of these stories. So come, join me in this review as I describe to you exactly what form of immersive entertainment this is. First off, the writing quality. When you read this story, you won't be searching for mistakes or laughing when you find them. No. You will be far to busy as your eyes flick from paragraph to paragraph, hanging on to the dialogue and the development of C's odd reality. Words are rarely wasted in this novel, and though during certain scenes of exposition may find yourself questioning why the author is restating something, I cannot say it is that much of an issue. They are minor things, but not enough for me to have any true problems with it. As for the update stability? Don't rely on this novel for daily entertainment. If there is something here that Parmesan truly fails at, its the ability to pump out chapters on a daily basis. When considering when the next chapter of this novel may come out, one must not think quickly, one must think eventually. Story Development. It is slow. To an unreasonable degree. Many things about this novel are quite good but the flow of time is a unrealistic crawl. The developments that happen in the one day we have so far experienced, could have happened over the course of a week. Parmesan is very dead set on making sure we know everything about everyone by the end of the one day that still has not passed. It's unnecessary, character development in the future could possibly be sped up by this, but that could've been done as we went along. Instead we have been limited to a bunch of small introductions which may end up reaching all the way to chapter 40 if there are more heroines to explore. If I were to do it, I would have had us learn things about the characters as they did them, exploring the motivations behind their actions as they put them forwards, while explaining the necessary basis of their personality to make sure it doesn't slow down these developments. All in all, it could have been done much better, without the stifling stagnancy we currently have to deal with. On the other hand, the character design that we have been provided with through this unreasonably long opening arc has been Stellar! Each character has their own personality that is held by a base trait. Kurokawa is dark seeming, while Rachel is a greedy b****** who wants nothing less than absolute ownership of her partner. Laura is a seeming strict class president, while C is supposed to be a simple weak mob, complaining about the popular kids. They all have something down at the base one can remember. If they were in a normal slice of life they could still excel as they are. However they are not. They are all within a yandere Eroge. They have nothing but the greatest setting to make use of their personalities. C our main character, is not a plot device as many main characters normally are. He is a catalyst for others. His trait that makes him ideal is the way he interacts with the readers, explaining and exploring the past of his environment and the things in it. He is the perfect window into the story because he knows every nook and cranny of it. And as the sentience granting bug grows and disrupts the world, he is capable or realizing all the things that are off and drawing our attention to them while showing us what it should have been like. He is our connection to the world, and as such he makes an amazing protagonist. On the other hand, the heroines we have been introduced to have certainly been standout. However they simply haven't done anything due not having the chance to. They have potential, but are locked in this single stagnant day that Parmesan refuses to end. Thus I can't really say much about them besides the fact that their existence is simply minimal due to the fact that they have little impact. So what if Rachel does some scary stuff in the past. It was explained to us. That takes away any fear we may have of her. Kurokawa is the very same. The reason many of the readers like laura is because we get to see things as she does them, and explore her interactions with C as they happen. She is a character who properly exists and grows with the story. The others simply don't get that chance. This is another of Parmesans failures that I hope to see rectified in the future. Finally, we have the world background. That stagnancy I have been complaining about wasn't completely bad. There were some things that were made better because of it. And that's the world background. Worlds and Stories are built on their lore. Both the lore built by the present characters, and beings of the past who allowed them to exist. In this case, the beings of the past are the characters of the present, so all of the interactions and situations spoken of feel in tune with the rest of the world. On the other hand, the world they live in is a game, simplifying the process of building a world that may have under normal circumstances required a massive info dump to understand. Certain things just aren't explained because they either don't exist or anyone can just figure it out. The world is simple. It's not deep, old or waning. It's new, fresh, and based off of logic put together by the author. Here the real world simply doesn't apply, and that's why the story is incredibly immersive. Its one of the reasons I love the story. Anyways, I enjoyed reading up to this point. I now await your return.

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If you drop this I'll kill you myself. .............................. ......................... ......................... gwehwehewrhrhskjfghbsdajkfgbewohgbweo oeh

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Guys i just wanted to tell you guys this novel is totally good Yandere harem (check) Gore(Check) Read this novel This might be your cup of tea you can drink but please this novel has potential . . . . . . . . Guys join Parmesan's Discord Server!

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I forgor to do an author's shameless review so here it is. What should you be looking for while reading eroge? Comedy. Deep lore. Yanderes. Pain. If you are too fed up with the usual 2 dimensional characters and fast paced action with little to no substance, then eroge can be a new wind. But hey, if you want to ask anything, I'm all ears (and cheese). And don't just listen to me, read through the other reviews, too.

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Straight up 100/10 I like the story and it's pretty unique, even though it's only a few chapters I already got hooked up,please don't drop this and keep up the great work .

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Ahhh...the feels dude, the feels, aside from the yandereness and the fantastic plot, there were some parts that really made my eyes a little wet not gonna lie. Keep it up author and thank you for the novel it made me realize something in my real life too.. THANK YOU FROM THE BOTTOM OF MY HEART.

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This… this is an absolute gem. I am in complete awe 🫢 of how much story, character development, emotions, and plot is fitted so cohesively yet chaotically together that it sucks in all of my attention that I couldn’t stop reading and thoutoughly enjoying myself in just 17 chapters. It’s been too long since I’ve read a story that had me so invested into genuinely wanting a satisfying conclusion of a story. I want this story to do well and progress for as long as the author possibly can with the same quality he has presented us with. Thank you for writing.

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i came here for yandere novel that killing each other to win mc heart but not to feel ༼;´༎ຶ ༎ຶ༽ m....................................

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This is simply mind blowing. Never had I thought that I would encounter a well executed story like this in this platform. I didn't have any great hopes at first and just thought I will eventually get bored with it. But strangely enough, the story which I thought was boring made me spend the night reading, refusing to skip any words. I believe I could never reach this kind of skill in weaving a story, I greatly respect you Author Parmesan, this novel is marvelous.

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A very new concept and I can give 5 stars just for the uniqueness of this story. Character development is marvelous till the latest chapter and the mc is just perfect 💯✨ and fmcs are also portrayed very beautifully and their possessiveness is also justified due to the world setting. I highly recommend everyone to at least give it a try and I guarantee you will be hooked.

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I'm loving the story so far. It reminds of melancholy of Haruhi Suzumiya mixed with deadpool.🤌

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I have a particular set of skills author, so if you drop this novel. then

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Okay. This is my first review so I did not know it wasn't a simple 1 to 5 stars. If it was i swear I would've given 5 stars but I'm not the only one who knows Parmesan's updating schedule. I know it exists now but it didn't before. Anyway now that I've given a reason for not giving 5 stars (Don't kill me), Ican get down to the story. This was definitely a new experience for me as this introduced me to the eavesdropping genre. I hadn't realized until then but I'd never thought about how life would go if other people could heat your thoughts. And the author writes it all out beautifully. On to the pacing. This particular book is abysmally slow, buy you won't realize it unless you take a step back (and even then you might miss it)May the spoilers (not really spoilers) begin.First we are introduced to C. a human stickman. That isn't really what he is, but as he is faceless, it's a good analogy.Yup. it's exactly as I said it, a faceless mc. Check the tags again. Harem? Check. He rizzed them up without a face. That's pretty hard to beat, but I digress. Throughout the course of the story so far we are introduced to what you would call "cookie cutter characters" A shy but handsome 'mc' , a proper class president, an overprotective childhood friend and so on. But remember, this is a yandere novel. So throw morals out the window. With this author though, that still isn't enough. Read and you'll see why

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It's a well written yandere harem, do I need to say more? It's the only novel where I don't mind the MC's monologue as the author makes it very entertaining. Do read it.

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Hello! A review for this awesome novel! Summary: A person transmigrates into an eroge game as an extra(Classmate C). This is an eroge in which there are several yanderes who love the cliche protagonist of the eroge (name - Hans)(indecisive, dense, no confidence etc.). Whenever something major happens in the loop/try, the eroge restarts from the starting point. Classmate C has experienced several thousands? of loops and tries. He had done many efforts in changing the original story but was unsuccessful. However, in the current loop, things have been much different... If you want to know more, then read the story! Let's get to reviewing! [Note: All things written below are because of my personal tastes. Some might not like it.] ---------- Writing Quality - Writing Quality has been really good if you compare it with the level in web novels. Proper punctuation! Ample Vocabulary! Good Grammar! I might have missed some grammar mistakes as I was too engrossed in the story. (5/5) Story Development - Story Development is phenomenal. It is not predictable and has some twists and turns. It keeps the readers on the edge and makes them wait for the next chapter. Most of the time I visit the site or app just to check if this novel is updated or not. (5/5) Character Design - I love the character design for the heroines. They are not one or two dimensional. They have their own feelings and thoughts. When you read their thoughts, you can know that this is synonymous with their characters. I also like the personality of Classmate C. Though, I didn't like him because of his wimpy nature and to push the heroines toward Han(the main character of eroge). But after reading his previous experiences, it is understandable. In the latest chapters, he is beginning to change as well. (5/5) Updating Stability - Yes, the updating stability for this novel is not the Webnovel usual of 1 chapter per day but I will prefer quality over quantity. Taking 2-5 days for a chapter is fine. I will prefer an interesting and quality chapter twice or thrice a week instead of a messy chapter daily. (5/5) World Background - This is the thing which currently lacks in the novel. The only thing we know about the world background is that it is a school in which the main cast studies. I will hope for this issue to be sorted out and we can know about the world background smoothly instead of as an info dump. Currently 24 chapters. (2/5) --------- You might be wondering why my rating shows (5/5) instead of less due to the world background's rating - (2/5). That's because this is currently my favourite novel out of all the novels I am following. I want this novel to have my whole support. An issue that annoys me - It will be helpful if you put the name of the person whose POV is being shown. Like - [Kurokawa's POV]. It's not a big deal but I need to read 2-3 paragraphs to know whose perspective I am reading from. Also, the author keeps asking to join his discord server, so I guess, join it? Anyways, keep it up, author! I hope you don't drop it or else........ . . . . . . . . . . Wait a minute, just let me get a whetstone..... Phew, here it is! Let me get something else too... Ahh, here is a good old knife... *Scratch* *Scratch* What? Haven't you ever seen a person sharpen a knife, huh? . . . . . . . What do you mean that I am threatening the author? It's just a normal day-to-day activity. I want to use it for cooking! Ah, people these days, jumping to conclusions...

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I was having a hard time discovering this novel because it's practically not on the yandere tag results, I'm glad I found it through scrolling for quite some time

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Absolute Gem! This is what I am looking for years after watching Mirai diary. This hooked me up with just a 14 chapters, Now I rooting for that Laura character; I wish her happiness with my whole heart. Oh, I forgot to say something important.... More Chapters Pleaseeee!!!!!!!!

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Maan you've really improved since the first time I've read your novel. Just wanted to say it's a banger that seems to be shaping up into becoming a yandere thriller maybe but mostly for our mc since he's denser than osmium. But what's a yandere fic without a dense mc. If the mc is aware already the fun wouldn't be there

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If you drop this I'm gonna jump in a hot tub................................................................................................

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This is the most splendid novel I have ever read!The details, character designs and the world background are so properly executed, I even cried at some point at the mc's suffering because I'm so engrossed 🤧🤧The writing quality and Author's imagination are so engaging to read, it blew my mind that such a novel of this quality still exists today after reading countless brain-dead-end novels.Only the updates are pretty bad, since this novel is heavily underrated,But THAT quality in each chapter compensates for it.I hope you won't stop writing, just don't. Hope this novel and the Author get the attention they deserve!

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Chapter 122: [An] Got your finger, teehee! 2 days ago

卷 0 : Auxiliary Volume

  1. Characters 2 years ago
  2. Illustration 2 years ago

卷 1

  1. 1
    You are still here? 2 years ago
  2. 2
    It starts generically. 2 years ago
  3. 3
    What the heck is going on?! 2 years ago
  4. 4
    In the classroom. 2 years ago
  5. 5
    There are two of them!! 2 years ago
  6. 6
    Spare me please... 2 years ago
  7. 7
    The death flag comes into class. 2 years ago
  8. 8
    Laura's tragic fate. 2 years ago
  9. 9
    One of my attempts at saving Laura. 2 years ago
  10. 10
    Another first experience for me! 2 years ago
  11. 11
    I have a plan! 2 years ago
  12. 12
    FIRST POLL 2 years ago
  13. 13
    Laura's Sentience 2 years ago
  14. 14
    Memory outburst 2 years ago
  15. 15
    Lunch break! 2 years ago
  16. 16
    Things are always worse than it seems. 2 years ago
  17. 17
    What have I gotten myself into?! 2 years ago
  18. 18
    Girls talk! 2 years ago
  19. 19
    After lunch is dinner... 2 years ago
  20. 20
    What do I do now?! 2 years ago
  21. 21
    Rachel wants to be noticed! 2 years ago
  22. 22
    Rachel's memory outburst! 2 years ago
  23. 23
    I have a change of heart. 2 years ago
  24. 24
    Kurokawa is on the stage. 2 years ago
  25. 25
    "It is a sin." 2 years ago
  26. 26
    Is it really true that more people is better? 2 years ago
  27. 27
    My first time going home with a girl, or 2, or 3...and a guy... 2 years ago
  28. 28
    Can I just say "Exit game" and log out? 2 years ago
  29. 29
    You know what? 2 years ago
  30. 30
    Han is also changing. 2 years ago
  31. 31
    [POLL] PLEASE CAST YOUR VOTE 2 years ago
  32. 32
    Rachel will fight for what she wants. 2 years ago
  33. 33
    Kurokawa is also suffering. 2 years ago
  34. 34
    Laura is getting some sugar. 2 years ago
  35. 35
    I hate the kitchen. 2 years ago
  36. 36
    This is my chance!! 2 years ago
  37. 37
    Fruits and drinks！ 2 years ago
  38. 38
    Kurokawa's plan. 2 years ago
  39. 39
    [Kurokawa] Conditions. 2 years ago
  40. 40
    [Rachel] A second chance... 2 years ago
  41. 41
    The survivor. 2 years ago
  42. 42
    [Laura] The things I do for love... 2 years ago
  43. 43
    [Rachel] A Hero does not have to be on a horse. 2 years ago
  44. 44
    Rachel? 2 years ago
  45. 45
    [Rachel] Falling even deeper. 2 years ago
  46. 46
    [Rachel] The kiss from an unknown time. 2 years ago
  47. 47
    May our Lord and savior help my soul!!! 2 years ago
  48. 48
    Is this what being wanted feels like? 2 years ago
  49. 49
    [Laura] His true thoughts. 2 years ago
  50. 50
    [Poll] New heroine. 2 years ago
  51. 51
    It is the second day. 2 years ago
  52. 52
    Second day! 2 years ago
  53. 53
    Maybe... 2 years ago
  54. 54
    [Kurokawa] There is only me left. 2 years ago
  55. 55
    The start of a freaking harem! 2 years ago
  56. 56
    I never knew my school life could be this colorful. 2 years ago
  57. 57
    [Kurokawa] Mother 2 years ago
  58. 58
    [Kurokawa] Inferiority 2 years ago
  59. 59
    So when will we arrive at school? 2 years ago
  60. 60
    Kurokawa arrives 2 years ago
  61. 61
    Different attitudes 2 years ago
  62. 62
    The bravest man of us all! 2 years ago
  63. 63
    [Laura] I want to kill this bastard! 2 years ago
  64. 64
    Serious poll (1/3) 2 years ago
  65. 65
    [Rachel] I am his plot armor. 1 years ago
  66. 66
    Where is Han when you need him? 1 years ago
  67. 67
    [Kurokawa] Garbage disposal 1 years ago
  68. 68
    [Laura] The first murder is not that bad 1 years ago
  69. 69
    Finding Laura and Rachel 1 years ago
  70. 70
    [Rachel] Wait! Don't come in! 1 years ago
  71. 71
    [Laura] The art of distraction 1 years ago
  72. 72
    The Princess comes to class 1 years ago
  73. 73
    A brief moment of peace 1 years ago
  74. 74
    What will happen to the bookworm? 1 years ago
  75. 75
    [Kurokawa] Running away 1 years ago
  76. 76
    [Kurokawa] Breaking point 1 years ago
  77. 77
    [Kurokawa] Please stay away from me... 1 years ago
  78. 78
    Never put kindness in the wrong place 1 years ago
  79. 79
    [Kurokawa] I should just end it all. 1 years ago
  80. 80
    [Rachel] Trust 1 years ago
  81. 81
    (Question) The cheese needs your help 1 years ago
  82. 82
    Two devilish angels 1 years ago
  83. 83
    [Laura] When in doubt, kiss him out! 1 years ago
  84. 84
    Grab her hands 1 years ago
  85. 85
    [Kurokawa] Am I worthy? 1 years ago
  86. 86
    "I am proud of you." (Part 1) 1 years ago
  87. 87
    "I am proud of you." (Part 2) 1 years ago
  88. 88
    Witnessing the past (1) 1 years ago
  89. 89
    Witnessing the past (2) 1 years ago
  90. 90
    My second kiss, stolen again. (1) 1 years ago
  91. 91
    My second kiss, stolen again. (2) 1 years ago
  92. 92
    [Kurokawa]: My Oath. My husband. (1) 1 years ago
  93. 93
    [Kurokawa]: My Oath. My husband. (2) 1 years ago
  94. 94
    The Crucial Step (1) 1 years ago
  95. 95
    The Crucial Step (2) 1 years ago
  96. 96
    This time is different 1 years ago
  97. 97
    Sexual innuendo 1 years ago
  98. 98
    After lunch 1 years ago
  99. 99
    It's a hard life I'm having... 1 years ago
  100. 100
    What happens when you kiss? 1 years ago
  101. 101
    Husband from the past 1 years ago
  102. 102
    [Kurokawa]: Change 1 years ago
  103. 103
    [Kurokawa] Wife of the Present 1 years ago
  104. 104
    The new bookworm 1 years ago
  105. 105
    I swear soysauce does not work well with human meat! 1 years ago
  106. 106
    Do you wanna build a harem? 1 years ago
  107. 107
    The subtle changes in one's mind 1 years ago
  108. 108
    The ride home 1 years ago
  109. 109
    [Kurokawa] No longer afraid. 1 years ago
  110. 110
    Friendship blooms in the weirdest of times! 1 years ago
  111. 111
    Han and his peculiar taste 12 months ago
  112. 112
    Another nostalgic feeling 11 months ago
  113. 113
    I feel like my IQs are dropping! 8 months ago
  114. 114
    There is definitely something wrong with me! 8 months ago
  115. 115
    Mind break! 7 months ago
  116. 116
    [Adora de Bloom] Awaken 7 months ago
  117. 117
    [Adora] We, too, are shadows! 5 months ago
  118. 118
    [Kurokawa] Everyone hides something 5 months ago
  119. 119
    [Kurokawa] Mother’s home 3 months ago
  120. 120
    [Rachel] A finger 3 months ago
  121. 121
    [Rachel] A secret between us 2 months ago
  122. 122
    [An] Got your finger, teehee! 2 days ago

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