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i love the story and character development simple as that. (´∩｡• ᵕ •｡∩`)
very good bro keep it up the story better then I expected and I'm happy I tried it thanks 😊
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Fragile heart review, gotta stop worrying. Also I need evil mcs, this ain't one. -----------------------------------------------------------
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clickbaity tags and description, i expected a selfish. mc which seems to be what was insinuated with that description and a more evil one especially with the killer tag but he is just so adamant on helping everyone else, legit the majority of the first chapters were him helping naruto, sakura and trying to figure out a way to help kakashi, please change the tags and/or the description as it is very misleading.
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The story is good and the quality of the writing when it pertains to the story is actually decent as well. The reason I lowered the rating and the only negative of the story is the authors nonstop crying and b*tching about people judging and critiquing his writing. granted its usually towards narrow minded folk but I don't think he sees the irony in his own rants. I usually get laughs from the comments or skip em so I still enjoy the story which I believe many would enjoy as well, but those rants have to be included in the review. I wish authors stopped worrying about what the readers think but in an app like this where you compete for ratings it may never be a possibility. and as much as authors say they aren't swayed. Their rants say different. For they love those who agree with them and hate those who don't.
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Well I'm not sure but the beginning slapped me in the face all of a sudden he says stop dieting because you need calories 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂
This is Chakra Metal (which has more value than gold). This novel had an decisive MC who has the goal to rebuild his clan and build his power and prestige. Just wish we had more chapters.
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Dude this is great. One of the higher end fanfics I’ve seen, and I’d have to nitpick to find problems in it. It’s definitely up there in terms of good fanfics.
Muy buena la historia sigue asi cada cuando sube nuevo capítulo ???????????????????????👍👍👏👍👍👍👏👏👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
I'm very excited and interested in this story and its beginning is good so far, I really liked the protagonist's personality and his changes and adaptation to the world, and the other characters are Incredible
yes it is written really good...............................................................................................................
Love interest is all that matters to me. ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
Keep it up bro loving it .................................................................................................................. ......................
this is a goldmine. for the idiots who are complaining about this story you can all just go to gutter and die. just hope the author doesnt drop the story.
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The MC's personality is kind of obnoxious who srsly talks a lot when it comes to advising and his personal philosophy. Reminds me of the mcs from hp fanfics who would be in ravenclaw. The story development as of now is following the canon and there are no issues with grammar. Overall it's a good read.
Today we're making author lemonade The recipe is easy, there's no need to be afraid just Fill a cup with water, now we're well on our way to Make something as glorious as author lemonade The last thing that we need's a heart and soul So take your trusty knife and carve a decent-size hole in your chest Take what is needed and we'll go for the gold by Squeezing out the juice contained within the heart and soul
Good so far the story is logical and well thought my only concern is that i hope it won't be dropped for a reason out of nowhere since It happens a lot i only hope to have at least one chapter a week a t least since it shows that this work isn't dropped. And as for the other one is that i hope that the love interest will not come out of nowhere and be somewhat logical and I do hope that the love interest you are going to pick will be a mentally strong woman since the main character can just teach her ways to get stronger. And another concern is that you won't focus too much one romance most of the time and forget about the plot, I do hope for the story to have late romance since it's more logical.
It's not bad, it's just not my style. I liked the first chapters more because they weren't so heavy😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑
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i love the story and character development simple as that. (´∩｡• ᵕ •｡∩`)
very good bro keep it up the story better then I expected and I'm happy I tried it thanks 😊
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Fragile heart review, gotta stop worrying. Also I need evil mcs, this ain't one. -----------------------------------------------------------
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clickbaity tags and description, i expected a selfish. mc which seems to be what was insinuated with that description and a more evil one especially with the killer tag but he is just so adamant on helping everyone else, legit the majority of the first chapters were him helping naruto, sakura and trying to figure out a way to help kakashi, please change the tags and/or the description as it is very misleading.
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The story is good and the quality of the writing when it pertains to the story is actually decent as well. The reason I lowered the rating and the only negative of the story is the authors nonstop crying and b*tching about people judging and critiquing his writing. granted its usually towards narrow minded folk but I don't think he sees the irony in his own rants. I usually get laughs from the comments or skip em so I still enjoy the story which I believe many would enjoy as well, but those rants have to be included in the review. I wish authors stopped worrying about what the readers think but in an app like this where you compete for ratings it may never be a possibility. and as much as authors say they aren't swayed. Their rants say different. For they love those who agree with them and hate those who don't.
Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good
揭示劇透 Well I'm not sure but the beginning slapped me in the face all of a sudden he says stop dieting because you need calories 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂
This is Chakra Metal (which has more value than gold). This novel had an decisive MC who has the goal to rebuild his clan and build his power and prestige. Just wish we had more chapters.
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Можно ссылку на Patreon ................................................................................................................... ..................................................
Dude this is great. One of the higher end fanfics I’ve seen, and I’d have to nitpick to find problems in it. It’s definitely up there in terms of good fanfics.
Muy buena la historia sigue asi cada cuando sube nuevo capítulo ???????????????????????👍👍👏👍👍👍👏👏👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
I'm very excited and interested in this story and its beginning is good so far, I really liked the protagonist's personality and his changes and adaptation to the world, and the other characters are Incredible
yes it is written really good...............................................................................................................
Love interest is all that matters to me. ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
Keep it up bro loving it .................................................................................................................. ......................
this is a goldmine. for the idiots who are complaining about this story you can all just go to gutter and die. just hope the author doesnt drop the story.
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unfortunately I'm not the 10th review_____________________________________________________________________________________________________
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The MC's personality is kind of obnoxious who srsly talks a lot when it comes to advising and his personal philosophy. Reminds me of the mcs from hp fanfics who would be in ravenclaw. The story development as of now is following the canon and there are no issues with grammar. Overall it's a good read.
Today we're making author lemonade The recipe is easy, there's no need to be afraid just Fill a cup with water, now we're well on our way to Make something as glorious as author lemonade The last thing that we need's a heart and soul So take your trusty knife and carve a decent-size hole in your chest Take what is needed and we'll go for the gold by Squeezing out the juice contained within the heart and soul
Good so far the story is logical and well thought my only concern is that i hope it won't be dropped for a reason out of nowhere since It happens a lot i only hope to have at least one chapter a week a t least since it shows that this work isn't dropped. And as for the other one is that i hope that the love interest will not come out of nowhere and be somewhat logical and I do hope that the love interest you are going to pick will be a mentally strong woman since the main character can just teach her ways to get stronger. And another concern is that you won't focus too much one romance most of the time and forget about the plot, I do hope for the story to have late romance since it's more logical.
It's not bad, it's just not my style. I liked the first chapters more because they weren't so heavy😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑