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it's confusing to read pls correct the translation it's hard to read a 1 whole chapter without getting confuse
this book is like a puzzle. either you need to rearrange the words to make it comprehensible or guessing whats wrong and missing words to understans it. truly unique and special
i want to get next version i hope author can give us that .... this is the best novel i have ever seen though out research ..................................
Horrible translation, if you don't believe me, search for the story on google, its available on novelhi. quality is much better there.
everything is fine, but tell me where the prod is or there will be no other world? and why are only 2 books displayed in the profile? Проду и новый мир !Проду и новый мир !Проду и новый мир !Проду и новый мир !Проду и новый мир !Проду и новый мир !Проду и новый мир !
my fellow otakus if u r having trouble with the translation then worry not I have u covered read it in NOVELHALL.COM
%0 cesaret. Çok saçma davranan MC. Düşman öldürmez, dostuna yardım etmez, gücünü geliştirmek varken geliştirmez, bir sürü kız var ama kimseyle romantizm yaşamaz, yeteneği çok fazla ama kullanmaz, çok mal bir ana karakter nasıl saçmalayacak 500 bölüm yazabildin yazar anlamadım. Tavsiye etmiyorum ilk 100 - 150 bölümden sonrasını
This novel deserves at least 4 stars. I have read many douluo fanfictions before and each of them never finished. This novel at least has an end. Its true that the mc doesnt kill much but its not always about killing everybody. My only negative point on this novel would be that there is too less romance. But overall i would still say that this novel is one of the best douluo fanfictions that i have read
Very bad translation. Completely unreadable. That is a pity. Story is quite promising
another rubbish mtl with a bad translation. and the plot itself completely copies the original. no creativity. protagonist licking dog tang san. I do not advise anyone.
Terrible grammar! Terrible grammar! Terrible grammar! Terrible grammar! Terrible grammar! Terrible grammar!
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I really like the character development and i also like Mc personality it's very interesting and I like how Mc is not broken from start
To be honest I dont know how to rate this novel. I dont know if the story is that good. Why? Because of the terrible grammar. Even some MTL novels are better translated than this. The story is barely readable with this, truly disappointing.
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So this is just an mtl novel that's why you can see they call wuhun and this other names for their ranks. I wouldnt mind if it was copied for mtlnovels but there wasn't any effort to proof read I checked one of the chapters and it was just copied paste from there.
Its awesome and I love the book cover. Excellent story. Keep going writer. Its so amazing. One of the best book I have read it. And it was kind was surprising. Keep it up. Go for it
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I believe that half the ppl here dont understand what is going on in this novel, it needs to be edited until then2 stars, cus i like the idea
Good story, MC have a brain, not pokeman harem. I really like read this. Этот сайт действительно раздражает. Буквально всё сделано чтобы меня разозлить. Боже, неужели нельзя сделать нормальный сайт для людей? Почему русские сайты лучше и удобнее чем это интернациональное дерьмо? Поиск утроен идиотски, чтобы написать отзыв нужно писать 140+ знаков, а звёздочки целых 5 раз ставить...
I like this novel. I hope this novel will update faster and I'm waiting for the continuation of the story.. I'm also looking forward to the development of the story, and hopefully it will be more interesting, hehe I'm looking forward to it
Terimakasih author karena sudah sering update novel ini.. Saya harap ceritanya akan semakin bagus dan menarik.. Saya akan tetap mendukung karya ini dan sekali lagi terimakasih
0 romance, mc that doesnt kill his enemies, 99% the same soul land story author afraid to change anything...its trash why i read till now i dont know and why are so many bots here
Ceritanya bagus dan sangat menarik. Saya suka fanfic ini.. Dan saya harap ada kelanjutannya ceritanya ya author.. Tetap semangat dan saya akan tetap mendukung anda
The grammar is so bad that 99 percent of the time I am just guessing what's going on. Is this a machine translation or what?,.........................................
honestly, it's a good idea, but the grammar is horrible ,I don't even understand what's going on 99% of the time
it's confusing to read pls correct the translation it's hard to read a 1 whole chapter without getting confuse
this book is like a puzzle. either you need to rearrange the words to make it comprehensible or guessing whats wrong and missing words to understans it. truly unique and special
i want to get next version i hope author can give us that .... this is the best novel i have ever seen though out research ..................................
Horrible translation, if you don't believe me, search for the story on google, its available on novelhi. quality is much better there.
everything is fine, but tell me where the prod is or there will be no other world? and why are only 2 books displayed in the profile? Проду и новый мир !Проду и новый мир !Проду и новый мир !Проду и новый мир !Проду и новый мир !Проду и новый мир !Проду и новый мир !
my fellow otakus if u r having trouble with the translation then worry not I have u covered read it in NOVELHALL.COM
%0 cesaret. Çok saçma davranan MC. Düşman öldürmez, dostuna yardım etmez, gücünü geliştirmek varken geliştirmez, bir sürü kız var ama kimseyle romantizm yaşamaz, yeteneği çok fazla ama kullanmaz, çok mal bir ana karakter nasıl saçmalayacak 500 bölüm yazabildin yazar anlamadım. Tavsiye etmiyorum ilk 100 - 150 bölümden sonrasını
This novel deserves at least 4 stars. I have read many douluo fanfictions before and each of them never finished. This novel at least has an end. Its true that the mc doesnt kill much but its not always about killing everybody. My only negative point on this novel would be that there is too less romance. But overall i would still say that this novel is one of the best douluo fanfictions that i have read
Very bad translation. Completely unreadable. That is a pity. Story is quite promising
another rubbish mtl with a bad translation. and the plot itself completely copies the original. no creativity. protagonist licking dog tang san. I do not advise anyone.
Terrible grammar! Terrible grammar! Terrible grammar! Terrible grammar! Terrible grammar! Terrible grammar!
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I really like the character development and i also like Mc personality it's very interesting and I like how Mc is not broken from start
To be honest I dont know how to rate this novel. I dont know if the story is that good. Why? Because of the terrible grammar. Even some MTL novels are better translated than this. The story is barely readable with this, truly disappointing.
Trash____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
So this is just an mtl novel that's why you can see they call wuhun and this other names for their ranks. I wouldnt mind if it was copied for mtlnovels but there wasn't any effort to proof read I checked one of the chapters and it was just copied paste from there.
Its awesome and I love the book cover. Excellent story. Keep going writer. Its so amazing. One of the best book I have read it. And it was kind was surprising. Keep it up. Go for it
MTL….….….….….….….….Nuff Said [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work
I believe that half the ppl here dont understand what is going on in this novel, it needs to be edited until then2 stars, cus i like the idea
Good story, MC have a brain, not pokeman harem. I really like read this. Этот сайт действительно раздражает. Буквально всё сделано чтобы меня разозлить. Боже, неужели нельзя сделать нормальный сайт для людей? Почему русские сайты лучше и удобнее чем это интернациональное дерьмо? Поиск утроен идиотски, чтобы написать отзыв нужно писать 140+ знаков, а звёздочки целых 5 раз ставить...
I like this novel. I hope this novel will update faster and I'm waiting for the continuation of the story.. I'm also looking forward to the development of the story, and hopefully it will be more interesting, hehe I'm looking forward to it
Terimakasih author karena sudah sering update novel ini.. Saya harap ceritanya akan semakin bagus dan menarik.. Saya akan tetap mendukung karya ini dan sekali lagi terimakasih
0 romance, mc that doesnt kill his enemies, 99% the same soul land story author afraid to change anything...its trash why i read till now i dont know and why are so many bots here
Ceritanya bagus dan sangat menarik. Saya suka fanfic ini.. Dan saya harap ada kelanjutannya ceritanya ya author.. Tetap semangat dan saya akan tetap mendukung anda
The grammar is so bad that 99 percent of the time I am just guessing what's going on. Is this a machine translation or what?,.........................................
honestly, it's a good idea, but the grammar is horrible ,I don't even understand what's going on 99% of the time