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This is a good and normal isekai or reincarnation novel. The characters seem to be good and usual for this type of novel genre. The plot it is great and the stability of update is amazing. You've probably written this a while ago since it is almost impossible to post 50 chapters in almost a week.
The writing quality is alright, situational word choice and punc. could be better. The opening chapters serve as exposition for the world and explain the power system, therefore the world development is decent. The pacing seems pretty good too.
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This book have everything you need... awesome work!! keep up the spirit and hope to see more wonderful works from you! The writing was captivating, the characters are believable and I care about them! :)
An absolute unit of a novel! The plot is solid and I am engrossed to read more! Kudos for a job well done! Hope uou don't drop and continue to write. Keep improving all throughout the way. Have a nice day and good luck 👍
Well I will be uploading this fanfiction completely as I like to read it I hope others will also love it💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯
it's a great story hope you don't drop it upload it completely I really want to read entire story good job bro💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯
ya saya suka fanfic ini,dan saya berharap ceritanya akan menjadi lebih baik lagi kedepannya... saya juga senang karena protagonis dalam cerita ini bukan tokoh mesum dan maniak mengumpulkan poke-women ...wkwkwkwkw ditunggu kelanjutan ceritanya
I like it .................................................... .......................................... ............................ ........... ......... ....... ... .. .
Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work
This is a good and normal isekai or reincarnation novel. The characters seem to be good and usual for this type of novel genre. The plot it is great and the stability of update is amazing. You've probably written this a while ago since it is almost impossible to post 50 chapters in almost a week.
The writing quality is alright, situational word choice and punc. could be better. The opening chapters serve as exposition for the world and explain the power system, therefore the world development is decent. The pacing seems pretty good too.
На сайте mtlnovel 586 глав . . . . .. . .. . . . . . . ........... ........... ........... ........... ........... ........... ........... ........... ........... ........... ........... ........... ........... ........... ........... ........... ........... ...........
This book have everything you need... awesome work!! keep up the spirit and hope to see more wonderful works from you! The writing was captivating, the characters are believable and I care about them! :)
An absolute unit of a novel! The plot is solid and I am engrossed to read more! Kudos for a job well done! Hope uou don't drop and continue to write. Keep improving all throughout the way. Have a nice day and good luck 👍
Well I will be uploading this fanfiction completely as I like to read it I hope others will also love it💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯
it's a great story hope you don't drop it upload it completely I really want to read entire story good job bro💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯
ya saya suka fanfic ini,dan saya berharap ceritanya akan menjadi lebih baik lagi kedepannya... saya juga senang karena protagonis dalam cerita ini bukan tokoh mesum dan maniak mengumpulkan poke-women ...wkwkwkwkw ditunggu kelanjutan ceritanya