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I really really really liked this book so much and It is/was one of the best book I have read and it sucks that its not going to keep going!!! I really really wish it did and wish for the author to see it through!! I know there where a lot of other people that where reading it too so it wasnt just a couple... so it was definitely worth it to keep the book going but I guess the author just gave up and it sucks and!! I just cant believe that someone would start to write such an awesome book and then jsut stop for no reason at all or at least didnt say anything about it!!! I really really really hope that the author comes back and starts up again and finishes the book!!!
i will give it a 5star cause i like this novel I really like it! so author don't drop this Master piece of your's 🥹❤️
R there no more chapters coming out??? It really sucks!! I really loved this book and to be honest I wanyed to see how it all played out in the end!! But I would have hoped that all of the people that r connected to the MC would live even the maids because it would have suck if they die! I really hope and wish that this book keeps going!!
So is this book done?? Like it hasnt come out what any pages in a long time?? It would really really suck if thats the case because honestly its really really good book and it doesnt get old!! I would at least like to know whats happening...
How come no more chapters have been coming out recently!!??? I really really love this book and its awesome and really really want it to keep going for awhile!!! So I hope it keeps going and chapters start to come out again!!!
30+ chapters in and I felt like I was slogging through words instead of actually enjoying a story, the information dump from the first 20 chapters is insane, most of the knowledge that was presented actually wasn't even relevant in the state of the story.
I really llove thos book. I hope that it keeps going and dosent stop for awhile!! Its one of the best books out there!
I wont say how good the story is author (spoiler - insanely good for "me" ) . Now i will criticize . I do this because i like your story man . 1. TOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH SMUT CHAPTERS , Its boring to the point i started skipping and scrolling the chaps while just keep an eye for any interesting bits of info i may miss . Please its not that u are bad at writing these , but that u your story and lore that u are creating is far more entertaining than the smut that i can just read anywhere . Hope u understand . Ik u already wrote above 1000 chaps and this is useless to u now - but i want u to remember this for the future , that's all . 2. There is literally nothing else to say , but for the SAKE OF SAYING THIS I WILL SAY IT - Your story is a SILVER thats present along side trash , hence u will gain attention . But it is not DIAMOND by any means , hope u can continue improving your skills , so i can one day enjoy some more of your content .
Story is rated higher than it should be. Character Design is pretty mediocre at best... World background is the same. Story development is mid at the best honestly... the author has this really awful habit of repeating things that have already been said by some character or has already been mentioned by the author many many times. If it was once or twice it'd be no problem. I could even be ok with 3 or 4 times. The author will repeat things like 10 times which is just annoying as can be. It's like the author has little to no memory of what occurred in the novel. That and/or doesn't take or make note of things happening or have happened in the story. I've seen comments here and there saying it's slice of life to excuse some complaints people have. I just want to say slice of life doesn't excuse poor writing. I feel like the story could have been quite fun but after many chapters I just find myself annoyed.
while the story is decent, it's not good enough to make me pay fifty dollars to unlock a hundred chapters after chapter forty-five. With over forty percent of the story being ramblings, repeating information that was said or other non important things added in to pad word count and add more chapters
I think this author is ded. You should all send him castles to revive him or there will be no ending for this novel. Also, this author is harassing me in dms, please send help before it’s too late. (Or send him castles to motivate him enough to write whatever he’s writing in this book.)
I really really like this book and want it to keep going!!! I hope that u keep up with the chapters u have been putting out!! I would love to be cought to when new chapters come out but I cant its to expensive for me so I can only wait till the chapters r able to use passes or I can buy that chapter but having to buy the premium chapters then buying the chapters that come after that is a lot for me but I really cant wait to see the next chapter come!!! Every day I check to see if any updates have happened to the book because I want to see what happens next and how everything is going and in what direction!!! Hope u keep the book going its going great so far!!
Hay author is there anything u can do about how many chapters ahead u go??? because it says that it wont release anymore chapters till u r 40 chapters ahead and if someone wants to keep up with the story and read every chapter that comes out right away they havw to pay over 3000 coins just to be able to keep up with the chapters that come out!! Is there anything u can do or talk/complain to the app so its not so expensive and so we dont have to wait for so many chapters to come out .... like maybe have it set for like 15 or 20 at most if they have to really do it because its almost impossible for people to pay over 3000 coins a month and that just for 1 month to keep reading when chapters come out thats not including the next months or after that and its not like the readers get anything special out of it except to be able to read 40 chapters ahead of everyone else!! So It would be a great help of u can talk to them to see if they can lower it and everything so people can keep up with the chapters u put out right away.... but if it doesnt happen then I guess u dont want to people to read them right away because u might not want comments on them and all that like what has been happening... but I hope it gets fixed really really soon!!!
👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 Has the MCs mother tried to become stronger yet or whats up with her??? I mean with everything thats going on u would think she would want to get as strong as possible so she could protect the people and life she has/had here... And how come the MC hasnt called his mother out on how stronget she is??? I mean he supposed to really really smart right so how has he not cought on by now or anyone else for that matter???
I juzt got done reading the new chapters from 1146 -1150 and I have to say they r pretty good!! I did leave comments and Ideas on some of the chapters that I think should be implied and I honestly think that it would make the book better!!
I really llove this book!!! The only I dont like is the 2 dogs!!! I dont believe they should be around at all they need to go.... Honestly I have them.... I really really hate them!!! they r just dogs and nothing else then need to go back where there from!!!! But I was wondering if if u the AUTHOR can do a mass release up to where just before everyone starts to hit the fan with the Apocalypse in everything and have it stop where the MC is just about to explode and evolve into some kind of demonic vampire and how he become into the state of the being in that demonic state and everything!!! or at least release more chapters if possible please!!! I really want to see this battle.... lol
I just got done with the newest chapter and everything is looking really good so far but while I was reading it I was just thinking back to when the MC and his friends where getting all of the contacts from all of the higher beings and honestly I think the MC should have had his 2 friends back away with the other then release all his aura and the have him have a ball of each element floating behind him with his eyes red and his nail and hands tuned into knifes and have him become basically demonic and have him floating saying hes going to kill all of them just for thinking this way a show and to mess with peoples lifes like this and all that and have him start going after one of them but only to have him mom and aunt come out before him and have him kinda tell them if they dont wish to die they will move now and all that havw have his mother look at him with interest and sadness and have his aunt just be her but scenes the didnt happen y not have something like this happen before he goes off to see the celestial being thing that he supposed to go see but have have all of his wifes and maids and aunts and lovers and basically the hole royal clan come out to stop him and to have everything blocked and only have his wifes and maids aunts and lovers be able to talk with and maybe have a fight break out or something between him and his wife and aunts and lovers scenes his maids cant hurt him and this after its done have them all go back to the castle and wait for him to be up and have them all talk to him and figure out what happened and all that only to have everyone know about the other world and everything and maybe have it be his subconsciousness, and consciousness doing weird things or whatever or have it so that all of his memories from there start to finally fade away and he doesnt remember after he talks to them or something... Im sure U THE AUTHOR can come up with something better then what I did... but I think this would be an epic chapter or couple chapters with how it would go and how they would feel and see him and be able to tell something was wrong and it would be after everyone ascends to the next rank and when it happens have it so that everyone can feel the MCs aura but maybe not be effected by it this way they can tell how strong he is and everything more then just his own rank and for the ones that r on the same rank or around there and r not supremes they have to stand to the side with the maids to cover them and protect them as they watch if they can handle it like his cousin and maybe his sister too if she cant handle it but she should be able too... U THE AUTHOR would have to put in the details and everything but it would be really cool to be able to see this befor ehe gose and even before he spends time with his wifes and lovers and everyone and this way he cannhave time with them and even settle his own being after something like happens and maybe have him remember what happened but he couldnt stop because he was so mad or because the halo effected him while he was thinking of something sad or whatever or his old world or whatever and if u dont have his memories from his old world stat to vanish then at least have him tell everyone when he wakes up and have everyone at the castle waiting for him to be up and maybe seeing everyone there when he wakes up have him try to run or something but before he can have his mother stop him and have him start to explain where he lost it to his mother and have his other world stuff slip from his tongue this way he has to explain it to everybody but he dont have to go into details like he did with his mother but not be really vague about it either!! like this would definitely be and epic couple of chapters.... I really hope u use it!!
The story is full of Yuri and there is not even Yuri tag bro, don't do this dude. Just put the Yuri tag. Not all of the readers have cuck fetish like you.
I should start by saying I like this novel inspite of its many glaring flaws. Most of the s*x scenes are well done, and the novel started very strong and honestly stayed that way up until after the wedding arc and only really started falling apart around chapter 900 with this cooking quest/arc, but I will speak more of that later. Many, if not all, of the problems that I have with the series stems from the Author forgetting things that happened earlyier in the book, or getting over ambitious and including too much and straying away from the core of the story. Infact I feel like that is the biggest complaint I have. Why is it that in Vampire's Slice of Life, we have to have some annoying conspiracy happening in the world, timeskips that seem to be unreasonably long for no reason (trippling the MC's age) and have the MC persue cultivation like no tomorrow? To add onto that, the MC is a reincarnator (which is fine) but their is also a regressor who has a system, a bunch of other worlds/cultivation types, gods, and Chosen Ones too. Oh and the MC just gets a system too and never even touches it or uses it. The majority of the time this novel feels like a weird mash of cultivation plus chaos, and all of the best chapters are the ones that actually feel like Slice of Life. I think my favorite arc was the Elven arc because of this. I even like the training arcs (when they arent just timeskipped because why would we include that slice of life content) and this includes the breif bit where Lith was in the Chi world. I feel like the Author needs to sit down and actually reread through the story so far.
For 900 chapters did I read this and think it was an ok story. But then the 5th arc started and destroyed the novel. Lith has LITERALLY spent more time sleeping than being with his loved ones. Where is the slice of life in that? He has spent most of his time with two guys and a friend zoned girl than with the people he loves. This is supposed to be a romance story, but he has spent more time away from family and more time with friends by a 10 to 1 ratio. Is he secretly gay or something? Not to mention the author goes on to keep saying that he is now a vampire and above human morals, but proceeds to go on a 200 year long fiasco over some low level taunt by a person he LITERALLY hasn't known for 5 minutes. What do you even say to that? What was the point? I can't stress this enough. Lith would rather go around goofing off than spend time with his family. Also, he is a serious beta male. I mean this in all honesty and seriousness. Lith never has any negative emotion towards his females. He doesn't get angry, frustrated, or upset; even when they physically and verbally abuse him. He just says that they are doing it out of love and worry, and then take whatever punishment they dish out with zero complaints.
why is Lucifer having the same profile as the book eating magician character
One of the best novel to pass time, Author please continue your work...And there is no Ntr here...The guys here are just insecure incels... Amazing work please continue ✨
Thanks for your great work. It's quite refreshing to read. Anyway am a new Author so my words are guinine. My novel is 'God Of Souls.' Good luck*
Hey author in which chapter does he awaken the system there was a system tag so plz reply
I really liked this book till I read chapter 636 and the MC too that stupid little dog! I ended up stop reading it because the wolf witch was awesome got replaced by the stupid little dog that cant do anything!! So I want to know from anyone that has read past chapter 636 if the stupid dog gets taken out or not?? If it does then Ill start to read it again but if not then I definitely wont and I will delete this book from my list because it probably wont get taken out. so if someone can let me know that would be awesome!
This story gives, I Was Caught up in a Hero Summoning, but That World Is at Peace, vibes. And by going by how enjoyable that story turned out to be and how this story is shaping up I am thoroughly exited. It's been a while since I found a genuinely enjoyable story. Keep up the good work! (ﾉ≧∀≦)ﾉ
I really really really liked this book so much and It is/was one of the best book I have read and it sucks that its not going to keep going!!! I really really wish it did and wish for the author to see it through!! I know there where a lot of other people that where reading it too so it wasnt just a couple... so it was definitely worth it to keep the book going but I guess the author just gave up and it sucks and!! I just cant believe that someone would start to write such an awesome book and then jsut stop for no reason at all or at least didnt say anything about it!!! I really really really hope that the author comes back and starts up again and finishes the book!!!
i will give it a 5star cause i like this novel I really like it! so author don't drop this Master piece of your's 🥹❤️
R there no more chapters coming out??? It really sucks!! I really loved this book and to be honest I wanyed to see how it all played out in the end!! But I would have hoped that all of the people that r connected to the MC would live even the maids because it would have suck if they die! I really hope and wish that this book keeps going!!
So is this book done?? Like it hasnt come out what any pages in a long time?? It would really really suck if thats the case because honestly its really really good book and it doesnt get old!! I would at least like to know whats happening...
How come no more chapters have been coming out recently!!??? I really really love this book and its awesome and really really want it to keep going for awhile!!! So I hope it keeps going and chapters start to come out again!!!
30+ chapters in and I felt like I was slogging through words instead of actually enjoying a story, the information dump from the first 20 chapters is insane, most of the knowledge that was presented actually wasn't even relevant in the state of the story.
I really llove thos book. I hope that it keeps going and dosent stop for awhile!! Its one of the best books out there!
I wont say how good the story is author (spoiler - insanely good for "me" ) . Now i will criticize . I do this because i like your story man . 1. TOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH SMUT CHAPTERS , Its boring to the point i started skipping and scrolling the chaps while just keep an eye for any interesting bits of info i may miss . Please its not that u are bad at writing these , but that u your story and lore that u are creating is far more entertaining than the smut that i can just read anywhere . Hope u understand . Ik u already wrote above 1000 chaps and this is useless to u now - but i want u to remember this for the future , that's all . 2. There is literally nothing else to say , but for the SAKE OF SAYING THIS I WILL SAY IT - Your story is a SILVER thats present along side trash , hence u will gain attention . But it is not DIAMOND by any means , hope u can continue improving your skills , so i can one day enjoy some more of your content .
Story is rated higher than it should be. Character Design is pretty mediocre at best... World background is the same. Story development is mid at the best honestly... the author has this really awful habit of repeating things that have already been said by some character or has already been mentioned by the author many many times. If it was once or twice it'd be no problem. I could even be ok with 3 or 4 times. The author will repeat things like 10 times which is just annoying as can be. It's like the author has little to no memory of what occurred in the novel. That and/or doesn't take or make note of things happening or have happened in the story. I've seen comments here and there saying it's slice of life to excuse some complaints people have. I just want to say slice of life doesn't excuse poor writing. I feel like the story could have been quite fun but after many chapters I just find myself annoyed.
while the story is decent, it's not good enough to make me pay fifty dollars to unlock a hundred chapters after chapter forty-five. With over forty percent of the story being ramblings, repeating information that was said or other non important things added in to pad word count and add more chapters
I think this author is ded. You should all send him castles to revive him or there will be no ending for this novel. Also, this author is harassing me in dms, please send help before it’s too late. (Or send him castles to motivate him enough to write whatever he’s writing in this book.)
I really really like this book and want it to keep going!!! I hope that u keep up with the chapters u have been putting out!! I would love to be cought to when new chapters come out but I cant its to expensive for me so I can only wait till the chapters r able to use passes or I can buy that chapter but having to buy the premium chapters then buying the chapters that come after that is a lot for me but I really cant wait to see the next chapter come!!! Every day I check to see if any updates have happened to the book because I want to see what happens next and how everything is going and in what direction!!! Hope u keep the book going its going great so far!!
Hay author is there anything u can do about how many chapters ahead u go??? because it says that it wont release anymore chapters till u r 40 chapters ahead and if someone wants to keep up with the story and read every chapter that comes out right away they havw to pay over 3000 coins just to be able to keep up with the chapters that come out!! Is there anything u can do or talk/complain to the app so its not so expensive and so we dont have to wait for so many chapters to come out .... like maybe have it set for like 15 or 20 at most if they have to really do it because its almost impossible for people to pay over 3000 coins a month and that just for 1 month to keep reading when chapters come out thats not including the next months or after that and its not like the readers get anything special out of it except to be able to read 40 chapters ahead of everyone else!! So It would be a great help of u can talk to them to see if they can lower it and everything so people can keep up with the chapters u put out right away.... but if it doesnt happen then I guess u dont want to people to read them right away because u might not want comments on them and all that like what has been happening... but I hope it gets fixed really really soon!!!
👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 Has the MCs mother tried to become stronger yet or whats up with her??? I mean with everything thats going on u would think she would want to get as strong as possible so she could protect the people and life she has/had here... And how come the MC hasnt called his mother out on how stronget she is??? I mean he supposed to really really smart right so how has he not cought on by now or anyone else for that matter???
I juzt got done reading the new chapters from 1146 -1150 and I have to say they r pretty good!! I did leave comments and Ideas on some of the chapters that I think should be implied and I honestly think that it would make the book better!!
I really llove this book!!! The only I dont like is the 2 dogs!!! I dont believe they should be around at all they need to go.... Honestly I have them.... I really really hate them!!! they r just dogs and nothing else then need to go back where there from!!!! But I was wondering if if u the AUTHOR can do a mass release up to where just before everyone starts to hit the fan with the Apocalypse in everything and have it stop where the MC is just about to explode and evolve into some kind of demonic vampire and how he become into the state of the being in that demonic state and everything!!! or at least release more chapters if possible please!!! I really want to see this battle.... lol
I just got done with the newest chapter and everything is looking really good so far but while I was reading it I was just thinking back to when the MC and his friends where getting all of the contacts from all of the higher beings and honestly I think the MC should have had his 2 friends back away with the other then release all his aura and the have him have a ball of each element floating behind him with his eyes red and his nail and hands tuned into knifes and have him become basically demonic and have him floating saying hes going to kill all of them just for thinking this way a show and to mess with peoples lifes like this and all that and have him start going after one of them but only to have him mom and aunt come out before him and have him kinda tell them if they dont wish to die they will move now and all that havw have his mother look at him with interest and sadness and have his aunt just be her but scenes the didnt happen y not have something like this happen before he goes off to see the celestial being thing that he supposed to go see but have have all of his wifes and maids and aunts and lovers and basically the hole royal clan come out to stop him and to have everything blocked and only have his wifes and maids aunts and lovers be able to talk with and maybe have a fight break out or something between him and his wife and aunts and lovers scenes his maids cant hurt him and this after its done have them all go back to the castle and wait for him to be up and have them all talk to him and figure out what happened and all that only to have everyone know about the other world and everything and maybe have it be his subconsciousness, and consciousness doing weird things or whatever or have it so that all of his memories from there start to finally fade away and he doesnt remember after he talks to them or something... Im sure U THE AUTHOR can come up with something better then what I did... but I think this would be an epic chapter or couple chapters with how it would go and how they would feel and see him and be able to tell something was wrong and it would be after everyone ascends to the next rank and when it happens have it so that everyone can feel the MCs aura but maybe not be effected by it this way they can tell how strong he is and everything more then just his own rank and for the ones that r on the same rank or around there and r not supremes they have to stand to the side with the maids to cover them and protect them as they watch if they can handle it like his cousin and maybe his sister too if she cant handle it but she should be able too... U THE AUTHOR would have to put in the details and everything but it would be really cool to be able to see this befor ehe gose and even before he spends time with his wifes and lovers and everyone and this way he cannhave time with them and even settle his own being after something like happens and maybe have him remember what happened but he couldnt stop because he was so mad or because the halo effected him while he was thinking of something sad or whatever or his old world or whatever and if u dont have his memories from his old world stat to vanish then at least have him tell everyone when he wakes up and have everyone at the castle waiting for him to be up and maybe seeing everyone there when he wakes up have him try to run or something but before he can have his mother stop him and have him start to explain where he lost it to his mother and have his other world stuff slip from his tongue this way he has to explain it to everybody but he dont have to go into details like he did with his mother but not be really vague about it either!! like this would definitely be and epic couple of chapters.... I really hope u use it!!
The story is full of Yuri and there is not even Yuri tag bro, don't do this dude. Just put the Yuri tag. Not all of the readers have cuck fetish like you.
I should start by saying I like this novel inspite of its many glaring flaws. Most of the s*x scenes are well done, and the novel started very strong and honestly stayed that way up until after the wedding arc and only really started falling apart around chapter 900 with this cooking quest/arc, but I will speak more of that later. Many, if not all, of the problems that I have with the series stems from the Author forgetting things that happened earlyier in the book, or getting over ambitious and including too much and straying away from the core of the story. Infact I feel like that is the biggest complaint I have. Why is it that in Vampire's Slice of Life, we have to have some annoying conspiracy happening in the world, timeskips that seem to be unreasonably long for no reason (trippling the MC's age) and have the MC persue cultivation like no tomorrow? To add onto that, the MC is a reincarnator (which is fine) but their is also a regressor who has a system, a bunch of other worlds/cultivation types, gods, and Chosen Ones too. Oh and the MC just gets a system too and never even touches it or uses it. The majority of the time this novel feels like a weird mash of cultivation plus chaos, and all of the best chapters are the ones that actually feel like Slice of Life. I think my favorite arc was the Elven arc because of this. I even like the training arcs (when they arent just timeskipped because why would we include that slice of life content) and this includes the breif bit where Lith was in the Chi world. I feel like the Author needs to sit down and actually reread through the story so far.
For 900 chapters did I read this and think it was an ok story. But then the 5th arc started and destroyed the novel. Lith has LITERALLY spent more time sleeping than being with his loved ones. Where is the slice of life in that? He has spent most of his time with two guys and a friend zoned girl than with the people he loves. This is supposed to be a romance story, but he has spent more time away from family and more time with friends by a 10 to 1 ratio. Is he secretly gay or something? Not to mention the author goes on to keep saying that he is now a vampire and above human morals, but proceeds to go on a 200 year long fiasco over some low level taunt by a person he LITERALLY hasn't known for 5 minutes. What do you even say to that? What was the point? I can't stress this enough. Lith would rather go around goofing off than spend time with his family. Also, he is a serious beta male. I mean this in all honesty and seriousness. Lith never has any negative emotion towards his females. He doesn't get angry, frustrated, or upset; even when they physically and verbally abuse him. He just says that they are doing it out of love and worry, and then take whatever punishment they dish out with zero complaints.
why is Lucifer having the same profile as the book eating magician character
One of the best novel to pass time, Author please continue your work...And there is no Ntr here...The guys here are just insecure incels... Amazing work please continue ✨
Thanks for your great work. It's quite refreshing to read. Anyway am a new Author so my words are guinine. My novel is 'God Of Souls.' Good luck*
Hey author in which chapter does he awaken the system there was a system tag so plz reply
I really liked this book till I read chapter 636 and the MC too that stupid little dog! I ended up stop reading it because the wolf witch was awesome got replaced by the stupid little dog that cant do anything!! So I want to know from anyone that has read past chapter 636 if the stupid dog gets taken out or not?? If it does then Ill start to read it again but if not then I definitely wont and I will delete this book from my list because it probably wont get taken out. so if someone can let me know that would be awesome!
This story gives, I Was Caught up in a Hero Summoning, but That World Is at Peace, vibes. And by going by how enjoyable that story turned out to be and how this story is shaping up I am thoroughly exited. It's been a while since I found a genuinely enjoyable story. Keep up the good work! (ﾉ≧∀≦)ﾉ