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a very good Naruto fanfiction, actually one of the best, it's a self insert obviously, even with the Gamer element the Mc is not OP, at least not for the rest of the world level, a very different Naruto who is good at making decisions and judging characters, besides The 3rd Hokage is not a scapegoat to the plot like the rest of the fanfics, so far Danzo is not a focal point of the story, and the Uchiha are safe so far, so I would very much recommend this for anyone.
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They say Naruto With a Gamer system, they also say shikakmaru fic but what about Monster:online? Wheres Monster:online? I do not know even myself but god do i pray
i hope there were more chapters but overall a good read i am just writing this for the word requirement
up to the current chapter (48) o think the books doing really well if you wish to know why it's not 5 stars well it's simple honestly its a fanfic of naruto so the world background is well anyone who knows naruto knows it to begin with so i can't really rate it as anything since nothing has been done to it yet hence the average score (that said leaving the world as is honestly works very well in your story so i don't really suggest changing anything thou you could at au stuff about some not really known villages if you felt like it?) anyways I'm enjoying the content so far and keep up the good work author
В общем это канон только с системой геймера, Наруто такой же всех любит и прощает смысла читать это я не вижу....................................................................,......................,.................................
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Me pare muy interesante como se esta desarrollando gracias autor-Sam además espero saber quien es su pareja ya que esto es una historia historia aparte del canon espero que no sea narhina
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The infrequent updates do kill the story since for something relevant to happen requires multiple chapters and unstable nature of chapter release kill the experience.
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good writing.. but I find that you have a little change in the personalities of this one, which I did not like. I hope he focuses on upgrading his strength rather than developing relationships.
this be very good now back to waiting for a couple days..........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Nice story calm................😀😃😄😁😁😄😃😀😁😄😃😁😀😁😁😀😄😄🙂😄😃😄🙂😁😁🙂😁🙂😄😄😃😄😀😁😀😁😁😁😃😁😀😁😄😀😁😀😁😀😄[img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update]
It is an interesting story with a lot of potential which I really want author to fully use. Furthermore this system makes Naruto smarter rather than a knucklehead and not too op. Current development indicates that author might change the cannon like his interaction and relations with Uchiha clan. Really hope that this trajectory remain positive with correct amount of development in story, characters and romance. Don't be burdened by our expectations author. Take your time and write with peace of mind. You can take some points in our comments if it suits you.
Fam this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far 😊👍
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Amazing writing quality and pacing so far story is great and the power progression is very good too.
Amazing grammar and is good in describing choices and emotions. There's character development and the author describes thoughts of characters very well. Its unique in several ways 1.non reincarnated mc (Besides being asuras reincarnation) with cheat not the usual reincarnated mc that met rob and got gamer (still like those tho). 2.not ďùmbàśş naruto 3.no instant dungeon grinding 4.shows that naruto is still naruto and not completely ooc 5.gives naruto the perks he should have (not actual perks) ex. Crazy stamina, Crazy healing factor, intelligence, talent in seals, good senses and him being trained Overall its a amazing fic and would recommend reading it even if you don't usually read non reincarnation fic im pretty sure you will like it if not love it
What about shikimaru self insert fic??? ………………………………………………………………………………………,,…………………….……………………………………………………… why?
Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say.
Its very good, not boring and it gets you hooked up, not spoiling important things but i like the system and how he learns things quick, the books disappear but with his caligraphy making a copy aint difficult
a very good Naruto fanfiction, actually one of the best, it's a self insert obviously, even with the Gamer element the Mc is not OP, at least not for the rest of the world level, a very different Naruto who is good at making decisions and judging characters, besides The 3rd Hokage is not a scapegoat to the plot like the rest of the fanfics, so far Danzo is not a focal point of the story, and the Uchiha are safe so far, so I would very much recommend this for anyone.
揭示劇透 They say Naruto With a Gamer system, they also say shikakmaru fic but what about Monster:online? Wheres Monster:online? I do not know even myself but god do i pray
i hope there were more chapters but overall a good read i am just writing this for the word requirement
up to the current chapter (48) o think the books doing really well if you wish to know why it's not 5 stars well it's simple honestly its a fanfic of naruto so the world background is well anyone who knows naruto knows it to begin with so i can't really rate it as anything since nothing has been done to it yet hence the average score (that said leaving the world as is honestly works very well in your story so i don't really suggest changing anything thou you could at au stuff about some not really known villages if you felt like it?) anyways I'm enjoying the content so far and keep up the good work author
В общем это канон только с системой геймера, Наруто такой же всех любит и прощает смысла читать это я не вижу....................................................................,......................,.................................
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Me pare muy interesante como se esta desarrollando gracias autor-Sam además espero saber quien es su pareja ya que esto es una historia historia aparte del canon espero que no sea narhina
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The infrequent updates do kill the story since for something relevant to happen requires multiple chapters and unstable nature of chapter release kill the experience.
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good writing.. but I find that you have a little change in the personalities of this one, which I did not like. I hope he focuses on upgrading his strength rather than developing relationships.
this be very good now back to waiting for a couple days..........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Nice story calm................😀😃😄😁😁😄😃😀😁😄😃😁😀😁😁😀😄😄🙂😄😃😄🙂😁😁🙂😁🙂😄😄😃😄😀😁😀😁😁😁😃😁😀😁😄😀😁😀😁😀😄[img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update]
It is an interesting story with a lot of potential which I really want author to fully use. Furthermore this system makes Naruto smarter rather than a knucklehead and not too op. Current development indicates that author might change the cannon like his interaction and relations with Uchiha clan. Really hope that this trajectory remain positive with correct amount of development in story, characters and romance. Don't be burdened by our expectations author. Take your time and write with peace of mind. You can take some points in our comments if it suits you.
Fam this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far 😊👍
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I am enjoying this immensely! ............................................................. ------------------------------------ _____________________________
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Amazing writing quality and pacing so far story is great and the power progression is very good too.
Amazing grammar and is good in describing choices and emotions. There's character development and the author describes thoughts of characters very well. Its unique in several ways 1.non reincarnated mc (Besides being asuras reincarnation) with cheat not the usual reincarnated mc that met rob and got gamer (still like those tho). 2.not ďùmbàśş naruto 3.no instant dungeon grinding 4.shows that naruto is still naruto and not completely ooc 5.gives naruto the perks he should have (not actual perks) ex. Crazy stamina, Crazy healing factor, intelligence, talent in seals, good senses and him being trained Overall its a amazing fic and would recommend reading it even if you don't usually read non reincarnation fic im pretty sure you will like it if not love it
What about shikimaru self insert fic??? ………………………………………………………………………………………,,…………………….……………………………………………………… why?
Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say.
Its very good, not boring and it gets you hooked up, not spoiling important things but i like the system and how he learns things quick, the books disappear but with his caligraphy making a copy aint difficult