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A very wholesome and stress free take on Naruto with awesome powerups and new point of views of relationships . Though I wanted to read more...[img=recommend][img=recommend]
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Si poteva fare di meglio non c'è molto sullo sviluppo amoroso e poi neanche con gli altri ti aspetteresti che interagisse di più con il villaggio i rookie e che dire dell'organizazzione alba visto che naruto e un target e rivelare così l'identità di obito per non parlare della reazione di naruto e kakashi che è quasi se non molto deludente avrei molto altro da dire ma mi fermo qui
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next chapter please next chapter please next chapter please next chapter please next chapter please next chapter please next chapter please
Well, It's a great story till now. I hope it stays the same in the next chapters
So good BEST If read untill ow I have to Inform various people are putting It in YouTube in other languajes like spanish but It is so good Įm waitinh for Next updates idk if It Will continúe but I hope It aom much
It's a great Naruto fanfiction!! I like how Naruto fully using his gamer system to be so strong.. I love how he use his Uzumaki heritage (sealing arts/fuinjutsu), he even can make a new seal to make a chackra construct hold on/still alive (even if in his mindscape, but I believe he can do the same in the real world later)... Why you make Hinata character so different?? I think she should have the same personality.. What make her different now?? I hope Hinata can still be Naruto partner 😁😁 Can't wait to see next chapter.. Keep up the good work author san 😁👍👍👍
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good very very good .[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
.........,............................................................................................................................................................................................................. Very good but slow update
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Дуже добре жду продовження 😎😎😎😄😄😄😄😄😄🫥🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔g ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood
God this was really well written, the author please let me read more of this, pleeeeeeeeeeeeeaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee[img=update]
Very cool 🤙 I'm waiting for the next part of the story🤜🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👍👍👍👍👍👍👌👈🏻How many need “Review should not be less than 140 characters”
La novela es maravillosa. Respeta el nivel de poder que tiene que pasar el personaje para poder avanzar en la historia y no solo poner al personaje todo op desde el inicio. Con una trama intensa y como describe a los personajes, habilidades y armas en la novela como un juego RPG. Simplemente es maravilloso ♥️♥️♥️
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its rly good im wondering if your posting this on other sites i cant be bothered to deal with webnovel telling me to download their app to see the full chapters
I'll be honest, the story setting is quite promising if done right. Im already at chap 26 but, I can't help to notice the grammar is decent at best and the overuse of names which is quite annoying to read, punctuation marks are missing here and there. The plot is well put and can be slightly forced sometimes but its not that consistent, Overall I'll rate this story 4.5 and I hope the author for future improvement
Till Chapter 77: Okay so this story is a smooth sailing gamer fanfic. Like if u need stress free relaxing reading material then this is the fic is for u. Naruto took like 70 chapters go to become strong shinobi ,if a little inexperienced . I personally liked this ![img=update][img=update]
Amazing job done by the author! He’s incorporated the gamer system elements very well so far, and I especially love the fact that there aren’t any dungeons (imo dungeons in a Naruto fanfic are very annoying as it eventually leads to the mc sharing with everyone that he has the gamer system)! I like how that earlier on Naruto didn’t use the ID Create and his stat points as much as he should have but later on realized his mistake and started using his system properly. And ofc I should mention that the fact he is an expert in Fuinjutsu is a major attraction for me. I should also mention that the author barely uses periods and it can get annoying with the overwhelming amount of commas but u get used to it. Personally, I hope for more interactions with Sasuke and Shino (as well as other side characters), but that’s just my want. Finally, I want to say that so far this novel has impressed me very much and it is shown that each chapter has a lot of time and effort put into it. Hoping for more updates, author-san! Thank you!
Es el mejor fanfic de naruto gamer que he leido þggggģgggghhkgkfkkwwlflfkdkslxkekdldkckdkdlfkekxlckoslcfkqpxlwkapcmkolxkfwklsgkeoozckrkfjfjfkoapsfknfoqowjfoxkeioack
[img=update]very base stoty line excellent[img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=exp]
Best Gamer Naruto novel/fanfic I have read to date (and I have read well over a hundred gamer fics). The only thing that I'm upset over is that I read too fast and have run out of chapters, but that's more of a me problem.
it's good. I really it's the best naruto gamer ff, I ever have read. I want to read more chapters but I will have to wait for the new ones sadly.
guys i am saying ...just read this ..................................................... its good ,one of the best I might say
A very wholesome and stress free take on Naruto with awesome powerups and new point of views of relationships . Though I wanted to read more...[img=recommend][img=recommend]
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Si poteva fare di meglio non c'è molto sullo sviluppo amoroso e poi neanche con gli altri ti aspetteresti che interagisse di più con il villaggio i rookie e che dire dell'organizazzione alba visto che naruto e un target e rivelare così l'identità di obito per non parlare della reazione di naruto e kakashi che è quasi se non molto deludente avrei molto altro da dire ma mi fermo qui
揭示劇透 next chapter please next chapter please next chapter please next chapter please next chapter please next chapter please next chapter please
Well, It's a great story till now. I hope it stays the same in the next chapters
So good BEST If read untill ow I have to Inform various people are putting It in YouTube in other languajes like spanish but It is so good Įm waitinh for Next updates idk if It Will continúe but I hope It aom much
It's a great Naruto fanfiction!! I like how Naruto fully using his gamer system to be so strong.. I love how he use his Uzumaki heritage (sealing arts/fuinjutsu), he even can make a new seal to make a chackra construct hold on/still alive (even if in his mindscape, but I believe he can do the same in the real world later)... Why you make Hinata character so different?? I think she should have the same personality.. What make her different now?? I hope Hinata can still be Naruto partner 😁😁 Can't wait to see next chapter.. Keep up the good work author san 😁👍👍👍
more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
good very very good .[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
.........,............................................................................................................................................................................................................. Very good but slow update
Good....................................... ...... ............. ............. ........... ......... ................................. Perfect
Дуже добре жду продовження 😎😎😎😄😄😄😄😄😄🫥🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔g ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood
God this was really well written, the author please let me read more of this, pleeeeeeeeeeeeeaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee[img=update]
Very cool 🤙 I'm waiting for the next part of the story🤜🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👍👍👍👍👍👍👌👈🏻How many need “Review should not be less than 140 characters”
La novela es maravillosa. Respeta el nivel de poder que tiene que pasar el personaje para poder avanzar en la historia y no solo poner al personaje todo op desde el inicio. Con una trama intensa y como describe a los personajes, habilidades y armas en la novela como un juego RPG. Simplemente es maravilloso ♥️♥️♥️
揭示劇透 its rly good im wondering if your posting this on other sites i cant be bothered to deal with webnovel telling me to download their app to see the full chapters
I'll be honest, the story setting is quite promising if done right. Im already at chap 26 but, I can't help to notice the grammar is decent at best and the overuse of names which is quite annoying to read, punctuation marks are missing here and there. The plot is well put and can be slightly forced sometimes but its not that consistent, Overall I'll rate this story 4.5 and I hope the author for future improvement
Till Chapter 77: Okay so this story is a smooth sailing gamer fanfic. Like if u need stress free relaxing reading material then this is the fic is for u. Naruto took like 70 chapters go to become strong shinobi ,if a little inexperienced . I personally liked this ![img=update][img=update]
Amazing job done by the author! He’s incorporated the gamer system elements very well so far, and I especially love the fact that there aren’t any dungeons (imo dungeons in a Naruto fanfic are very annoying as it eventually leads to the mc sharing with everyone that he has the gamer system)! I like how that earlier on Naruto didn’t use the ID Create and his stat points as much as he should have but later on realized his mistake and started using his system properly. And ofc I should mention that the fact he is an expert in Fuinjutsu is a major attraction for me. I should also mention that the author barely uses periods and it can get annoying with the overwhelming amount of commas but u get used to it. Personally, I hope for more interactions with Sasuke and Shino (as well as other side characters), but that’s just my want. Finally, I want to say that so far this novel has impressed me very much and it is shown that each chapter has a lot of time and effort put into it. Hoping for more updates, author-san! Thank you!
Es el mejor fanfic de naruto gamer que he leido þggggģgggghhkgkfkkwwlflfkdkslxkekdldkckdkdlfkekxlckoslcfkqpxlwkapcmkolxkfwklsgkeoozckrkfjfjfkoapsfknfoqowjfoxkeioack
[img=update]very base stoty line excellent[img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=exp]
Best Gamer Naruto novel/fanfic I have read to date (and I have read well over a hundred gamer fics). The only thing that I'm upset over is that I read too fast and have run out of chapters, but that's more of a me problem.
it's good. I really it's the best naruto gamer ff, I ever have read. I want to read more chapters but I will have to wait for the new ones sadly.
guys i am saying ...just read this ..................................................... its good ,one of the best I might say
this fanfic have many plot holes, i not recommend to read it