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I really enjoyed this book. I also read it in one sitting. I have some unanswered questions though. What happened to the blind boy? And his sister?
Short story. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
The story is indeed good and interesting , the characters are described well however there are some characters whose role was not justified properly, such as the boy in the hospital, and the power behind the jade pendant was like some sort of display in the story. Her mother's remarriage was not also discussed properly and lastly, even though it has a happy ending , the story seems to be lacking of something like some twists and turns of the plot. That is all I can say ,since we have different views on the story.
Love it! Short story with all kinds of twists and turns with happy ending at last; filled with melo-drama, heartache, voilence, romance, revenge, and so on.🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰
Ah so short but its great! There are some plot holes that still need to be answered. Rushed ending but still its a great story overall. Maybe the author can reedit as extra chapters on what happened to dome characters later on. I've been questioning Jiang ye, wang yaotian, the grandma background, the dark forces/underground, the kidnapping etc. if the author can further reedit everything and go for more details then the story would be more completed.
Not a bad story. little abrupt, especially the ending. dont know if this is the whole book but at least no stone is unturnEd.
Its a good story. From the beginning towards the last few chapter to the end. Not quite happy with the last chapter because it end just like that 😂😂😂 I was expecting more thrills but find out that the ending ends simply. But still, the whole story was good.
That ending was WAY too sudden!! It can't even be called an ending. More like a last-minute series cancellation. Author, are you okay???????
Interesting Story .... The FL character is really strong and independence .... 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍 Caring and loving her family's .... ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
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I love the story. I wish there were more chapters, but hey, whatcha going to do. I definitely will try to keep up on it. It just sucks it can't be binge-read.
I admit I enjoyed this up until chapter 40. There were the usual suspects - fat shaming, beauty = value, but they weren't as egregious as other webnovels - but after chapter 40 the quality falls dramatically. She goes to live with the ML for A MONTH and it's a timeskip. Then she goes home and NO ONE ASKS WHERE SHE WENT OR WHAT SHE WAS DOING. She skipped school the entire time, didn't see her mother - who cares about her - and NO ONE FOUND THAT STRANGE? What? She returns with HER ENTIRE HEAD WRAPPED IN BANDAGES, and NO ONE COMMENTS ON IT?! It's like the author set this up then completely forgot that other characters would react to someone who looked like the Invisible Man -_- Also, she slimmed down in that one month - it's just casually thrown in and the "reveal" (which isn't a reveal at all) is just slipped in (you wouldn't know if you didn't read carefully). It's ridiculous that she slimmed down in only a month, and it's even more ridiculous that this wasn't set-up properly for the reveal the readers expect -_- And now she's going to a ball at the school which is basically just "Oh, by the way, FL, there's a ball at school tomorrow." ??? That's not how things work? This should have been foreshadowed. I liked the dynamic she FL had with her mother, and the set-up of the relationship with her brother and the white lotus sister was interesting, but they've been completely forgotten about in recent chapters. I'm really not sure what happened, but it's a shame that this has dropped so much in quality.
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Another fk ing gross story where male lead threatens our female lead and then she compromises by helping him with his health, then become happy(?) couple. Come on, China needs to understand that this is called psychologically forcing a marriage. Its not at all a happy story.
starting was really good👌..loved this😘... want to read this novel full so badly😍😍...waiting for more chapters[img=update][img=update][img=update].... i hope it get selected....🥰🥰
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all the best for the upcoming chapter , this book should be selected. I am waiting till it make me interested in it's plot and everyday twist and turns of novel. the my review and marking might change.
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the original eagerly awaiting the book and great taste of how he understands himself so far because without him they would be in the dark about their scoundrel father
I reviewed the first part of this novel, so other people wouldn't have to read it: FAT SHAMING EVERYWHERE. I needed to check since this important tag was left out of the description. However, the MC doesn't only shame people who struggle with weight by calling them ugly. She also says that people who are recovering from illness and having some activity are ugly, people with marks on their faces are ugly, and those who work hard are ugly. She is SUPPOSEDLY someone who did some great medical research and got a reward for it. The background suggests she might have been a pharmacologist instead of a medical doctor, but it's unclear at this point. Instead of going into research because she liked it, it is painfully obvious she does not have the respect owed to patients and even abhors those who have struggles with her weight. Although she's supposed to know a lot, she has the naive idea that dieting and exercise are all that's needed to lose weight. Should she really be skipping meals when the body literally died the previous day? Doesn't it need strength in order to recover? Not in this series because it's better to be dead than to have some meat on your bones! That said, the storyline and characters thus far are superficial. Although I dropped the series quite earlier than I normally would for writing a review, nothing about it impressed me. The logic was full of holes. The mother who supposedly cares about her never took the host body for a diagnosis or evaluation? Issues like sudden weight gain, especially with a swelling-type distribution, can often be caused by endocrine disorders. Among other things, this would have to be evaluated. This series is too full of hate for those who work hard to improve their health or don't have the ideal Chinese figure. Aside from the narrator hating on everyone for one reason or another, there isn't anything appealing--the plot, characters, setting, and acceptance are painfully weak.
The synopsis sounds good. It would be good if story details (such as total number of chapters, whether the story is translated or originals and whether the story is completed in the original language) is given here too.
i really like this kind of novel 💞💞💞💞. i also like the attitude of female lead. what a scheming little female lead 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️🤩
Same old story. Same old story. Same old story. Same old story. Same old story. Same old story. Same old story. Same old story. Same old story. Same old story. Same old story. Same old story. Same old story. Same old story. Same old story. Same old story. Miracle doctor. Face slap. Evil sister. I won’t bother anymore to checklist this.
More Please!!!!! seriously good read for any transmigration fan or a fan of strong female leads. 40 chapters are not enough and I am very hopeful this book will be chosen as a staple .
Moreeeeeeeeeeeeeee please, I loved this story. please chose this story, its so interesting.[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
I am obsessed with this book! I just wish it would update more often. the character designs are incredible, and it makes me fell like I'm right there in the story as a fly on the wall. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
what's wrong with this marrying a uncle plot 🤦🏻♀️🤦🏻♀️🤦🏻♀️🤦🏻♀️🤦🏻♀️🤦🏻♀️🤦🏻♀️🤦🏻♀️🤦🏻♀️🤦🏻♀️🤦🏻♀️🤦🏻♀️🤦🏻♀️🤦🏻♀️🤦🏻♀️🤦🏻♀️🤦🏻♀️ are eligible bachelors not available in society?
Overall not a bad little short story. The ending felt a little abrupt but it all fit together so it was fine. Only 160 chapters so if you want something short can check it out. Warning though the ML and FL don't have much interaction so I wouldn't say this is a true romance book.
I really enjoyed this book. I also read it in one sitting. I have some unanswered questions though. What happened to the blind boy? And his sister?
Short story. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
The story is indeed good and interesting , the characters are described well however there are some characters whose role was not justified properly, such as the boy in the hospital, and the power behind the jade pendant was like some sort of display in the story. Her mother's remarriage was not also discussed properly and lastly, even though it has a happy ending , the story seems to be lacking of something like some twists and turns of the plot. That is all I can say ,since we have different views on the story.
Love it! Short story with all kinds of twists and turns with happy ending at last; filled with melo-drama, heartache, voilence, romance, revenge, and so on.🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰
Ah so short but its great! There are some plot holes that still need to be answered. Rushed ending but still its a great story overall. Maybe the author can reedit as extra chapters on what happened to dome characters later on. I've been questioning Jiang ye, wang yaotian, the grandma background, the dark forces/underground, the kidnapping etc. if the author can further reedit everything and go for more details then the story would be more completed.
Not a bad story. little abrupt, especially the ending. dont know if this is the whole book but at least no stone is unturnEd.
Its a good story. From the beginning towards the last few chapter to the end. Not quite happy with the last chapter because it end just like that 😂😂😂 I was expecting more thrills but find out that the ending ends simply. But still, the whole story was good.
That ending was WAY too sudden!! It can't even be called an ending. More like a last-minute series cancellation. Author, are you okay???????
Interesting Story .... The FL character is really strong and independence .... 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍 Caring and loving her family's .... ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
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I love the story. I wish there were more chapters, but hey, whatcha going to do. I definitely will try to keep up on it. It just sucks it can't be binge-read.
I admit I enjoyed this up until chapter 40. There were the usual suspects - fat shaming, beauty = value, but they weren't as egregious as other webnovels - but after chapter 40 the quality falls dramatically. She goes to live with the ML for A MONTH and it's a timeskip. Then she goes home and NO ONE ASKS WHERE SHE WENT OR WHAT SHE WAS DOING. She skipped school the entire time, didn't see her mother - who cares about her - and NO ONE FOUND THAT STRANGE? What? She returns with HER ENTIRE HEAD WRAPPED IN BANDAGES, and NO ONE COMMENTS ON IT?! It's like the author set this up then completely forgot that other characters would react to someone who looked like the Invisible Man -_- Also, she slimmed down in that one month - it's just casually thrown in and the "reveal" (which isn't a reveal at all) is just slipped in (you wouldn't know if you didn't read carefully). It's ridiculous that she slimmed down in only a month, and it's even more ridiculous that this wasn't set-up properly for the reveal the readers expect -_- And now she's going to a ball at the school which is basically just "Oh, by the way, FL, there's a ball at school tomorrow." ??? That's not how things work? This should have been foreshadowed. I liked the dynamic she FL had with her mother, and the set-up of the relationship with her brother and the white lotus sister was interesting, but they've been completely forgotten about in recent chapters. I'm really not sure what happened, but it's a shame that this has dropped so much in quality.
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Another fk ing gross story where male lead threatens our female lead and then she compromises by helping him with his health, then become happy(?) couple. Come on, China needs to understand that this is called psychologically forcing a marriage. Its not at all a happy story.
starting was really good👌..loved this😘... want to read this novel full so badly😍😍...waiting for more chapters[img=update][img=update][img=update].... i hope it get selected....🥰🥰
a best book worth it for my time waiting for getting selected. asdfghjkkjhgfdsdfghjmkjhgfdsdfghjk,lkjhgfdsdfghjkm,mjhgfdsdfghjkjhgfdssxdcfghjhgfd
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all the best for the upcoming chapter , this book should be selected. I am waiting till it make me interested in it's plot and everyday twist and turns of novel. the my review and marking might change.
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the original eagerly awaiting the book and great taste of how he understands himself so far because without him they would be in the dark about their scoundrel father
I reviewed the first part of this novel, so other people wouldn't have to read it: FAT SHAMING EVERYWHERE. I needed to check since this important tag was left out of the description. However, the MC doesn't only shame people who struggle with weight by calling them ugly. She also says that people who are recovering from illness and having some activity are ugly, people with marks on their faces are ugly, and those who work hard are ugly. She is SUPPOSEDLY someone who did some great medical research and got a reward for it. The background suggests she might have been a pharmacologist instead of a medical doctor, but it's unclear at this point. Instead of going into research because she liked it, it is painfully obvious she does not have the respect owed to patients and even abhors those who have struggles with her weight. Although she's supposed to know a lot, she has the naive idea that dieting and exercise are all that's needed to lose weight. Should she really be skipping meals when the body literally died the previous day? Doesn't it need strength in order to recover? Not in this series because it's better to be dead than to have some meat on your bones! That said, the storyline and characters thus far are superficial. Although I dropped the series quite earlier than I normally would for writing a review, nothing about it impressed me. The logic was full of holes. The mother who supposedly cares about her never took the host body for a diagnosis or evaluation? Issues like sudden weight gain, especially with a swelling-type distribution, can often be caused by endocrine disorders. Among other things, this would have to be evaluated. This series is too full of hate for those who work hard to improve their health or don't have the ideal Chinese figure. Aside from the narrator hating on everyone for one reason or another, there isn't anything appealing--the plot, characters, setting, and acceptance are painfully weak.
The synopsis sounds good. It would be good if story details (such as total number of chapters, whether the story is translated or originals and whether the story is completed in the original language) is given here too.
i really like this kind of novel 💞💞💞💞. i also like the attitude of female lead. what a scheming little female lead 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️🤩
Same old story. Same old story. Same old story. Same old story. Same old story. Same old story. Same old story. Same old story. Same old story. Same old story. Same old story. Same old story. Same old story. Same old story. Same old story. Same old story. Miracle doctor. Face slap. Evil sister. I won’t bother anymore to checklist this.
More Please!!!!! seriously good read for any transmigration fan or a fan of strong female leads. 40 chapters are not enough and I am very hopeful this book will be chosen as a staple .
Moreeeeeeeeeeeeeee please, I loved this story. please chose this story, its so interesting.[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
I am obsessed with this book! I just wish it would update more often. the character designs are incredible, and it makes me fell like I'm right there in the story as a fly on the wall. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
what's wrong with this marrying a uncle plot 🤦🏻♀️🤦🏻♀️🤦🏻♀️🤦🏻♀️🤦🏻♀️🤦🏻♀️🤦🏻♀️🤦🏻♀️🤦🏻♀️🤦🏻♀️🤦🏻♀️🤦🏻♀️🤦🏻♀️🤦🏻♀️🤦🏻♀️🤦🏻♀️🤦🏻♀️ are eligible bachelors not available in society?
Overall not a bad little short story. The ending felt a little abrupt but it all fit together so it was fine. Only 160 chapters so if you want something short can check it out. Warning though the ML and FL don't have much interaction so I wouldn't say this is a true romance book.