Aimifarah_Diyana

Aimifarah_Diyana

LV 10
2019-10-16 加入 Global
徽章 10

Moments 48
Aimifarah_Diyana
Aimifarah_Diyana
2 years ago
Posted

Ah so short but its great! There are some plot holes that still need to be answered. Rushed ending but still its a great story overall. Maybe the author can reedit as extra chapters on what happened to dome characters later on. I've been questioning Jiang ye, wang yaotian, the grandma background, the dark forces/underground, the kidnapping etc. if the author can further reedit everything and go for more details then the story would be more completed.

Aimifarah_Diyana
Aimifarah_Diyana
2 years ago
Commented

Ah so short but its really great! altho there are some plot holes but still. iits great story.

Aimifarah_Diyana
Aimifarah_Diyana
2 years ago
Posted

the story is great. its different from other type of transmigration novel but i hope they would reedit everything esp the paragraph. even if the storyline is great the current jumble up sentences is a bit too hard to read. please reedit.

Aimifarah_Diyana
Aimifarah_Diyana
2 years ago
Posted

Okay yall gonna love this but im warning yall the ending is just so fucked up. it was so sudden and abrupt, cutting off everything that has been build in the plot. its very unsatisfying. i will just be honest bout this. the ending is disappointing tho the plot was great and the characters were beautiful.

Aimifarah_Diyana
Aimifarah_Diyana
2 years ago
Commented

this novel is quite good. i hope it gets picked up

Aimifarah_Diyana
Aimifarah_Diyana
2 years ago
Commented

i look forward for the novel to get picked

Aimifarah_Diyana
Aimifarah_Diyana
2 years ago
Commented

when will the translations be updated?

Aimifarah_Diyana
Aimifarah_Diyana
2 years ago
Commented

wonder who is the one that got caught

Aimifarah_Diyana
Aimifarah_Diyana
2 years ago
Commented

wow the plot twist

Aimifarah_Diyana