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Great concept. You should never miss a fanfiction such as this Writing is great albeit minor mistakes. Very minor which can almost be ignored. Story development is the best out of any fanfics on this site. Amazing concept, you just immerse into the plot the author writes around Pokemon. Character design is very 3 dimensional. No established character feels irrelevant and no conversation feels forced. Every character has a sense of purpose to move the plot rather than just staying there. Update stability is great with 7 chapters a week for now. The author uploads big enough chapters with around 2500 words so I guess it's more than enough. World background is what keeps you hooked. It has such a unique concept that you almost feel like you are reading an original book. No System, No Harem, No Canon characters, No Team Rocket or any groups but still hooks you with its pace and intriguing plot. I would dare say that it has the potential to be the best pokemon fanfic on any site. Just stick till 12 chapters and you will know why.
Gostei da história, tô curioso com o resto porém vir que ela está parada a 1 ano espero que o autor volte a postar os novos capítulos. Os personagens estão se desenvolvendo bem, tem alguns que já peguei ranço, espero que volte logo a ser públicada.
Please keep updating. This novel is one of the best pokemon fanfic out there, all it needs is updates. Please don't drop this beautiful of a gem. Other than that, I got zero complaints about this story.
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i realy realyyyy wanna read this but the slow rate of updats make me doubtfull....wht should i do?..........................................................
Very interesting and promising work. I'm just begging you not to stop writing it[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Am i dreaming??You ARE BACK!!! After soo much time.Dont know what happened but hope you are alright bro.
I love it I love it I love it I love it I love it please don’t drop I’m begging you 🙏
hey authorman I reach out seeing it is jan 2023, not for new chaps but moreso any kind of update on if continuing? if not its cool thanks for writing what you did, was fun and unique.
Fried Frog's Legs recipe: Delicious fried frog legs! This simple recipe involves coating frog legs with cracker crumbs and cornmeal, then briefly frying them in oil for a tender and crispy treat. Ingredients: 24 frog legs, skin removed 1 cup all-purpose flour ½ cup cornmeal 1 (4 ounce) packet saltine crackers, crushed 1 tablespoon ground black pepper 2 teaspoons salt 1 teaspoon minced onion 2 eggs ½ cup milk 2 cups vegetable oil for frying 1 cup peanut oil for frying Cooking Instructions: Step 1. Rinse frog legs and pat dry; set aside. Combine flour, cornmeal, saltine cracker crumbs, pepper, salt, and onion in a large resealable bag; shake well to mix. Whisk eggs and milk together in a shallow bowl. Step 2. Heat vegetable oil and peanut oil in a large skillet over medium-high heat. The oil should be about 1/2 inch deep. Step 3. Dip legs into egg mixture in batches, then press into cracker mixture until evenly coated. Place the breaded legs, unstacked, onto a plate. Repeat with remaining legs. Step 4. Lower breaded legs carefully into the hot oil in batches. Fry until golden brown, about 4 to 5 minutes on each side. Transfer to a paper towel-lined plate to drain. Repeat with remaining frog legs. Enjoy fellow frog eater enjoyers.
this fanfic it's amazing al the time travel fics I've read for Pokémon are ash going back or Pikachu or someone like that never have I read and si going back I love this fanfic so it's amazing please continue it it's really good
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not a review, I haven't read a single word yet but I'm intrigued by it. so before I read this I want to ask a simple question. Is this dead?
I really hope the author comes back to this. It is the best unique pokemon fic. I want the author to know that he could always *cough* request *cough* monitary aid and some people would be happy to help.
I just hope the author continues this beautiful work of art........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
You know once in a while you find a really great story that reignites your interest to something you thought that you wont care about anymore.. yeah that's what I am feeling after reading this.. probably the best pokemon fanfic in this website.. by far, its like path to to power but for pokemon.
hey author are you coming back? please don't drop you were doing really well with the story and it was a refreshing take on the pokemon series, I really enjoyed reading this!
Come back soon😭😭😭😭😭😭.Oya i hope u give his 3rd pokemon a fighting type or fire which is really needed in his Missions he is doing👆🏻👆🏻👆🏻👆🏻
Above all this is one of the best Pokémon fanfics I’ve ever read, the writing quality,the interes ting choices of Pokémon is just amazing this is a 5/5 fanfic for me
Is there any romance 😮💨? 😘 - -— - - - _ A A Aa A A A A A As A A A A A A A A A A A Aa A Asnsnjxjxnxnndnxndn
Good pokemon story, it change from what we can usually read. Keep up the good work author-san Good pokemon story, it change from what we can usually read. Keep up the good work author-san
Best pokemon fanfic I have ever seen. It has a lot of it's own rules and extra "things" that make it really exciting and fun to read. I'm really looking forward to more chapers.
i like it. good stroy so far. as far as i read, everything good. i just hope the MC not get overpowered so fast. we need progress not jus some power up without doing anything.
Writing quility 5/5 it's probably one of the better writing quility in these website although the word count of chapter could be more. It makes it up with its pacing and quility Story development 5/5 so far the story's development has been going pretty smoothly and you don't get the feeling. That just because the plot wants it to happen it happens, plus the pacing and transitions are top tier Character development 5/5 the characters so far have been amazing. The interactions between characters doesn't feel forced but most of all the characters don't feel like card board cut outs Updatating stability 5/5 the update speed has been pretty stable and scheduled World development5/5 although its still pretty early in story. We already get a good bit of information about the world from character conversions and interaction (My rating may change in the future depending on future developments )
Great concept. You should never miss a fanfiction such as this Writing is great albeit minor mistakes. Very minor which can almost be ignored. Story development is the best out of any fanfics on this site. Amazing concept, you just immerse into the plot the author writes around Pokemon. Character design is very 3 dimensional. No established character feels irrelevant and no conversation feels forced. Every character has a sense of purpose to move the plot rather than just staying there. Update stability is great with 7 chapters a week for now. The author uploads big enough chapters with around 2500 words so I guess it's more than enough. World background is what keeps you hooked. It has such a unique concept that you almost feel like you are reading an original book. No System, No Harem, No Canon characters, No Team Rocket or any groups but still hooks you with its pace and intriguing plot. I would dare say that it has the potential to be the best pokemon fanfic on any site. Just stick till 12 chapters and you will know why.
Gostei da história, tô curioso com o resto porém vir que ela está parada a 1 ano espero que o autor volte a postar os novos capítulos. Os personagens estão se desenvolvendo bem, tem alguns que já peguei ranço, espero que volte logo a ser públicada.
Please keep updating. This novel is one of the best pokemon fanfic out there, all it needs is updates. Please don't drop this beautiful of a gem. Other than that, I got zero complaints about this story.
Great book, keep up the good work[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
i realy realyyyy wanna read this but the slow rate of updats make me doubtfull....wht should i do?..........................................................
Very interesting and promising work. I'm just begging you not to stop writing it[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Am i dreaming??You ARE BACK!!! After soo much time.Dont know what happened but hope you are alright bro.
I love it I love it I love it I love it I love it please don’t drop I’m begging you 🙏
hey authorman I reach out seeing it is jan 2023, not for new chaps but moreso any kind of update on if continuing? if not its cool thanks for writing what you did, was fun and unique.
Fried Frog's Legs recipe: Delicious fried frog legs! This simple recipe involves coating frog legs with cracker crumbs and cornmeal, then briefly frying them in oil for a tender and crispy treat. Ingredients: 24 frog legs, skin removed 1 cup all-purpose flour ½ cup cornmeal 1 (4 ounce) packet saltine crackers, crushed 1 tablespoon ground black pepper 2 teaspoons salt 1 teaspoon minced onion 2 eggs ½ cup milk 2 cups vegetable oil for frying 1 cup peanut oil for frying Cooking Instructions: Step 1. Rinse frog legs and pat dry; set aside. Combine flour, cornmeal, saltine cracker crumbs, pepper, salt, and onion in a large resealable bag; shake well to mix. Whisk eggs and milk together in a shallow bowl. Step 2. Heat vegetable oil and peanut oil in a large skillet over medium-high heat. The oil should be about 1/2 inch deep. Step 3. Dip legs into egg mixture in batches, then press into cracker mixture until evenly coated. Place the breaded legs, unstacked, onto a plate. Repeat with remaining legs. Step 4. Lower breaded legs carefully into the hot oil in batches. Fry until golden brown, about 4 to 5 minutes on each side. Transfer to a paper towel-lined plate to drain. Repeat with remaining frog legs. Enjoy fellow frog eater enjoyers.
this fanfic it's amazing al the time travel fics I've read for Pokémon are ash going back or Pikachu or someone like that never have I read and si going back I love this fanfic so it's amazing please continue it it's really good
揭示劇透 not a review, I haven't read a single word yet but I'm intrigued by it. so before I read this I want to ask a simple question. Is this dead?
I really hope the author comes back to this. It is the best unique pokemon fic. I want the author to know that he could always *cough* request *cough* monitary aid and some people would be happy to help.
I just hope the author continues this beautiful work of art........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
You know once in a while you find a really great story that reignites your interest to something you thought that you wont care about anymore.. yeah that's what I am feeling after reading this.. probably the best pokemon fanfic in this website.. by far, its like path to to power but for pokemon.
hey author are you coming back? please don't drop you were doing really well with the story and it was a refreshing take on the pokemon series, I really enjoyed reading this!
Come back soon😭😭😭😭😭😭.Oya i hope u give his 3rd pokemon a fighting type or fire which is really needed in his Missions he is doing👆🏻👆🏻👆🏻👆🏻
Above all this is one of the best Pokémon fanfics I’ve ever read, the writing quality,the interes ting choices of Pokémon is just amazing this is a 5/5 fanfic for me
Is there any romance 😮💨? 😘 - -— - - - _ A A Aa A A A A A As A A A A A A A A A A A Aa A Asnsnjxjxnxnndnxndn
Good pokemon story, it change from what we can usually read. Keep up the good work author-san Good pokemon story, it change from what we can usually read. Keep up the good work author-san
Best pokemon fanfic I have ever seen. It has a lot of it's own rules and extra "things" that make it really exciting and fun to read. I'm really looking forward to more chapers.
i like it. good stroy so far. as far as i read, everything good. i just hope the MC not get overpowered so fast. we need progress not jus some power up without doing anything.
Writing quility 5/5 it's probably one of the better writing quility in these website although the word count of chapter could be more. It makes it up with its pacing and quility Story development 5/5 so far the story's development has been going pretty smoothly and you don't get the feeling. That just because the plot wants it to happen it happens, plus the pacing and transitions are top tier Character development 5/5 the characters so far have been amazing. The interactions between characters doesn't feel forced but most of all the characters don't feel like card board cut outs Updatating stability 5/5 the update speed has been pretty stable and scheduled World development5/5 although its still pretty early in story. We already get a good bit of information about the world from character conversions and interaction (My rating may change in the future depending on future developments )