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I doubt this involves much kingdom building as soon as cultivation is involved . disappointed. it's too similar too low dimensional game . .
I know the author wants the mc to be to the ground,but is it not too much to treat normal people like ants but a friend of a friend needs at least 10 lines of context? or the side charecters that get like a whole chapter to themselfes and 5 chapters later they would be forgotten or entirely time-skipped? The author has done a great job with the starting plot and the rank devlopment of gods.The authour also seems to know how to write plots but not so much as long-term devlopments plans for said plot. Just my randow thoughts tho so taeke it like a slightly bigger grain of salt.
Plz plz plz keep making more I have been searching for a novel like this for so long im up at four am reading it still gonna keep going lol plz just never stop this novel at least a thousand chapters
First of all, It has promise, but could really use some time to develop and nurture what the MC creates instead of moving to the next big thing. The existence of a system completely ruins the pacing by setting preterermined goals and typical narrative progression, and to be honest here– based on my personal oppinion; the Worldbuilding in this novel kind of sucks (Coming from a guy who sent hours and hours on worldbuilding videos and books, as well as higher quality western fantasy books). Second. Do try to be original sometimes. A "creation" type novel like Low Dimensional game or Shepparding Humanity are meant to express the Author's creativity/Imagination. And while they draw from other inspiration form other sources, they introduce it as unique elements into it's world that does not seem like just copy-paste from the originals. Like seriously, Elves? Orcs? Why don't you just copy all of Tolkien while at it. Cultivation? Chinese names despite the Chinese language and the linguistic evolution tract needed for it to exist? Lol, research? what's that? Anyways. While I know that this site isn't really a beacon of quality for these type of stories, creation type stories are my pet peeves, so I have pretty high standards for it. And to be blunt, this read like a 12 year old stole a bunch of elements from generic poorly written webnovels and mashed it all together to form this abomination. Actually develop your Main Character, too? Litteraly a cardboard cutout for the author to insert himself.
The generic outline is there. bit of let down on potential. somewhat rush for several parts making the timeline kinda confusing. however the plus is that its good for a quick read instead of waiting forever for the 1000+ plus chpts to finish. it doesnt try to make your anticipation accumulate before satisfying it all in a go.
A nice read if your looking for a fast past story of a god that shows him creating world and sometime going to worlds to experience and develop worlds.
Super interesting. Def recommend a read. Only 2 things not 5 star are WQ, as there are some grammar errors, and SOU, as author seems to have a weird schedule, but overall a 5/5 :D
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when i hate one thing the most, then it is when the synopsis is just a plain bait. The MC is said to be a mortal reincarnated to be a True (Omni-potent) God. This is not the case otherwise he neither would need a system or faith to do something, meaning he is only a faith god or more direct a faith god of creation. Only because a god can create a world doesnt means he is a true god, a creation god can do the same only in a lesser version. The MC is nothing more than the hand of the system. Said system converts the power of faith the MC gets into CP where a normal faith God would turn faith into divine power. Where is the MC a true god there? he is more like a trash puppet used by the system to do the job of creating entertainment worlds for older gods.
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This has to be if not one of the best or the best novel ive seen I enjoy stories like this where the mc is strong but doesn’t abuse his power the develpment of the worlds are also interesting. Usually im not patient and i skip some chapters for other novels but this one i haven’t skipped anything every part of this story Is enjoyable! 10/10 maybe even more.
Honestly great book. Lots of in depth of the worlds Mc creates at the beginning. However as I read on I feel less and less emotions toward the mc for certain reasons. This is good for some readers but bad for others.
Holly molly youR good.... I wander what chapter the level the MC can create a Multiverse... Ohhhh ............................. More More more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
finally , I found you my love. someone finally wrote a book about be God 🙏🙏 , it took me 130 day just to find you . 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏
You have a way with words that make each read worth admiring, you've manage to paint an appealing image for the reader as your words become descriptive the picture becomes clearer. A novel with great potential
It would have been a lot more enjoyable if Author had given the Mc mental fortitude and mental capacity matching his divinity. I guess Authors like to make extremely flawed characters and it is convenient for plot development. But a wise and mature Mc would have been lot more likable than a naive and emotional teenager.
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Seriously READ it. it's so good, this novel is better than being reincarnated. pro tip=read it and you'll understand why life is important.
Your story is amazing and one of a kind. I can’t wait for more and wish you would upload more because it is so good. Thanks for writing this amazing work and see you when the next chapter comes out!
I loved this story, please don't stop. I think everything you wrote until now is perfect and well writen to the point where I cried reading.
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This is the best book Ive ever read, truly one of a kind!!! Are you still writing this book? I had binged it all in one day, and i honestly will be super sad if you end up dropping this😭. Hopefully you don’t, I really want to see more of Matthias’s story!!!
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Well, I like this even though it's still in its first phase. an mc creator which is new for me so, keep it up I would support this book. 🌍🌍🌍🌍🌍🌍
10/10 The MC is really good and the development of the story is not boring as u know. The development of World is also very smooth its not too fast for me since this novel is about MC being god and its normal to the story to have long timeskip. although I'm still at early chapters I feel I will vote my Powerstone in this novel everyday XD
This novel is soo good! I like it how he created civilization, about how corrupt humanity was, it was written vividly about how Elves stubbornly worship the Tree of Life and not The Creator! Haha... I love it!
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I doubt this involves much kingdom building as soon as cultivation is involved . disappointed. it's too similar too low dimensional game . .
I know the author wants the mc to be to the ground,but is it not too much to treat normal people like ants but a friend of a friend needs at least 10 lines of context? or the side charecters that get like a whole chapter to themselfes and 5 chapters later they would be forgotten or entirely time-skipped? The author has done a great job with the starting plot and the rank devlopment of gods.The authour also seems to know how to write plots but not so much as long-term devlopments plans for said plot. Just my randow thoughts tho so taeke it like a slightly bigger grain of salt.
Plz plz plz keep making more I have been searching for a novel like this for so long im up at four am reading it still gonna keep going lol plz just never stop this novel at least a thousand chapters
First of all, It has promise, but could really use some time to develop and nurture what the MC creates instead of moving to the next big thing. The existence of a system completely ruins the pacing by setting preterermined goals and typical narrative progression, and to be honest here– based on my personal oppinion; the Worldbuilding in this novel kind of sucks (Coming from a guy who sent hours and hours on worldbuilding videos and books, as well as higher quality western fantasy books). Second. Do try to be original sometimes. A "creation" type novel like Low Dimensional game or Shepparding Humanity are meant to express the Author's creativity/Imagination. And while they draw from other inspiration form other sources, they introduce it as unique elements into it's world that does not seem like just copy-paste from the originals. Like seriously, Elves? Orcs? Why don't you just copy all of Tolkien while at it. Cultivation? Chinese names despite the Chinese language and the linguistic evolution tract needed for it to exist? Lol, research? what's that? Anyways. While I know that this site isn't really a beacon of quality for these type of stories, creation type stories are my pet peeves, so I have pretty high standards for it. And to be blunt, this read like a 12 year old stole a bunch of elements from generic poorly written webnovels and mashed it all together to form this abomination. Actually develop your Main Character, too? Litteraly a cardboard cutout for the author to insert himself.
The generic outline is there. bit of let down on potential. somewhat rush for several parts making the timeline kinda confusing. however the plus is that its good for a quick read instead of waiting forever for the 1000+ plus chpts to finish. it doesnt try to make your anticipation accumulate before satisfying it all in a go.
A nice read if your looking for a fast past story of a god that shows him creating world and sometime going to worlds to experience and develop worlds.
Super interesting. Def recommend a read. Only 2 things not 5 star are WQ, as there are some grammar errors, and SOU, as author seems to have a weird schedule, but overall a 5/5 :D
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when i hate one thing the most, then it is when the synopsis is just a plain bait. The MC is said to be a mortal reincarnated to be a True (Omni-potent) God. This is not the case otherwise he neither would need a system or faith to do something, meaning he is only a faith god or more direct a faith god of creation. Only because a god can create a world doesnt means he is a true god, a creation god can do the same only in a lesser version. The MC is nothing more than the hand of the system. Said system converts the power of faith the MC gets into CP where a normal faith God would turn faith into divine power. Where is the MC a true god there? he is more like a trash puppet used by the system to do the job of creating entertainment worlds for older gods.
揭示劇透 This has to be if not one of the best or the best novel ive seen I enjoy stories like this where the mc is strong but doesn’t abuse his power the develpment of the worlds are also interesting. Usually im not patient and i skip some chapters for other novels but this one i haven’t skipped anything every part of this story Is enjoyable! 10/10 maybe even more.
Honestly great book. Lots of in depth of the worlds Mc creates at the beginning. However as I read on I feel less and less emotions toward the mc for certain reasons. This is good for some readers but bad for others.
Holly molly youR good.... I wander what chapter the level the MC can create a Multiverse... Ohhhh ............................. More More more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
finally , I found you my love. someone finally wrote a book about be God 🙏🙏 , it took me 130 day just to find you . 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏
You have a way with words that make each read worth admiring, you've manage to paint an appealing image for the reader as your words become descriptive the picture becomes clearer. A novel with great potential
It would have been a lot more enjoyable if Author had given the Mc mental fortitude and mental capacity matching his divinity. I guess Authors like to make extremely flawed characters and it is convenient for plot development. But a wise and mature Mc would have been lot more likable than a naive and emotional teenager.
揭示劇透 Seriously READ it. it's so good, this novel is better than being reincarnated. pro tip=read it and you'll understand why life is important.
Your story is amazing and one of a kind. I can’t wait for more and wish you would upload more because it is so good. Thanks for writing this amazing work and see you when the next chapter comes out!
I loved this story, please don't stop. I think everything you wrote until now is perfect and well writen to the point where I cried reading.
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This is the best book Ive ever read, truly one of a kind!!! Are you still writing this book? I had binged it all in one day, and i honestly will be super sad if you end up dropping this😭. Hopefully you don’t, I really want to see more of Matthias’s story!!!
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揭示劇透 epiccccccccccccccccccccc storyyyeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee yeah this story more like epik
Well, I like this even though it's still in its first phase. an mc creator which is new for me so, keep it up I would support this book. 🌍🌍🌍🌍🌍🌍
10/10 The MC is really good and the development of the story is not boring as u know. The development of World is also very smooth its not too fast for me since this novel is about MC being god and its normal to the story to have long timeskip. although I'm still at early chapters I feel I will vote my Powerstone in this novel everyday XD
This novel is soo good! I like it how he created civilization, about how corrupt humanity was, it was written vividly about how Elves stubbornly worship the Tree of Life and not The Creator! Haha... I love it!