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The concept is amazing and interesting however I want more explanation for example more information about the Alpha something (I forgot the name) because I want to know besides being the enemy of Omega something what are their other purpose. Anyway I want more descriptions about the things MC created if possible. Keep up the good work😊😊
It's a great and original novel. I love a lot of it. But it is starting to be a generic cultivaton novel. So yea... Please focus on the God more.
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Keep it up and learn more. The story is good, the world background is good, but the way you portray and narrate the story still needs improvement. Fix anything that needs to be fixed and keep updating steadily if you could.
His behavior is childish even though he experience a hundred thousand years being a demon in the abbys but its good keep up the good work
The grammar quality in this is very great. the flowing of event to event is lovely. the overall story concept is new to me but I'm starting to like it. I'm looking forward to more chapters.
The concept is amazing and interesting however I want more explanation for example more information about the Alpha something (I forgot the name) because I want to know besides being the enemy of Omega something what are their other purpose. Anyway I want more descriptions about the things MC created if possible. Keep up the good work😊😊
It's a great and original novel. I love a lot of it. But it is starting to be a generic cultivaton novel. So yea... Please focus on the God more.
揭示劇透 Keep it up and learn more. The story is good, the world background is good, but the way you portray and narrate the story still needs improvement. Fix anything that needs to be fixed and keep updating steadily if you could.
His behavior is childish even though he experience a hundred thousand years being a demon in the abbys but its good keep up the good work
The grammar quality in this is very great. the flowing of event to event is lovely. the overall story concept is new to me but I'm starting to like it. I'm looking forward to more chapters.