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Another simp MC he simply has no dignity of a creator I don't want him to be arrogant or prideful but why is a simp.
The story started off well, but it morphed into a Chinese-style cultivation novel, where everything revolves around cultivation concepts. It initially had so much potential, yet it went downhill, seemingly neglecting the protagonist's wife and family. Why restrict the creation to Chinese dragons only, instead of including Western dragons? Moreover, positioning mana as inferior to Qi among other elements feels unjustified. The narrative also drifted away from the elves and started inserting Chinese names without clear purpose, which became tiresome past chapter 50. I'll continue reading in hopes of a turnaround in the storyline.
As a fellow writer, reader(of fiction, Nonfiction and mythologies) and Religious person, I come in peace regarding this review. I really can't find any loopholes (except 2) in this book. it has no plot loopholes and would be more popular if it was slightly more family friendly(though it is fine as it is if you don't want to change it) and the negative view on my religion(if you meant it in a fiction novel as fiction, it would be true). I am sure you might tenner the religion if you jogged your memory but I come in peace so I will end by saying our religion try to promote peace as much as possible and prevent bloodshed and corruption as much as possible(any believer who thinks otherwise is not a believer in our religion. I am sorry if you wrote that tiny context based on the media who tries to show negative stuff about our religion [if you don't want to remove it you can ignore this but if you want to and don't mind the removal you can text me about the specific part]ThanksBest Regards FictionStars(a aspiring writer and avid reader of all english texts eespecially in fiction)
It was decent at first, but then the novel became too fast paced. Mc became an idiot and the author dont know where to progress his story, I guess it is bound to happen with this kind of novel concept. Should have ended at 100 chapter
There is no god only a punky human ..................................................................................................................................
Definitely worth the read up until around chapter 100. The author fast forwards over the plot that they set up for the past hundred chapters and focuses on leading some human empire on some ange somewhere. Why a god of creation is a king on some planet is uknown to me, even if some renowned creation god wants him to. Lots of potential for the novel if the author were take away the last 100 chapters and rewrite them.
Well... I really didn't find it appealing at all... To me it seems like it's just a teenage boy playing "World Craft" which is a God simulator Mobile Game.
this is more like self insert or wish fulfilment novel. it isn't that special it an average read for me I'll prob skip parts and I don't really like the mcs character that much. the novel feels rushed, feels incomplete it isn't very well thought out and the characters doesn't feel alive for me as it focuses much on the mc it ok to read as pass time tho
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this is like reading something child with ADHD wrote. instead of focusing on one story at a time, author just jumps from one story to next without exploring and developing the previous one. it mixes so many genres that it is everything and nothing at the same time.
Can you stop suddenly jumping from plot to different plot I often confuse trying to make sense on the events. for example, we didn't even get a decent amount of chapters of him going to school and when someone tried to sent assassins to kill him(what happened to the assailant). Also he was just fighting for the empire he is leading then suddenly he is sent a world to save a world from a tyrant as a training. We didn't even get much conclusion to those stories as far as I can remember. It's like you're just changing story the based on how you want it to be and anytime you want. I don't see your writing style improving throughout the story, just a ton of forced and out of place plots so I don't see your claim that you are improving. I hope you can fix this.
В начале было интересно, но потом становилось всё скучнее и скучнее. Сюжет продвигается семимильными шагами, даже не давая осознать его, про миры/сюжеты второстепенных героев можно и не говорить - ИХ НЕТУ. Герой который вернулся из "Таинственной бездны" спустя 10ххххх лет, чувствуется ребенком, а он прошу заметить, познал всё... Это сугубо мое мнение, я не призываю не читать данное произведение. Просто говорю что мне не понравилось (почти всё, хы). Попробуйте почитать, а после уже сами поймёте, нравиться ли вам или нет. Автору удачи, чтобы след.произведения были нормальными.
A very dumb naive mc and bunch of forced plots ,, .. ... .. ........ .. .. . .... .... .. .. .... .. .. .. . ... .. .. ... ... .
I liked it at the start, but he went from acting like the 100000 year old god he his to being a teenager again. It just seems unlikely that someone who’s lived that long would even have close to the same personality they had when a teen.
A really good story ruined by the MC, he’s either autistic or has 40 IQ. With every decision he takes, I wonder if the author just wants to troll us or something.
its good world building is interesting i haven't see many spelling mistakes the character is also pretty descent but as soon as it gets to chapter 81 just don't even bother reading anymore its the same with a lot of other books its good but as soon as you get to the chapter that have to be paid for to read it just becomes god awful with entire sentences being untranslated.
I only have one thing to say...... what a speed!!!!!!!!! everything is so rushed that it seems that the author was in his final moments of life,,, calm down author!!!
chapter 73 was as far as I could get before dropping it. It was a fun idea and some parts were genuinely amazing. however, it was all over the place, and there was no sense of direction at all. It worked out fine in the beginning as a slice of life, but as soon as you started piling on stories within stories, it became too much.
Wow what a great novel, PRODUCE MORE, ahem yeah amazing story and grammar, waiting for a new chapter, I need another chapter, but uh yeah good good on making this novel[img=update]
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There are very few novels like this(being god) and most are dropped, this is the only one I found with more than 30 chapters and I love it but sadly I’m broke and cannot read the locked chapters, if anyone sees this please make a novel like this but without locked chapters 🙂
I love this book! It is giving me a unique viewpoint of Gods who create worlds. It also shows how insignificant life is to Gods. I love it how the MC revealed that he is a God to his friends and family. It just that; why did the Author kill Nuwa?!?! 😭😭😭
Just an author rating his own novel so that others can ask any questions regarding this work. I am an inexperienced author, so do expect mistakes and inconsistencies. I am also not a native English speaker as the language is just my second language, so expect wrong grammars along the way. I am trying to improve myself (and I think I'm improving a little) as the novel goes on, and I have also began watching writing tips, so wish me luck that I can improve! Anyways, if you have any questions, I'll try my best to answer all of them here. Washing Dishes goes Yaho!
The next part is already released! Please support I Am God: Divine Sovereigns of Providence! 😁
Another simp MC he simply has no dignity of a creator I don't want him to be arrogant or prideful but why is a simp.
The story started off well, but it morphed into a Chinese-style cultivation novel, where everything revolves around cultivation concepts. It initially had so much potential, yet it went downhill, seemingly neglecting the protagonist's wife and family. Why restrict the creation to Chinese dragons only, instead of including Western dragons? Moreover, positioning mana as inferior to Qi among other elements feels unjustified. The narrative also drifted away from the elves and started inserting Chinese names without clear purpose, which became tiresome past chapter 50. I'll continue reading in hopes of a turnaround in the storyline.
As a fellow writer, reader(of fiction, Nonfiction and mythologies) and Religious person, I come in peace regarding this review. I really can't find any loopholes (except 2) in this book. it has no plot loopholes and would be more popular if it was slightly more family friendly(though it is fine as it is if you don't want to change it) and the negative view on my religion(if you meant it in a fiction novel as fiction, it would be true). I am sure you might tenner the religion if you jogged your memory but I come in peace so I will end by saying our religion try to promote peace as much as possible and prevent bloodshed and corruption as much as possible(any believer who thinks otherwise is not a believer in our religion. I am sorry if you wrote that tiny context based on the media who tries to show negative stuff about our religion [if you don't want to remove it you can ignore this but if you want to and don't mind the removal you can text me about the specific part]ThanksBest Regards FictionStars(a aspiring writer and avid reader of all english texts eespecially in fiction)
It was decent at first, but then the novel became too fast paced. Mc became an idiot and the author dont know where to progress his story, I guess it is bound to happen with this kind of novel concept. Should have ended at 100 chapter
There is no god only a punky human ..................................................................................................................................
Definitely worth the read up until around chapter 100. The author fast forwards over the plot that they set up for the past hundred chapters and focuses on leading some human empire on some ange somewhere. Why a god of creation is a king on some planet is uknown to me, even if some renowned creation god wants him to. Lots of potential for the novel if the author were take away the last 100 chapters and rewrite them.
Well... I really didn't find it appealing at all... To me it seems like it's just a teenage boy playing "World Craft" which is a God simulator Mobile Game.
this is more like self insert or wish fulfilment novel. it isn't that special it an average read for me I'll prob skip parts and I don't really like the mcs character that much. the novel feels rushed, feels incomplete it isn't very well thought out and the characters doesn't feel alive for me as it focuses much on the mc it ok to read as pass time tho
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this is like reading something child with ADHD wrote. instead of focusing on one story at a time, author just jumps from one story to next without exploring and developing the previous one. it mixes so many genres that it is everything and nothing at the same time.
Can you stop suddenly jumping from plot to different plot I often confuse trying to make sense on the events. for example, we didn't even get a decent amount of chapters of him going to school and when someone tried to sent assassins to kill him(what happened to the assailant). Also he was just fighting for the empire he is leading then suddenly he is sent a world to save a world from a tyrant as a training. We didn't even get much conclusion to those stories as far as I can remember. It's like you're just changing story the based on how you want it to be and anytime you want. I don't see your writing style improving throughout the story, just a ton of forced and out of place plots so I don't see your claim that you are improving. I hope you can fix this.
В начале было интересно, но потом становилось всё скучнее и скучнее. Сюжет продвигается семимильными шагами, даже не давая осознать его, про миры/сюжеты второстепенных героев можно и не говорить - ИХ НЕТУ. Герой который вернулся из "Таинственной бездны" спустя 10ххххх лет, чувствуется ребенком, а он прошу заметить, познал всё... Это сугубо мое мнение, я не призываю не читать данное произведение. Просто говорю что мне не понравилось (почти всё, хы). Попробуйте почитать, а после уже сами поймёте, нравиться ли вам или нет. Автору удачи, чтобы след.произведения были нормальными.
A very dumb naive mc and bunch of forced plots ,, .. ... .. ........ .. .. . .... .... .. .. .... .. .. .. . ... .. .. ... ... .
I liked it at the start, but he went from acting like the 100000 year old god he his to being a teenager again. It just seems unlikely that someone who’s lived that long would even have close to the same personality they had when a teen.
A really good story ruined by the MC, he’s either autistic or has 40 IQ. With every decision he takes, I wonder if the author just wants to troll us or something.
its good world building is interesting i haven't see many spelling mistakes the character is also pretty descent but as soon as it gets to chapter 81 just don't even bother reading anymore its the same with a lot of other books its good but as soon as you get to the chapter that have to be paid for to read it just becomes god awful with entire sentences being untranslated.
I only have one thing to say...... what a speed!!!!!!!!! everything is so rushed that it seems that the author was in his final moments of life,,, calm down author!!!
chapter 73 was as far as I could get before dropping it. It was a fun idea and some parts were genuinely amazing. however, it was all over the place, and there was no sense of direction at all. It worked out fine in the beginning as a slice of life, but as soon as you started piling on stories within stories, it became too much.
Wow what a great novel, PRODUCE MORE, ahem yeah amazing story and grammar, waiting for a new chapter, I need another chapter, but uh yeah good good on making this novel[img=update]
hehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehe
There are very few novels like this(being god) and most are dropped, this is the only one I found with more than 30 chapters and I love it but sadly I’m broke and cannot read the locked chapters, if anyone sees this please make a novel like this but without locked chapters 🙂
I love this book! It is giving me a unique viewpoint of Gods who create worlds. It also shows how insignificant life is to Gods. I love it how the MC revealed that he is a God to his friends and family. It just that; why did the Author kill Nuwa?!?! 😭😭😭
Just an author rating his own novel so that others can ask any questions regarding this work. I am an inexperienced author, so do expect mistakes and inconsistencies. I am also not a native English speaker as the language is just my second language, so expect wrong grammars along the way. I am trying to improve myself (and I think I'm improving a little) as the novel goes on, and I have also began watching writing tips, so wish me luck that I can improve! Anyways, if you have any questions, I'll try my best to answer all of them here. Washing Dishes goes Yaho!