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Time to give a review after reading twenty chaps. 1. the story sounds slow burn but not boring and I like this part. it shows a great occur in the girls' life so i can know their characters. 2. volume two began with mysteries and we discover more things especially about Miguel and Luna. 3. I like the classic theme of this story and I am sure that it will grow beautifully, please continue author. thank you for updating fast.
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Nice story, it runs slow but anyway I like it because it was simple to contact with Elizabeth and Luna, looking forward for more.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
The author has written several books, and I do not know where this book fits chronologically. I read as far as chapter eight, so perhaps the translation improved after this point. I found the book difficult to understand, which I attribute to the translation quality. I really can not say much about plot or characters because reading was such a struggle for me as an English speaker. Based on other reviews, readers who speak English as a second language may find this book more understandable.
A++++ I was so excited to find this book! I fell in love with the characters and felt their pain as well as their joy! I read a lot and this is one of my favorites! I cannot wait to read the next book in the series! The character development was phenomenal! This book has romance, magic, wars, passion, jealousy, affliction, selfless and selfish choices, suspense…and I could go on! This is a must read if you love fantasy romance
Well, I love every single thing about this story, not dry at all. I can imagin them, seeping inside the story watching the characters. the girls have different personalities but loveable. the romance doesnt start fast but it makes me want to follow their story until they meet true love, so yes, fantastic.
Interesting read, story development is really good, love the characters and one of my fav part of this is when you described him, it was done pretty well, the writing quality is great. Overall amazing story.
Let's appreciate the fact that the author is doing so much for us readers. Keep it up. and for the book, it's absolutely an interesting story which I plan to follow up to the end. I am writing this review when I have read only up to ten chapters but it pleasures me indefinitely that there are much more chapters to read..... I am going now to read more. Bye and do give it a shot...
Beautifully written. I like the writing style it draws you into the story and the world created with the characters already well developed. Already I have found myself laughing at statements made from the characters pov. It is nicely paced and flows well. Nice one author ☺️ added into my library!
Well the novel kept me interested even though i don't usually read romance novels....romance is done in a mature way, which is a plus from me. 1. Writing quality is quiet good as well, not long descriptions about how he is so handsome, his face is like the winter glow that can charm any girl on the street and his smile has the power to make any girl speed up their heart beat etcetc...we could focus on the story instead of getting bored by reading about someone's face 2. Story is developed well, at first i didn't understanding what was happening, as I moved further I could slowly understand the story. 3. Character design is awesome, which is again a plus from me. 4. updating stability is also good. 4 5. World background is not much in earlier chapters but it will be slowly explained.
fantasy romance makes my imagination put myself on the story 😂 it's a good plot and character that makes me even love more and interested to read more chapters. keep writing and build more plots that make us curious, author. ^^ (already add you to my library so I will know if you update the next chapter) :)
It has such a beautiful start. I enjoyed the pace of the fighting and the backstory to the children. Quite well-written. It's definitely worth it!
A gripping beginning with very interesting characters and a plot that flows with good writing. Add this to your library so you don't miss out of this awesome story 🥰
I gave the writing quality five stars for how descriptive it is, even though there are places where it is obvious that English isn't the writer's native language. Despite the occasional confusion, the characters are well portrayed and the story flows well. I can't imagine writing as much every day as has been posted so far, but... well done, and may you be able to carry on comfortably.
I won't dragged this books a as an ugly work. I t shows a lot of interest to me so as the mc's way of explaining and showing all emotions. I would love to read more chapters on this book! Good job author
well written in peace no rushing i think i chose a novel which suits autum. pefect.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I love Elizabeth character, she is nice especially they way she is taking care of her sister. Thanks author, I am looking forward for more.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update]
The author here, giving myself a shameless review. This story is a classic romance Werewolf-Vampire story that mixed up with the rest of the fairy tale elements. The story has a mild birth to know the characters well. I would do my best to update three chaps a day because the story is floating in my mind and chewing my thought and recently doesn't let me sleep well. please leave reviews and comments if you this tale. I appreciate every attention and support that you show me and this anecdote. Please join me in this solemn journey in this cold season, let's sit by the fireplace, read and write together. All love and respect. Naz_Mzf
I am so happy that the world has such great writers like you ,i appreciate your work so far and looking forward for the upcoming chapters yet to come, keep up the great job on writing fantastic chapters good luck[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Beautiful story, looking forward to more, I love to see them as an adult. [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=update][img=recommend]
I finished another work from you and I wish you continue it. looking forward to this one that captured my attention. the beginning is nice making me to want more. keep it up author. this work is especial.
I am reading another work but this one just snatched my attention with only eight chapters. the Mcs began a strong shade and made me want to more about them. the synopsis told me what the story is about and Elizabeth is a resemble of red little ridding. I can't wait for more coming chapters. please update more.
Time to give a review after reading twenty chaps. 1. the story sounds slow burn but not boring and I like this part. it shows a great occur in the girls' life so i can know their characters. 2. volume two began with mysteries and we discover more things especially about Miguel and Luna. 3. I like the classic theme of this story and I am sure that it will grow beautifully, please continue author. thank you for updating fast.
揭示劇透 Nice story, it runs slow but anyway I like it because it was simple to contact with Elizabeth and Luna, looking forward for more.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
The author has written several books, and I do not know where this book fits chronologically. I read as far as chapter eight, so perhaps the translation improved after this point. I found the book difficult to understand, which I attribute to the translation quality. I really can not say much about plot or characters because reading was such a struggle for me as an English speaker. Based on other reviews, readers who speak English as a second language may find this book more understandable.
A++++ I was so excited to find this book! I fell in love with the characters and felt their pain as well as their joy! I read a lot and this is one of my favorites! I cannot wait to read the next book in the series! The character development was phenomenal! This book has romance, magic, wars, passion, jealousy, affliction, selfless and selfish choices, suspense…and I could go on! This is a must read if you love fantasy romance
Well, I love every single thing about this story, not dry at all. I can imagin them, seeping inside the story watching the characters. the girls have different personalities but loveable. the romance doesnt start fast but it makes me want to follow their story until they meet true love, so yes, fantastic.
Interesting read, story development is really good, love the characters and one of my fav part of this is when you described him, it was done pretty well, the writing quality is great. Overall amazing story.
Let's appreciate the fact that the author is doing so much for us readers. Keep it up. and for the book, it's absolutely an interesting story which I plan to follow up to the end. I am writing this review when I have read only up to ten chapters but it pleasures me indefinitely that there are much more chapters to read..... I am going now to read more. Bye and do give it a shot...
Beautifully written. I like the writing style it draws you into the story and the world created with the characters already well developed. Already I have found myself laughing at statements made from the characters pov. It is nicely paced and flows well. Nice one author ☺️ added into my library!
Well the novel kept me interested even though i don't usually read romance novels....romance is done in a mature way, which is a plus from me. 1. Writing quality is quiet good as well, not long descriptions about how he is so handsome, his face is like the winter glow that can charm any girl on the street and his smile has the power to make any girl speed up their heart beat etcetc...we could focus on the story instead of getting bored by reading about someone's face 2. Story is developed well, at first i didn't understanding what was happening, as I moved further I could slowly understand the story. 3. Character design is awesome, which is again a plus from me. 4. updating stability is also good. 4 5. World background is not much in earlier chapters but it will be slowly explained.
fantasy romance makes my imagination put myself on the story 😂 it's a good plot and character that makes me even love more and interested to read more chapters. keep writing and build more plots that make us curious, author. ^^ (already add you to my library so I will know if you update the next chapter) :)
It has such a beautiful start. I enjoyed the pace of the fighting and the backstory to the children. Quite well-written. It's definitely worth it!
A gripping beginning with very interesting characters and a plot that flows with good writing. Add this to your library so you don't miss out of this awesome story 🥰
I gave the writing quality five stars for how descriptive it is, even though there are places where it is obvious that English isn't the writer's native language. Despite the occasional confusion, the characters are well portrayed and the story flows well. I can't imagine writing as much every day as has been posted so far, but... well done, and may you be able to carry on comfortably.
I won't dragged this books a as an ugly work. I t shows a lot of interest to me so as the mc's way of explaining and showing all emotions. I would love to read more chapters on this book! Good job author
well written in peace no rushing i think i chose a novel which suits autum. pefect.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I love Elizabeth character, she is nice especially they way she is taking care of her sister. Thanks author, I am looking forward for more.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update]
The author here, giving myself a shameless review. This story is a classic romance Werewolf-Vampire story that mixed up with the rest of the fairy tale elements. The story has a mild birth to know the characters well. I would do my best to update three chaps a day because the story is floating in my mind and chewing my thought and recently doesn't let me sleep well. please leave reviews and comments if you this tale. I appreciate every attention and support that you show me and this anecdote. Please join me in this solemn journey in this cold season, let's sit by the fireplace, read and write together. All love and respect. Naz_Mzf
I am so happy that the world has such great writers like you ,i appreciate your work so far and looking forward for the upcoming chapters yet to come, keep up the great job on writing fantastic chapters good luck[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Beautiful story, looking forward to more, I love to see them as an adult. [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=update][img=recommend]
I finished another work from you and I wish you continue it. looking forward to this one that captured my attention. the beginning is nice making me to want more. keep it up author. this work is especial.
I am reading another work but this one just snatched my attention with only eight chapters. the Mcs began a strong shade and made me want to more about them. the synopsis told me what the story is about and Elizabeth is a resemble of red little ridding. I can't wait for more coming chapters. please update more.