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摘要
Matt didn't expect to wake up in Naruto's world, but he did and when he did he felt a huge butterflies in his stomach. In an era where the Hidden Villages do not yet exist and the Clans kill each other because they are simply close to each other, where Uchiha and Senju are names that scare even dead people.
Waking up in a Clan that in history was almost massacred and exiled survivors is not a good thing he is sure of that. He knows that in this world it's an eye for an eye and he doesn't want to go blind.
He decided to make the Shinobi world fear the Chinoike and their Dojustsu. Make a village? Migrate to Konoha or Kiri? he doesn't know it yet, but whatever it is he's decided to take the Chinoike clan to success.
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A few errors here and there but it's ok, there's not a lot of unrealistic things and it even talks a little about theories of the series. The MC is not a guy who, I don't know, creates moons and can destroy everything with one finger. In general it's a good Fanfic, realistic and with potential to improve
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more details on the background has made the decision of reading the book very much interesting..........................................,......
Although the idea is promising, the story doesn't unfold too well. The first 4 chapters are mainly the internal thoughts of MC and then he changes perspective to another character, and then changes him again and at the end with the internal thoughts of the MC. It advances little or nothing in my opinion
Should have told us he'd be the narrator in dunno how else to put it... let someone who would is better with their words say it for me......
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- 1 Chapter 1 3 years ago
- 2 Chapter 2 3 years ago
- 3 Chapter 3 3 years ago
- 4 Chapter 4 3 years ago
- 5 Chapter 5 3 years ago
- 6 Chapter 6 3 years ago
- 7 Capítulo 7 3 years ago
- 8 Capítulo 8 3 years ago
- 9 Capítulo 9 3 years ago
- 10 Capítulo 10 3 years ago
- 11 Capítulo 11 3 years ago
- 12 it's not a chapter 3 years ago
Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say.