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you should re write this but instead of it being douluo dalu 2 make it when tang san reincarnated and have the mc take tang sans opportunities.
All these are fine but atleat update more then thousand chapter before going on other novel..if you just doing things like this ,then maybe in future your views can only be less and less u can check on YouTube and others I am literally telling u the fact when DD 1, DD 2, DD 3. Are released there author or conversation are released at stable base 1 day 2-5 chapter and continue that you don't have to wait that why it become more interested.but,you actually making it boring just relaesed 50 chapter and making further updates in 10 months
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hey when the next update... I will feel sad if it dropped this is one unique fanfiction i have read..........................................
Really good story. You should finish it. It left soooo many questions until now It has so many good ideas, like what you did with the spirit ring and the power of destiny. Please finish this
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It would deff be nice if this started back up again It is definitely top 10 douluo dalu fanfic for sure And its about dd2 I liked the character and how the story was going It felt like it had the right building towards an op character
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5 stars for encouragement, but I would give a maximum of 4 stars... I liked the story, but it doesn't bring much emotion (even the fights don't bring me anxiety or excitement, something that could be corrected). The writing has very few mistakes. it's also bad that the author has abandoned it (at least that's what it means, if he abandoned even a warning about it)
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is it dropped y are there no more updates i was looking forward to reading it u know im pretty dissapointed........................................................
It's barely passable but you might be able to reach my level one day. But it is not for you to be complacent bit to remember my teachings . Ah how the students have come to surpass the teacher
Pretty Good but I feel like mc is too OP and after a while the writer might stop updating cuz he made the mc a little too OP I like how things are going rn but welp I hope the writer doesn't stop updating
Loving the story, just wish you update more. granted until a few days ago there were daily updates and i hope that comes back either way keep up the great work :)
Actually one of the best in this category that I have read. Good character development overall and enjoying the growth of the main character's ability.
Muy buen fic, es el mejor de douluo dalu 2 que eh visto, la historia es muy buena y las lanzadas de capitulos tambien, lo unico mal es solo un poco la escritura pero todo lo demas bien.
Very Good!!! 🤩💞🤩❤️🤩💞🤩❤️🤩💞🤩❤️🤩💞🤩❤️ 🤩💞🤩❤️🤩💞🤩❤️🤩💞🤩❤️🤩💞🤩❤️🤩💞🤩❤️🤩💞🤩❤️🤩💞🤩❤️🤩💞🤩❤️ 🤩💞🤩❤️🤩💞🤩❤️🤩💞🤩❤️🤩💞🤩❤️🤩💞🤩❤️🤩💞🤩❤️🤩💞🤩❤️🤩💞🤩❤️ 🤩💞🤩❤️🤩💞🤩❤️🤩💞🤩❤️🤩💞🤩❤️🤩💞🤩❤️🤩💞🤩❤️🤩💞🤩❤️🤩💞🤩❤️ 🤩💞🤩❤️🤩💞🤩❤️🤩💞🤩❤️🤩💞🤩❤️
This fanfic is perfect, although a bit too much potential of the protagonist and a complaint about when the first ring turned black, I only remember that it was described as having some black in small parts...........
Awesome start, definitely has the potential to become the best douluo dalu 2 fanfic. I hope the updates become much faster. MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!!
Review: Writing Quality has some grammar mistakes. Stability of Updates is pretty good. Story Development is forced to the point of me making sarcastic remarks such as: Of course it's weakened alone and you just so happen to kill it in one shot, or Obviously the spirit beast wouldn't attack you since you cleeeearly don't have anything it wants *cough Life Energy cough* and of course the panda would give you its ring and spirit bone because you helped it with something. Character Design, The Mc is bland and lacks a certain spark that comes with most reincarnated novels, I'm not bashing your ideas but, it just doesn't entertain or capture my attention. World Background, It would be rated lower but the world is douluo dalu so meh, back on track... we don't get any information other than what's going on right in the Mc's bubble, so we don't know the time and/or what part of the story it is, This isn't good for newer readers and makes it not feel like the douluo story. Summary: Writing Quality gets a 4 star, Stability of Updates gets a 5 star, Story Development gets a 3 star, Character Design gets a 2 star, and World Background gets a 4 star. tl:dr: minor grammar mistakes, good update stability, semi-forced plot, bland character, and very little beginning information on where the story starts. Overall: 3.6 stars
great story cant wait for more chapters really enjoying how the mc has to work for his desires not just given them. thanks for writing this fan fiction
keep up the great work............................................................................................................................
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This is a great story for those who gave it a 1 star for no reason are trash doing that to someones work is not fine so im giving it a 5 star
Great......................... Great......................... Great......................... Great......................... Great.........................
Rating this 5 stars to counter-balance the people that rated this low without a proper explanation...
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you should re write this but instead of it being douluo dalu 2 make it when tang san reincarnated and have the mc take tang sans opportunities.
All these are fine but atleat update more then thousand chapter before going on other novel..if you just doing things like this ,then maybe in future your views can only be less and less u can check on YouTube and others I am literally telling u the fact when DD 1, DD 2, DD 3. Are released there author or conversation are released at stable base 1 day 2-5 chapter and continue that you don't have to wait that why it become more interested.but,you actually making it boring just relaesed 50 chapter and making further updates in 10 months
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hey when the next update... I will feel sad if it dropped this is one unique fanfiction i have read..........................................
Really good story. You should finish it. It left soooo many questions until now It has so many good ideas, like what you did with the spirit ring and the power of destiny. Please finish this
is it dropped ??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
It would deff be nice if this started back up again It is definitely top 10 douluo dalu fanfic for sure And its about dd2 I liked the character and how the story was going It felt like it had the right building towards an op character
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5 stars for encouragement, but I would give a maximum of 4 stars... I liked the story, but it doesn't bring much emotion (even the fights don't bring me anxiety or excitement, something that could be corrected). The writing has very few mistakes. it's also bad that the author has abandoned it (at least that's what it means, if he abandoned even a warning about it)
Gooooooooood[img=fp][img=faceslap][img=recommend][img=fp][img=faceslap][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins] Didi DJ FB TTC FB ttyl th TV DJ FB DJ to DJ TV DJ TV DJ FCI TV UFC yo try un FB FB TV un TV TV th TV TV th TV TV TV TV th tu DJ do un un gg th ugh h hi Hugh th gg gg th gg TV f gg TV th TV TV FB TV th TV th y FB TV th gg th g VC th TV TV th ft th
is it dropped y are there no more updates i was looking forward to reading it u know im pretty dissapointed........................................................
It's barely passable but you might be able to reach my level one day. But it is not for you to be complacent bit to remember my teachings . Ah how the students have come to surpass the teacher
Pretty Good but I feel like mc is too OP and after a while the writer might stop updating cuz he made the mc a little too OP I like how things are going rn but welp I hope the writer doesn't stop updating
Loving the story, just wish you update more. granted until a few days ago there were daily updates and i hope that comes back either way keep up the great work :)
Actually one of the best in this category that I have read. Good character development overall and enjoying the growth of the main character's ability.
Muy buen fic, es el mejor de douluo dalu 2 que eh visto, la historia es muy buena y las lanzadas de capitulos tambien, lo unico mal es solo un poco la escritura pero todo lo demas bien.
Very Good!!! 🤩💞🤩❤️🤩💞🤩❤️🤩💞🤩❤️🤩💞🤩❤️ 🤩💞🤩❤️🤩💞🤩❤️🤩💞🤩❤️🤩💞🤩❤️🤩💞🤩❤️🤩💞🤩❤️🤩💞🤩❤️🤩💞🤩❤️ 🤩💞🤩❤️🤩💞🤩❤️🤩💞🤩❤️🤩💞🤩❤️🤩💞🤩❤️🤩💞🤩❤️🤩💞🤩❤️🤩💞🤩❤️ 🤩💞🤩❤️🤩💞🤩❤️🤩💞🤩❤️🤩💞🤩❤️🤩💞🤩❤️🤩💞🤩❤️🤩💞🤩❤️🤩💞🤩❤️ 🤩💞🤩❤️🤩💞🤩❤️🤩💞🤩❤️🤩💞🤩❤️
This fanfic is perfect, although a bit too much potential of the protagonist and a complaint about when the first ring turned black, I only remember that it was described as having some black in small parts...........
Awesome start, definitely has the potential to become the best douluo dalu 2 fanfic. I hope the updates become much faster. MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!!
Review: Writing Quality has some grammar mistakes. Stability of Updates is pretty good. Story Development is forced to the point of me making sarcastic remarks such as: Of course it's weakened alone and you just so happen to kill it in one shot, or Obviously the spirit beast wouldn't attack you since you cleeeearly don't have anything it wants *cough Life Energy cough* and of course the panda would give you its ring and spirit bone because you helped it with something. Character Design, The Mc is bland and lacks a certain spark that comes with most reincarnated novels, I'm not bashing your ideas but, it just doesn't entertain or capture my attention. World Background, It would be rated lower but the world is douluo dalu so meh, back on track... we don't get any information other than what's going on right in the Mc's bubble, so we don't know the time and/or what part of the story it is, This isn't good for newer readers and makes it not feel like the douluo story. Summary: Writing Quality gets a 4 star, Stability of Updates gets a 5 star, Story Development gets a 3 star, Character Design gets a 2 star, and World Background gets a 4 star. tl:dr: minor grammar mistakes, good update stability, semi-forced plot, bland character, and very little beginning information on where the story starts. Overall: 3.6 stars
great story cant wait for more chapters really enjoying how the mc has to work for his desires not just given them. thanks for writing this fan fiction
keep up the great work............................................................................................................................
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This is a great story for those who gave it a 1 star for no reason are trash doing that to someones work is not fine so im giving it a 5 star
Great......................... Great......................... Great......................... Great......................... Great.........................
Rating this 5 stars to counter-balance the people that rated this low without a proper explanation...
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Good douluo Fanfic i hope it continues again.