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This is good, although mc is op, he is not like other mc that will seek to fight other, bullying the mc, or showing off there power, this is good this way, not gore rather light and slightly peaceful story, having like this is kinda refreshing. thought i hope mc can have a harem, many girl in this soul land 2 is wasted, having partner that can't uphold renponsibility. harem.harem
Awesome start, definitely has the potential to become the best douluo dalu 2 fanfic. Very good grammar, hardly any mistakes. Character is likeable and interesting, looking forward to his development. Overall great start, I hope it gets seen by others so the author starts getting more support. Keep up the awesome work!
i am giving a 5 star review mainly because the story is very fast paced and not boring with unnecessary daily life details please keep up hope there will be less delays from now on ..........
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Me: As the author, I have the right to be shameless and give 5 stars to my fanfic! Someone: Author, you can't do this! Me: Shhh! Here are some chapters on brib-cough-appreciation for reading, then go play in the corner. Somebody: ... Errr... Please give my fanfic a chance so I can see how I'm doing on this journey. Thanks in advance!
Very unique idea which can make this novel have other world travel possible and make sense. need mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmoooooooooorrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!![img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Very good story.. I hope it will go very smoothly. Thank for the great story 😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘
It's a very well written Fan Fiction, however I didn't find fault with the plot! The only thing I think is bad is that it has low viewing! But I will faithfully follow!
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This is good, although mc is op, he is not like other mc that will seek to fight other, bullying the mc, or showing off there power, this is good this way, not gore rather light and slightly peaceful story, having like this is kinda refreshing. thought i hope mc can have a harem, many girl in this soul land 2 is wasted, having partner that can't uphold renponsibility. harem.harem
Awesome start, definitely has the potential to become the best douluo dalu 2 fanfic. Very good grammar, hardly any mistakes. Character is likeable and interesting, looking forward to his development. Overall great start, I hope it gets seen by others so the author starts getting more support. Keep up the awesome work!
i am giving a 5 star review mainly because the story is very fast paced and not boring with unnecessary daily life details please keep up hope there will be less delays from now on ..........
揭示劇透 Me: As the author, I have the right to be shameless and give 5 stars to my fanfic! Someone: Author, you can't do this! Me: Shhh! Here are some chapters on brib-cough-appreciation for reading, then go play in the corner. Somebody: ... Errr... Please give my fanfic a chance so I can see how I'm doing on this journey. Thanks in advance!
Very unique idea which can make this novel have other world travel possible and make sense. need mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmoooooooooorrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!![img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Very good story.. I hope it will go very smoothly. Thank for the great story 😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘
It's a very well written Fan Fiction, however I didn't find fault with the plot! The only thing I think is bad is that it has low viewing! But I will faithfully follow!
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