Danmachi: Rise of The Rampart

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Zero_Onze

I almost started to read this , but then I saw who the author was and immediately dropped it, he is not very famous with continuing a story …………………………………………………………………………………………………..

1st review, and so far I love the story. MC is based on Geo Archon, he is part of an OC Familia with a Goddess I feel should've been part of Danmachi, imagine Athena is not part of a story that is about Gods and most of the Gods there are Greek Gods. . . a little question, since I think MC will aim to make his stats reach max 'SSS' before Leveling Up, what will be his Level when the story reach Canon? and what will be his Power Level (some adventurers can fight others with higher level)

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_VIIX_

Decent fanfic but I don't see the appeal 'YET'... Writing Quality: For grammar I'd give 4.5/5 because there aren't much mistakes. But I don't really know the scenes just don't flow for me during the dialogues. So that would be 2.5 on that. Story Development: This review has been made after catching up to Chapter 47. The story development so far has been lackluster tbh. The fights aren't that intense imo. I'd suggest the author to read/watch some Action/Thriller Piece. Everything seems just so dull that one would just skip over parts. So 3/5 Character Design: The most confusing thing for me in this novel. The only reason for the reincarnation tag is to justify the wiki knowledge. Aside from that the whole University student thing is just written to increase the word count. MC isn't mature. That's a lie. You'd be better off assuming the MC as a 5 y/o kid posing as a 12 y/o kid. His established background and his mentality just don't match. It's like he never grew up, neither he has the mature thinking of a uni student nor does he have the maturity of a kid that supposedly grew up as an orphan in the most dangerous part of orario. And that's not all, 47 chapters in and the MC hardly has a vague idea about his future goal but no effort put into actualising it. The side characters are okayish. While I'm glad that the author is giving focus to side chars, tbh I don't really care for slice of life chapters of the side chars. So 2/5 Updating Stability: ?/5 That's something that you can decide basing on the author's drop history World background: So far the best part of the fiction. I applaud the author for actually doing this part. I like the timeline. 5/5

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Zekril

I like the story but its too much detailed Every action will be told in what they do in every detail that will be in the end forgettin later as the story progress and because of that the story development is so slow.

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Kenrio

A fic that start bashing a good character like hestia can only be trash

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timelordkronos

the author is cruel,he makes multiples woman watch their lover die of old age just because he didnt want the mc to have his lifespan prolong.

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Dagen

Ok dude I was reading your other story but seeing you ghost your readers I am out and will post this on the other story also… it is a good story and if you are done writing in it just tell us. At least don’t ghost us… for someone who writes about being good in bed it seems you have problem finishing.

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GenYase

96 chapters in and the story only begins. Man talk about long prologue. Not even metioning MC is boring and the plot itself is average at best.

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1stDrunkenImmortal

I like the novels by this author. Its just that he droops a lot of them. I really hope he doesn’t drop this one because I do not see alot of good danmachi fanfiction on here.

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ArtV

I really like this story first before ,in ch 6 author want MC life like NORMAL HUMAN WITH NORMAL LIFESPAN. Haah i mean he have multiple lovers with long lifespan, it's so cruel for their. And doesn't make sense cause after their level up they will life longer and become close to godhood

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Hephaestu

Everything very well written characters very cool the world also the main character well what I fell in love with him super cool but I have one follow-up question for the person who stopped writing whyoooo

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Rhandson

'contains thoughts of suicide'..... well.... nothing good can be found here

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mudbloodmk12

well the story was good but the mc kinda weak. I feel he gonna get played by mc of danmachi.

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Priest_Yuri

YO author I wanted to know if you had changed your mind about the fact that the mc has a normal life time because that's why I stopped your story thank you for answering me quickly :)

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SoraCL

Have you dropped this series? I really like it, please continue.

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Gabriel_Rodrigues_4008

man, u work is amazing, please continue this piece of art and dont drop this.

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Jubei_Kemogami

borderline trash and decent horrible story development a lot of it is forced plot. mc is bipolar and a hypocrite which makes him very hard to enjoy the story sheeesh again borderline trash cuz it has a few moments and I mean the tiniest of decent moments but nothing to rave about 💯💯💯

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Railgun_02

Me gusta el rumbo que está tomando la historia y como se desarrollan los personajes junto con las relaciones................................