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After all, I love romantic but I love Naruto I like the story and I fall in love with your writing style [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=Loving it]
Its a wish fulfilment story that is not executed properly, is written in a chunni and naive way... But danzo was killed, so i am a bit happy, so +3 stars
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the story is interesting, it's a pity that it's abandoned .........................................................................................
Fried Frog's Legs recipe: Delicious fried frog legs! This simple recipe involves coating frog legs with cracker crumbs and cornmeal, then briefly frying them in oil for a tender and crispy treat. Ingredients: 24 frog legs, skin removed 1 cup all-purpose flour ½ cup cornmeal 1 (4 ounce) packet saltine crackers, crushed 1 tablespoon ground black pepper 2 teaspoons salt 1 teaspoon minced onion 2 eggs ½ cup milk 2 cups vegetable oil for frying 1 cup peanut oil for frying Cooking Instructions: Step 1. Rinse frog legs and pat dry; set aside. Combine flour, cornmeal, saltine cracker crumbs, pepper, salt, and onion in a large resealable bag; shake well to mix. Whisk eggs and milk together in a shallow bowl. Step 2. Heat vegetable oil and peanut oil in a large skillet over medium-high heat. The oil should be about 1/2 inch deep. Step 3. Dip legs into egg mixture in batches, then press into cracker mixture until evenly coated. Place the breaded legs, unstacked, onto a plate. Repeat with remaining legs. Step 4. Lower breaded legs carefully into the hot oil in batches. Fry until golden brown, about 4 to 5 minutes on each side. Transfer to a paper towel-lined plate to drain. Repeat with remaining frog legs. Enjoy fellow frog eater enjoyers.
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read 9 chapters after getting 5 OP wishes. he does nothing , system is not useful at all , no quest , no attributes , no skills only simple jutushu without any level . not even used appraisal skill once ( i don't know he have it or not ) A BORING MC so what is interesting in this Novel that i didn't get it
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ceritanya bagus penulis, tapi sayangnya Update per babnya harus nunggu 1 bulan, baru di-update.. sayang sekali bahwa novel update lama sekali hufft, ya saya harap kedepannya bisa 1 minggu 2 bab,.. btw disitu ditulis bahwa Update novelmu 1 minggu/bab, tapi malah jadi 1 bulan/bab xD
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NOVEL MANTAP, SAYA SUKA SEKALI NOVEL YANG BERCERITA DIDUNIA NARUTO DAN MUDAH SEKALI MENDAPATKAN HATI WANITA SEMUDAH MENDAPATKAN POKEMON,.. YA ITU SAJA SEMOGA NOVELMU TIDAK DROP SEKIAN TERIMAKASIH SEMOGA HARIMU MENYENANGKAN!!!!
The author just starTed the novel with mc being op and having no development. Also has quite a few references that just don’t Make sense and of course the obvious Hate of having a harem.
tss is this how you start a story . [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap] not even 2 part a i am already boring useless is this how u start story .look man i am just saying improve your start of story because if the start is boring your story it seems bland by . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . ha you are trash ahahahahahahahahahahahahhHbabab
of the story and characters are good but i suggest a gradual development. And This Is Very Important!!! Making MC too OP in the plot will feel that the MC is full of plot armor and will worsen the story and you will be confused about the latest update. I suggest progressing gradually and making the plot, intrigue, relationship stronger
I feel like I'm reading a summary of the supposed arc than an actual novel. I can't seem to immerse myself by reading this it wouldve been good author-san if your not lazy to build up the conversation between characters. also mc build up of emotion. I can't seem to feel nothing about him. I want to write an in depth review. but meh 😑 maybe you'll just ignore it anyway. effort gone wasted by then. thanks for reading.
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Nice story (Don't dropped). Good novel. .................................................................. .................................................................. ..................................................................
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La historia esta muy buena, la calidad esta muy bien, el desarrollo de la trama no es lento para nada,me gusta que el prota no sea el mas fuerte si no que haya alguien mas fuerte que el (aunque lo superara en unos caps o no veremos xd) , en fin muy buen fan fic
i hope novel this next boruto next generation...............................................................................................
its a good fanfic try it out once y'all ............................. .....................................................................
its a really good fanfic update more chapters and new readers give it a try before judging and ofcourse drop some stones and love ..........
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After all, I love romantic but I love Naruto I like the story and I fall in love with your writing style [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=Loving it]
Its a wish fulfilment story that is not executed properly, is written in a chunni and naive way... But danzo was killed, so i am a bit happy, so +3 stars
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the story is interesting, it's a pity that it's abandoned .........................................................................................
Fried Frog's Legs recipe: Delicious fried frog legs! This simple recipe involves coating frog legs with cracker crumbs and cornmeal, then briefly frying them in oil for a tender and crispy treat. Ingredients: 24 frog legs, skin removed 1 cup all-purpose flour ½ cup cornmeal 1 (4 ounce) packet saltine crackers, crushed 1 tablespoon ground black pepper 2 teaspoons salt 1 teaspoon minced onion 2 eggs ½ cup milk 2 cups vegetable oil for frying 1 cup peanut oil for frying Cooking Instructions: Step 1. Rinse frog legs and pat dry; set aside. Combine flour, cornmeal, saltine cracker crumbs, pepper, salt, and onion in a large resealable bag; shake well to mix. Whisk eggs and milk together in a shallow bowl. Step 2. Heat vegetable oil and peanut oil in a large skillet over medium-high heat. The oil should be about 1/2 inch deep. Step 3. Dip legs into egg mixture in batches, then press into cracker mixture until evenly coated. Place the breaded legs, unstacked, onto a plate. Repeat with remaining legs. Step 4. Lower breaded legs carefully into the hot oil in batches. Fry until golden brown, about 4 to 5 minutes on each side. Transfer to a paper towel-lined plate to drain. Repeat with remaining frog legs. Enjoy fellow frog eater enjoyers.
Say hello to the one who... Hello!! Are we going to review this? Yes, we are!! Can we just give it 5-star and left? No!! But we just did... LOL!!
Thanks.......................... Thanks.......................... Thanks.......................... Thanks.......................... Thanks..........................
read 9 chapters after getting 5 OP wishes. he does nothing , system is not useful at all , no quest , no attributes , no skills only simple jutushu without any level . not even used appraisal skill once ( i don't know he have it or not ) A BORING MC so what is interesting in this Novel that i didn't get it
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ceritanya bagus penulis, tapi sayangnya Update per babnya harus nunggu 1 bulan, baru di-update.. sayang sekali bahwa novel update lama sekali hufft, ya saya harap kedepannya bisa 1 minggu 2 bab,.. btw disitu ditulis bahwa Update novelmu 1 minggu/bab, tapi malah jadi 1 bulan/bab xD
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NOVEL MANTAP, SAYA SUKA SEKALI NOVEL YANG BERCERITA DIDUNIA NARUTO DAN MUDAH SEKALI MENDAPATKAN HATI WANITA SEMUDAH MENDAPATKAN POKEMON,.. YA ITU SAJA SEMOGA NOVELMU TIDAK DROP SEKIAN TERIMAKASIH SEMOGA HARIMU MENYENANGKAN!!!!
The author just starTed the novel with mc being op and having no development. Also has quite a few references that just don’t Make sense and of course the obvious Hate of having a harem.
tss is this how you start a story . [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap] not even 2 part a i am already boring useless is this how u start story .look man i am just saying improve your start of story because if the start is boring your story it seems bland by . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . ha you are trash ahahahahahahahahahahahahhHbabab
of the story and characters are good but i suggest a gradual development. And This Is Very Important!!! Making MC too OP in the plot will feel that the MC is full of plot armor and will worsen the story and you will be confused about the latest update. I suggest progressing gradually and making the plot, intrigue, relationship stronger
I feel like I'm reading a summary of the supposed arc than an actual novel. I can't seem to immerse myself by reading this it wouldve been good author-san if your not lazy to build up the conversation between characters. also mc build up of emotion. I can't seem to feel nothing about him. I want to write an in depth review. but meh 😑 maybe you'll just ignore it anyway. effort gone wasted by then. thanks for reading.
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Nice story (Don't dropped). Good novel. .................................................................. .................................................................. ..................................................................
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La historia esta muy buena, la calidad esta muy bien, el desarrollo de la trama no es lento para nada,me gusta que el prota no sea el mas fuerte si no que haya alguien mas fuerte que el (aunque lo superara en unos caps o no veremos xd) , en fin muy buen fan fic
i hope novel this next boruto next generation...............................................................................................
its a good fanfic try it out once y'all ............................. .....................................................................
its a really good fanfic update more chapters and new readers give it a try before judging and ofcourse drop some stones and love ..........
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