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The story line is great and I love the way how you designed the main protagonist as well as the other charcters! Great book author! Looking forward to more chapters!
This is very well written and I'm surprised, just like everyone else here, that this is your first! The details you put in this story really draws it together and makes me want to read more. This is hands down a great novel and I'm glad to have found it! Keep up the great work! ♡
Amazing work here by the author and so far I have been pulled in by the powerful way in which the author introduces the MC. It's only six chapters so far and I think I will keep this book 👍
I am truly surprised that this is authors first work. The way the first chapter was written was truly captivated. Without reading the other review, person will surely believe that the author is experienced person in writing. Anyway, the story is well written, creativity is excellent, and plot is interesting. The more you read, the more you will want to know more. In the end, this work has a great potential. So, I totally recommend this book to everyone.
the author says that this is their first novel and I somehow cannot believe it. The book is very interesting althought only a few chapters are posted. There few errors here and there are easily ignored in view of the plot. Adding to my library!
Since it is the author's first work, I started reading it without much expectation. However, the novel managed to attract me even with a few chapters. Although there are few chapters at the moment, I think it has the potential to reach high places. As someone who has read many different novels on many different sites before, I think that in a short time, even this review I wrote will become popular enough to get a lot of appreciation. I hope the author continues to write in this way and improves himself and we get a very nice hidden gem.
Often times it would be difficult to judge a cultivation story when there are only a few chapters posted. But the relationship between the protagonist and his father is somewhat unique to the take because often times it is a solo ride for the protagonist until later on. Since this is the first novel the Author wrote, there are more obvious mistakes. But all of it can be fixed and hopefully author will improve as more chapters are posted. An example is the use of "quotation marks". (You should be more careful where to place it.) The plot development is still little but it is there and I can see potential in it. Characters are also on the way to develop into something nice so it is something to look forward. All in all, it was a good quick read. Hopefully there are more in the future
As the first novel I wrote, it will always have a special place in my heart. If you want to travel in a world full of mystery, action, war and development with a leading role that you will love and adopt, you are in the right place.
This is quite a fantastic and intriguing read. The author delivered the story well and it flows with great fluidity that keeps you engrossed more to read the next chapters. It has only a few chapters but the story shows great potential. Keep it up, author! I look forward to more updates.
The story line is great and I love the way how you designed the main protagonist as well as the other charcters! Great book author! Looking forward to more chapters!
This is very well written and I'm surprised, just like everyone else here, that this is your first! The details you put in this story really draws it together and makes me want to read more. This is hands down a great novel and I'm glad to have found it! Keep up the great work! ♡
Amazing work here by the author and so far I have been pulled in by the powerful way in which the author introduces the MC. It's only six chapters so far and I think I will keep this book 👍
I am truly surprised that this is authors first work. The way the first chapter was written was truly captivated. Without reading the other review, person will surely believe that the author is experienced person in writing. Anyway, the story is well written, creativity is excellent, and plot is interesting. The more you read, the more you will want to know more. In the end, this work has a great potential. So, I totally recommend this book to everyone.
the author says that this is their first novel and I somehow cannot believe it. The book is very interesting althought only a few chapters are posted. There few errors here and there are easily ignored in view of the plot. Adding to my library!
Since it is the author's first work, I started reading it without much expectation. However, the novel managed to attract me even with a few chapters. Although there are few chapters at the moment, I think it has the potential to reach high places. As someone who has read many different novels on many different sites before, I think that in a short time, even this review I wrote will become popular enough to get a lot of appreciation. I hope the author continues to write in this way and improves himself and we get a very nice hidden gem.
Often times it would be difficult to judge a cultivation story when there are only a few chapters posted. But the relationship between the protagonist and his father is somewhat unique to the take because often times it is a solo ride for the protagonist until later on. Since this is the first novel the Author wrote, there are more obvious mistakes. But all of it can be fixed and hopefully author will improve as more chapters are posted. An example is the use of "quotation marks". (You should be more careful where to place it.) The plot development is still little but it is there and I can see potential in it. Characters are also on the way to develop into something nice so it is something to look forward. All in all, it was a good quick read. Hopefully there are more in the future
As the first novel I wrote, it will always have a special place in my heart. If you want to travel in a world full of mystery, action, war and development with a leading role that you will love and adopt, you are in the right place.
This is quite a fantastic and intriguing read. The author delivered the story well and it flows with great fluidity that keeps you engrossed more to read the next chapters. It has only a few chapters but the story shows great potential. Keep it up, author! I look forward to more updates.