/ Anime & Comics / The dance of fate
摘要
ROB ran out of ideas (which he didn't have), so he decided to pull the truck trick again. This story is about rebirth in ancient Mesopotamia in the world of Fate. Actually if you think these story will be likethat, you got fakediscriptioned.
P. s. I don't own the fate series and the picture
p.s2.0 english is NOT my main language ( I really suck at these, buut i don't want to write story and then translate it with google.. Why? Bc why not?)
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-- 推薦票
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It's pretty good, several words are misspelt but it's easy to get over them. This is a meme fic, so if you cant handle that, dont bother reading, but if you enjoy these kind of fics, I suggest giving it a read.
it's good but the author nerf the mc. i mean why make the him/her op if you will just nerf him/her so yeah its good but its not my type of story ✌️✌️✌️😀😀 (english is not my first language)
You should feel bad author, this, I saw this and became eager to read such interesting idea, only to find dissapointment in reality, this has no grammar, absolutely no sense of fluidity, the plot doesn't makes sense and the writing format is a mess! Why?! Why ruin such a good idea in this way?
The most moronic, goblicky, stupid, lowlife author. 🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕
the idea was good but the story was confusing. put too many extra things in the story that made no sense while not explaining anything
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卷 0 : Auxiliary Volume
卷 1
- 1 How it all started 3 years ago
- 2 Birthday shock 3 years ago
- 3 Uanna's shop adventure. 3 years ago
- 4 Wildlife is NOT good 3 years ago
- 5 Why do I hear boss music? 3 years ago
- 6 What are THEY doing here? 3 years ago
- 7 Haha RWBY scene go brrr... 3 years ago
- 8 Timeskip and horrible discovery. 3 years ago
- 9 Looks like I'm getting a new job 3 years ago
- 10 This job is good (I hate this job) 3 years ago
- 11 Things are going bad 3 years ago
- 12 IT'S TIME TO DU-DU-DU-DU--- DU-DU-DU-DU-DU-DUEL!!! 3 years ago
- 13 You were... a model... for us... 3 years ago
- 14 Did you really think that you can kill me that easily? 3 years ago
- 15 Suffering... or no? 3 years ago
- 16 Am I a mayor in this story? 3 years ago
- 17 Yes, I'm a mayor in this story + Holy Grail War start 3 years ago
- 18 Dream team + Holy Grail War 3 years ago
- 19 Madness Acceleration 3 years ago
- 20 Holy Grail War part 3 3 years ago
- 21 City stuff, and preparing to worst 3 years ago
- 22 The greatest spell + Holy grail War (Very long) 3 years ago
- 23 Something is going to change, and someone is going to help (Nooo you can't make chapter only about 1 battle! Haha battle scene go brrrrrrrrrr) 3 years ago
- 24 The Epic of Gilgamesh, Enkidu, and Uanna 3 years ago
- 25 IT's back! (|Holy Grail War| delayed) 3 years ago
- 26 Problems after problems (not a chapter) 3 years ago
- 27 the end? 3 years ago
- 28 Hmmm 3 years ago
This story is overall a good story. The idea is great and has a lot of pontential, it is pretty well written and I would recomend it if you like the fate franchise, please do continue updating author