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A tasty blend of many popular flavors, in a crispy delicious shell with the right amount of crunch, but not too much crunch. Too many numbers really overwhelm the palate, and are best carefully managed like the right amount of salt. Eat your vegetables, boys and girls, Voren certainly does, and he gets big and strong thanks to it!
Came here looking for copper and struck gold. In terms of story and plot, it does add its own unique twist to the whole monster with a system trope, which only adds to its entertaining factor. What really stands out however is the writing quality as it is extremely easy to simply flow through the chapters mindlessly lost in the story. Grammatical mistakes are almost non-existent and story development is quick. In terms of character, readers come face to face with a raging monster that simply wished to enjoy a better life, something all of us can relate to, and was denied that possibility. So I implore readers to sit down, get comfy and follow mc's journey.
Nice, fast novel with quick pace but world building, system explanation and character background is almost no existing, still would recommend for someone just beginning reading novels
Pretty good read, he devours different beings and can get their abilitie and evolve them. Many ppl blame about Pest myself included at the beginning but he actually just sucked a bit of exp then in chpt 35-36 became a slave to mc who is v useful and later in story got a really good background on how this parasytes came to be and at the same time was important in killing the gods. females so to say are also great and real not some dolls, Roshia kinda profit oriented and wants to protect her sister and at the same time kinda likes him. Yvenna just crazy psycho berzerk, really fun gal. Ending can be said to be rushed as the killing of gods could give us much content but at the same time it is without water and long batles where 'with gritted teeth, indomitable will and tons of plot armor barelly wins(which I kinda hate in other novels when mc always barely wins for added drama)'. Taking a point for fast ending, Pest and too many different POV's at end but again they are not that bad it's just that I don't like when story goes away from mc too much. Reccomend for read, just dont't be too discouraged by Pest at beginning.
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I don't know if the English improves in the most recent updates but so far I been a slog to read more than a few chapters a day but I'll keep reading to see if anything improves if not I'll just rate it a 1 star
okay i read it but it was just so so.i was interesting while it lasted . its's a wasted potential novel.
A good action story. It has good secondary characters too, and the mc is also clever enough. Fans of op mc, clever mc, system novels can read it to pass their time.
it was great untie pest came along after that it was a complete downfall for me .................................................................................
We're no strangers to love You know the rules and so do I A full commitment's what I'm thinking of You wouldn't get this from any other guy I just wanna tell you how I'm feeling Gotta make you understand Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you We've known each other for so long Your heart's been aching but you're too shy to say it Inside we both know what's been going on We know the game and we're gonna play it And if you ask me how I'm feeling Don't tell me you're too blind to see Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you Never gonna give, never gonna give (Give you up) We've known each other for so long Your heart's been aching but you're too shy to say it Inside we both know what's been going on We know the game and we're gonna play it I just wanna tell you how I'm feeling Gotta make you understand Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye
Everything went downhill when the story got pest, Author saw that many people hate pest, and what does he say pest get dealt with in 36. first i was glad i thought maybe he will eat or something, then this dude really pulls up with a contract that will bind pest like this MF is still there. Don’t waste your time reading this made me cough up blood
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Try......................................................................................................................................................
Now I've read up to chapter 61. The novel is good, writing is extremely easy to just flow through the lost chapters in the story. But it started to get a little repetitive, or maybe I'm the only one who's tired after reading 61 chapters in a row. but overall it's a good read.
I lost my interest when pest was introduced. now even after skipping like 15 chaps and reading chap 34, I still can't get my interest back. Good writing skills author and very detailed. I just lost interest because of that pest so I will have to go as I cannot force myself tod read what I do not like. Good luck an have fun!
At chapter 30 therea outs but the story is good. No annoying system, the danger is real anc you dont know what to expect. The plot and backgrou d are good and thr character is decent. The parasite is annoying but it breaks the monologue type communication that has been so prevalent in the begginnig. A good read, I do believe I will be continuing wjtht this story.
Awesome read. Blended with just the right amount of evil, humour, and well founded logic. Sprinkled with a dash of grotesqueness at the top along with the garnishing of spicy plots. And served hot with the pickle of intriguing world development. A smooth read for those want to ease into the EvilMC genre. The only regret I have is that the narration is in first person, which makes me less immersive in the storyline than I want to be. But it might not be a problem for many potential readers out there. My point is, you should definitely give this work a try. Wishing my best to the author.
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read for your self to find out ...... I have nothing to say .... just my rating is enough to say what I want😆.................. and how I feel about the story
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Probably one of the only times I wrote 5/5 on everything and meant it. Story is really interesting so far. I can’t wait to see where it’s going. MC used to be the king of lleh(read backward), got dellik(again because I’d rather be safe then get it banned again) by the gods, basically reincarnated as a lesser insect (while keeping his extremely strong potential wise power), and uses his devouring power from his last life to grow stronger
not review but a fun fact? the 4 arms guy in the cover is the faction leader for the necrophages in endless legends, its a good choice because one of their trait is that they literally dont talk with food, basically no diplomacy options are available, they just battle and eat everyone like any good devourer should do
I like how the MC knows when it's time to back off, he isn't reckless, he's cunning, and he doesn't give up when he's in trouble, or in a bad situation.
Pretty good and interesting. Until it wasnt. In the early chapters we saw the mc being cool headed and making reasonable choices for quicker progression. But then we got to pest. The random curse the mc seemingly knows nothing about despite being some powerful demon the gods had to kill. He doesn't even know how to get rid of a curse. Even worse is the fact the mc becomes extremely childish and cant seem to ignore a insult. He starts gnashing his teeth and whining because of a voice in his head that he should be able to deal with.. but cant for some apparent reason.
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very good so far, even though there are only 30 some chapters. 1 chapter a day is a very good pace, and in no time there will be a good amount to binge. overall, the mc is cool and is very violent, but the world building is the most lacking, but mostly because we are only 30 chapters in. would recommend at least trying it to see if you like it
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Overall, it's a good novel. It's interesting how the author described the MC past self but still leave a mystery. I'd like to see how this novel goes on.
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i can't wait until future chapters so i made this review. i was urged by the style of your writing. as i literally don't like much evolution genre since there are times that repetitive situation happen just to evolve but this one piqued my interest. blah blah blah, i will change this after some time to be constructive.
You, reader, must look at my story and think: "Hmm, this looks just like a bazillion of other stories where MC reincarnates into some monster with a system and/or a cheat". And what will I say to you in reply? Yes, on the surface, it is. But! It is my duty as a writer to avoid, at least conciously, all cliches that I could. To play with tropes, think up original ideas and so on and so on. Or maybe you don't care for originality too much. Many don't. Well, one way or another, I hope you will give it a try >:3
A tasty blend of many popular flavors, in a crispy delicious shell with the right amount of crunch, but not too much crunch. Too many numbers really overwhelm the palate, and are best carefully managed like the right amount of salt. Eat your vegetables, boys and girls, Voren certainly does, and he gets big and strong thanks to it!
Came here looking for copper and struck gold. In terms of story and plot, it does add its own unique twist to the whole monster with a system trope, which only adds to its entertaining factor. What really stands out however is the writing quality as it is extremely easy to simply flow through the chapters mindlessly lost in the story. Grammatical mistakes are almost non-existent and story development is quick. In terms of character, readers come face to face with a raging monster that simply wished to enjoy a better life, something all of us can relate to, and was denied that possibility. So I implore readers to sit down, get comfy and follow mc's journey.
Nice, fast novel with quick pace but world building, system explanation and character background is almost no existing, still would recommend for someone just beginning reading novels
Pretty good read, he devours different beings and can get their abilitie and evolve them. Many ppl blame about Pest myself included at the beginning but he actually just sucked a bit of exp then in chpt 35-36 became a slave to mc who is v useful and later in story got a really good background on how this parasytes came to be and at the same time was important in killing the gods. females so to say are also great and real not some dolls, Roshia kinda profit oriented and wants to protect her sister and at the same time kinda likes him. Yvenna just crazy psycho berzerk, really fun gal. Ending can be said to be rushed as the killing of gods could give us much content but at the same time it is without water and long batles where 'with gritted teeth, indomitable will and tons of plot armor barelly wins(which I kinda hate in other novels when mc always barely wins for added drama)'. Taking a point for fast ending, Pest and too many different POV's at end but again they are not that bad it's just that I don't like when story goes away from mc too much. Reccomend for read, just dont't be too discouraged by Pest at beginning.
揭示劇透 I don't know if the English improves in the most recent updates but so far I been a slog to read more than a few chapters a day but I'll keep reading to see if anything improves if not I'll just rate it a 1 star
okay i read it but it was just so so.i was interesting while it lasted . its's a wasted potential novel.
A good action story. It has good secondary characters too, and the mc is also clever enough. Fans of op mc, clever mc, system novels can read it to pass their time.
it was great untie pest came along after that it was a complete downfall for me .................................................................................
We're no strangers to love You know the rules and so do I A full commitment's what I'm thinking of You wouldn't get this from any other guy I just wanna tell you how I'm feeling Gotta make you understand Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you We've known each other for so long Your heart's been aching but you're too shy to say it Inside we both know what's been going on We know the game and we're gonna play it And if you ask me how I'm feeling Don't tell me you're too blind to see Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you Never gonna give, never gonna give (Give you up) We've known each other for so long Your heart's been aching but you're too shy to say it Inside we both know what's been going on We know the game and we're gonna play it I just wanna tell you how I'm feeling Gotta make you understand Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye
Everything went downhill when the story got pest, Author saw that many people hate pest, and what does he say pest get dealt with in 36. first i was glad i thought maybe he will eat or something, then this dude really pulls up with a contract that will bind pest like this MF is still there. Don’t waste your time reading this made me cough up blood
揭示劇透 Try......................................................................................................................................................
Now I've read up to chapter 61. The novel is good, writing is extremely easy to just flow through the lost chapters in the story. But it started to get a little repetitive, or maybe I'm the only one who's tired after reading 61 chapters in a row. but overall it's a good read.
I lost my interest when pest was introduced. now even after skipping like 15 chaps and reading chap 34, I still can't get my interest back. Good writing skills author and very detailed. I just lost interest because of that pest so I will have to go as I cannot force myself tod read what I do not like. Good luck an have fun!
At chapter 30 therea outs but the story is good. No annoying system, the danger is real anc you dont know what to expect. The plot and backgrou d are good and thr character is decent. The parasite is annoying but it breaks the monologue type communication that has been so prevalent in the begginnig. A good read, I do believe I will be continuing wjtht this story.
Awesome read. Blended with just the right amount of evil, humour, and well founded logic. Sprinkled with a dash of grotesqueness at the top along with the garnishing of spicy plots. And served hot with the pickle of intriguing world development. A smooth read for those want to ease into the EvilMC genre. The only regret I have is that the narration is in first person, which makes me less immersive in the storyline than I want to be. But it might not be a problem for many potential readers out there. My point is, you should definitely give this work a try. Wishing my best to the author.
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揭示劇透 read for your self to find out ...... I have nothing to say .... just my rating is enough to say what I want😆.................. and how I feel about the story
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Probably one of the only times I wrote 5/5 on everything and meant it. Story is really interesting so far. I can’t wait to see where it’s going. MC used to be the king of lleh(read backward), got dellik(again because I’d rather be safe then get it banned again) by the gods, basically reincarnated as a lesser insect (while keeping his extremely strong potential wise power), and uses his devouring power from his last life to grow stronger
not review but a fun fact? the 4 arms guy in the cover is the faction leader for the necrophages in endless legends, its a good choice because one of their trait is that they literally dont talk with food, basically no diplomacy options are available, they just battle and eat everyone like any good devourer should do
I like how the MC knows when it's time to back off, he isn't reckless, he's cunning, and he doesn't give up when he's in trouble, or in a bad situation.
Pretty good and interesting. Until it wasnt. In the early chapters we saw the mc being cool headed and making reasonable choices for quicker progression. But then we got to pest. The random curse the mc seemingly knows nothing about despite being some powerful demon the gods had to kill. He doesn't even know how to get rid of a curse. Even worse is the fact the mc becomes extremely childish and cant seem to ignore a insult. He starts gnashing his teeth and whining because of a voice in his head that he should be able to deal with.. but cant for some apparent reason.
揭示劇透 very good so far, even though there are only 30 some chapters. 1 chapter a day is a very good pace, and in no time there will be a good amount to binge. overall, the mc is cool and is very violent, but the world building is the most lacking, but mostly because we are only 30 chapters in. would recommend at least trying it to see if you like it
good book written well characters arent idiotic yes. just give me more chapters plsssssssssssssssplsssssssssssssssplsssssssssssssssplsssssssssssssss
Overall, it's a good novel. It's interesting how the author described the MC past self but still leave a mystery. I'd like to see how this novel goes on.
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i can't wait until future chapters so i made this review. i was urged by the style of your writing. as i literally don't like much evolution genre since there are times that repetitive situation happen just to evolve but this one piqued my interest. blah blah blah, i will change this after some time to be constructive.
You, reader, must look at my story and think: "Hmm, this looks just like a bazillion of other stories where MC reincarnates into some monster with a system and/or a cheat". And what will I say to you in reply? Yes, on the surface, it is. But! It is my duty as a writer to avoid, at least conciously, all cliches that I could. To play with tropes, think up original ideas and so on and so on. Or maybe you don't care for originality too much. Many don't. Well, one way or another, I hope you will give it a try >:3