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look it's not bad... grammar is great and the story is "Ok" I'm not a fan of murdering loving family members though... as such this fic is not for me.
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Ну давай, чувачочек. Посмотрим, что выйдет. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
read it and just after 3 chapters and am uncomfortable .....................................................................................
At the moment it's a good fanfic and there are SCPs so you will have all my stones [img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend]
look it's not bad... grammar is great and the story is "Ok" I'm not a fan of murdering loving family members though... as such this fic is not for me.
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Ну давай, чувачочек. Посмотрим, что выйдет. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
read it and just after 3 chapters and am uncomfortable .....................................................................................
At the moment it's a good fanfic and there are SCPs so you will have all my stones [img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend]
pretty good keep up the work my . . . . . .