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摘要
Let’s go mess up the timeline of the flash tv show as Bart Allen let’s go!!!!
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Chapter 9: SuperGirl 3 years ago 
I'll be honest Author. This story is good and actually has good context and background, but I kinda feel its really fast and too detailed on the character dialogue. When there's conversation or inner thoughts happening it shouldn't feel forced. It needs improvement, but not bad I all honesty.