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Your novel is a pleasure to read. Can't wait to discover the rest! [img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it]
** "Naruto"** is a popular Japanese anime series that follows the adventures of a young ninja named Naruto Uzumaki. He dreams of becoming the Hokage, the head of his clan and the most powerful ninja in the village. On the way to his goal, Naruto faces various obstacles, but does not give up and continues to train hard. The series features many colorful characters, each with their own unique abilities and character. Naruto is surrounded by loyal friends who are always ready to help him. Together, they fight enemies, overcome challenges, and become stronger. TV series * * "Naruto"** attracts viewers with its dynamic plot, vivid characters and exciting battles. It teaches friendship, loyalty to one's ideals, and perseverance in achieving goals. "Naruto" became a real hit and won the love of fans around the world.
I believe you need to add Naruto tag so more people could find this hidden treasure, it's freaking great
A very good story so far, love that the setting is in kirigakure and the mc is pragmatic and cold as well as calculating, the progress in which he gain strenght is also very good
a beautiful fic that is focused on a character not in the leaf and isn't a translation. PS: change water elemental talent to high, cause he already put exp in it to level it up in ch 21
Like it alot. Rarely see fics about kiri. And the lore you going for is very interesting...............................................................
good........................................................................................................................................................
The goad was revived at last xd, anyway it's a good story that isn't a translation and isn't so focused on Konoha (I think there are already thousands of those but few from the other villages), let's see what happens (If something of what I wrote is not understood, it is because I use Google Translate)
Hello ! Shameless Author Review here! I hope you will enjoy the story I believe it is quite rare for fanfics to speak about anything else than Konoha, so here is one talking about the rise of Kirigakure =)
Your novel is a pleasure to read. Can't wait to discover the rest! [img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it]
** "Naruto"** is a popular Japanese anime series that follows the adventures of a young ninja named Naruto Uzumaki. He dreams of becoming the Hokage, the head of his clan and the most powerful ninja in the village. On the way to his goal, Naruto faces various obstacles, but does not give up and continues to train hard. The series features many colorful characters, each with their own unique abilities and character. Naruto is surrounded by loyal friends who are always ready to help him. Together, they fight enemies, overcome challenges, and become stronger. TV series * * "Naruto"** attracts viewers with its dynamic plot, vivid characters and exciting battles. It teaches friendship, loyalty to one's ideals, and perseverance in achieving goals. "Naruto" became a real hit and won the love of fans around the world.
I believe you need to add Naruto tag so more people could find this hidden treasure, it's freaking great
A very good story so far, love that the setting is in kirigakure and the mc is pragmatic and cold as well as calculating, the progress in which he gain strenght is also very good
a beautiful fic that is focused on a character not in the leaf and isn't a translation. PS: change water elemental talent to high, cause he already put exp in it to level it up in ch 21
Like it alot. Rarely see fics about kiri. And the lore you going for is very interesting...............................................................
good........................................................................................................................................................
The goad was revived at last xd, anyway it's a good story that isn't a translation and isn't so focused on Konoha (I think there are already thousands of those but few from the other villages), let's see what happens (If something of what I wrote is not understood, it is because I use Google Translate)
Hello ! Shameless Author Review here! I hope you will enjoy the story I believe it is quite rare for fanfics to speak about anything else than Konoha, so here is one talking about the rise of Kirigakure =)