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This Fanfic Has A Total Of 1410 Chapters & It's Complete, You Can Read It On MTL
the translation really messes with my head. also, the Mc's goals are ... very fanfiction worthy
I'm less than 20 chapters in and am haveing a hard time reading this since you constantly keep messing up the pronouns constantly putting her instead of him or him instead of her and she instead of he or he instead of she it's getting infuriating because it's constantly happening every paragraph so I'm gonna rate it 2 ⭐ s for now since I haven't even gotten to chapter 15 hopefully this stops happening in the later chapters but other than that I'm liking the story so far :P
é bom, as vezes fica meio estranho e desergonizado. mas, pra quem realmente quer ler nada é demais! da para entender.. pena que não atualiza a 3 meses talvez dropado ? :(
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can someone tell me the name of it in chinese I'm gonna go read it using the chrome English translation because I already read all the the new chapter in mtlnovel
need ..............more...........more......& maore[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
nice author.......[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update]
there's a lot of plot hole in this specially with xiao wu arc first of all how come xiao wu didn't get suspicious when he used a different spirit a sword spirit when he should be a qilin spirit and the only reason she trust the mc is because of his qilin spirit when they're first met, his qilin spirit is just like the three eyed golden lion they can double the cultivation rate of those living in the forest. also the main topic of this fanfic is to capture those female beauty just like pokemon look at what happens with zhu zhuqing he just get together with her and successfully become his fiancee and what did he do after that he immediately leave zhuqing on the spot after they became fiancee to get xiao wu he didn't even wait a day or two and just leave after his capture just like a pokemon
Why do i feel tgat this book is my cub of tea I mean i Dont like tang san i think he is a hypocrite And i like douluo Power system so thank you
Can someone give me where to read the raw of this novel?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
give me the original pliz link ................................................................................................................................
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hard to read. . .. .. . ... . , .. . . , ,. ., ., . ., .,., . ,. ,. . ., . ,,. . , .. ,.,. ,.. . .,. .,.,.. ,
I have not read completely but thanks for a quite interesting plot... thanks to translators and author of this FF... thanks for your time...
nice....good story[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Nothing to say just wanted to show my appreciation for translating this brilliant work of art. Nice job👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 .
keep going....nice[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Amazing. ........................................................................................................................................................... .
First and foremost, even if this is only a translation, it still deserves a 5 star because it allowed me to find out about this novel! Now I can go find the original and read it!
Link de trabajo original por favor! Trate de buscarlo con el nombre del autor pero no encontre nada .........................................
It’s me or the chapters aren’t in order. .................................................................................................
This Fanfic Has A Total Of 1410 Chapters & It's Complete, You Can Read It On MTL
the translation really messes with my head. also, the Mc's goals are ... very fanfiction worthy
I'm less than 20 chapters in and am haveing a hard time reading this since you constantly keep messing up the pronouns constantly putting her instead of him or him instead of her and she instead of he or he instead of she it's getting infuriating because it's constantly happening every paragraph so I'm gonna rate it 2 ⭐ s for now since I haven't even gotten to chapter 15 hopefully this stops happening in the later chapters but other than that I'm liking the story so far :P
é bom, as vezes fica meio estranho e desergonizado. mas, pra quem realmente quer ler nada é demais! da para entender.. pena que não atualiza a 3 meses talvez dropado ? :(
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can someone tell me the name of it in chinese I'm gonna go read it using the chrome English translation because I already read all the the new chapter in mtlnovel
need ..............more...........more......& maore[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
nice author.......[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update]
there's a lot of plot hole in this specially with xiao wu arc first of all how come xiao wu didn't get suspicious when he used a different spirit a sword spirit when he should be a qilin spirit and the only reason she trust the mc is because of his qilin spirit when they're first met, his qilin spirit is just like the three eyed golden lion they can double the cultivation rate of those living in the forest. also the main topic of this fanfic is to capture those female beauty just like pokemon look at what happens with zhu zhuqing he just get together with her and successfully become his fiancee and what did he do after that he immediately leave zhuqing on the spot after they became fiancee to get xiao wu he didn't even wait a day or two and just leave after his capture just like a pokemon
Why do i feel tgat this book is my cub of tea I mean i Dont like tang san i think he is a hypocrite And i like douluo Power system so thank you
Can someone give me where to read the raw of this novel?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
give me the original pliz link ................................................................................................................................
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hard to read. . .. .. . ... . , .. . . , ,. ., ., . ., .,., . ,. ,. . ., . ,,. . , .. ,.,. ,.. . .,. .,.,.. ,
I have not read completely but thanks for a quite interesting plot... thanks to translators and author of this FF... thanks for your time...
nice....good story[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Nothing to say just wanted to show my appreciation for translating this brilliant work of art. Nice job👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 .
keep going....nice[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Amazing. ........................................................................................................................................................... .
First and foremost, even if this is only a translation, it still deserves a 5 star because it allowed me to find out about this novel! Now I can go find the original and read it!
Link de trabajo original por favor! Trate de buscarlo con el nombre del autor pero no encontre nada .........................................
It’s me or the chapters aren’t in order. .................................................................................................