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Honestly, the whole story concept is very cool and amazing. The idea I like, it's something that I personally have not seen much of in webnovel, but the writing is kind of putting me off. So I'm going to say that you should get someone that can help you in editing the story so that the writing makes more sense. Again I have only read a few chapter so far but this is what I think about the story.
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact leorichard2021*@*outlook.com (please ignore both * when sending email). A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
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Oh, i really like this novel. This is a good novel! I will waiting for the next chapter, cheer up for you. I very corious about lucas and the other stars. Will lucas meet all of them?
It's really a very good story. Very curious and full of mystery. This is truly the hallmark of this author. enthusiastic and diligent in updating the chapter
Wow this is amazing. Go superpower! I like this book so much! Keep spirit for the author to always update new chapter. Good luck. Hope the best for you.
How did you get all of this?! omg, you just made an excellent job from this novel. I really fall in love with Lucas hehe 😆🤣 I'd like the way how you bring us into the story, you don't getting rush on it. Okay, you need to show us how it's gonna be, I'll be waiting for the next chapter 😆✨ once again you're awesome ✨🎉
What a story. This is the first time I read a fantasy story as good as this. The delivery method is easy to understand. The spirit of the Author sister!
Oh GOD... I like this one I recommended this book and can't wait for the next chapter. Cheers up Author! [img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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Hey, what's the surprise that I've got this novel! 😍 It tooks me to the different world that I never come in before! How you did it, Author? I can't hardly wait to read the next chapter! 😍😍
this book is really cool. The plot is very interesting to make the reader immersed in the story. I really like this book. The spirit of writing thor, we are waiting for the continuation of the story, thor! I have entered the book library.
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this is so cool ! i like super power , and i curious about lucas and the others . i can't wait for read another page ,please send the another part i want to read the next of the story .
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Honestly, the whole story concept is very cool and amazing. The idea I like, it's something that I personally have not seen much of in webnovel, but the writing is kind of putting me off. So I'm going to say that you should get someone that can help you in editing the story so that the writing makes more sense. Again I have only read a few chapter so far but this is what I think about the story.
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact leorichard2021*@*outlook.com (please ignore both * when sending email). A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
This novel is super!!! Please upload next chapter Author... I'm recommended this for you who like super power story. [img=update][img=recommend]
Oh, i really like this novel. This is a good novel! I will waiting for the next chapter, cheer up for you. I very corious about lucas and the other stars. Will lucas meet all of them?
It's really a very good story. Very curious and full of mystery. This is truly the hallmark of this author. enthusiastic and diligent in updating the chapter
Wow this is amazing. Go superpower! I like this book so much! Keep spirit for the author to always update new chapter. Good luck. Hope the best for you.
How did you get all of this?! omg, you just made an excellent job from this novel. I really fall in love with Lucas hehe 😆🤣 I'd like the way how you bring us into the story, you don't getting rush on it. Okay, you need to show us how it's gonna be, I'll be waiting for the next chapter 😆✨ once again you're awesome ✨🎉
What a story. This is the first time I read a fantasy story as good as this. The delivery method is easy to understand. The spirit of the Author sister!
Oh GOD... I like this one I recommended this book and can't wait for the next chapter. Cheers up Author! [img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Ini cerita benar-benar keren, aku sangat suka, dan cerita nya itu bikin penasaran di tunggu terus kelanjutan nya[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Hey, what's the surprise that I've got this novel! 😍 It tooks me to the different world that I never come in before! How you did it, Author? I can't hardly wait to read the next chapter! 😍😍
this book is really cool. The plot is very interesting to make the reader immersed in the story. I really like this book. The spirit of writing thor, we are waiting for the continuation of the story, thor! I have entered the book library.
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this is so cool ! i like super power , and i curious about lucas and the others . i can't wait for read another page ,please send the another part i want to read the next of the story .
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