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translated by google: So far in chapter 15 (17), the story is proving to be very interesting. I hope the author can continue updating it, for us mere readers.
The author pulled the Ignore this chapter, he skips passed everything, no plot, waste chapters for a bit of info dumping like a harem list; you couldve added that atcthe end of the chapter , grammars relatively shi, not all of it is; just most of the errors could've been fixed if the author went back and read them.
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揭示劇透
It's an interesting take that I'm really excited for, hopefully it becomes a long story that we can enjoy..
Biased author review. On a different note I have major plans for this story. So even if I don't update for a while know that I will finish it. Since I truly love this idea and am actually surprised no one has done it before. Well hope you enjoy this fic.
The story has a lot of potential considering it's the first non-devil fruit user with no harem mc of the author I just hope this story and the other one won't be dropped midway.
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there are some minor grammatical errors but nothing to obvious. other than that the only thing i dislike about the story is the adding of character not native of the One Piece universe.
translated by google: So far in chapter 15 (17), the story is proving to be very interesting. I hope the author can continue updating it, for us mere readers.
The author pulled the Ignore this chapter, he skips passed everything, no plot, waste chapters for a bit of info dumping like a harem list; you couldve added that atcthe end of the chapter , grammars relatively shi, not all of it is; just most of the errors could've been fixed if the author went back and read them.
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揭示劇透 It's an interesting take that I'm really excited for, hopefully it becomes a long story that we can enjoy..
Biased author review. On a different note I have major plans for this story. So even if I don't update for a while know that I will finish it. Since I truly love this idea and am actually surprised no one has done it before. Well hope you enjoy this fic.
The story has a lot of potential considering it's the first non-devil fruit user with no harem mc of the author I just hope this story and the other one won't be dropped midway.
Again.......................................................................................................................................................................................
there are some minor grammatical errors but nothing to obvious. other than that the only thing i dislike about the story is the adding of character not native of the One Piece universe.