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This isn't an anime anymore. My actions have consequences and those consequences could be lethal. How am i supposed to prevent that future when everything i do seems to push it closer.
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寫檢討If you guys dont want to read it because its not what you wanted then thats okay im still going to keep writing it for the people who want it because it is a great story
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plot holes he said he needs their consent but they accepted it even when they have a master they are extremely loyal to and he gets the girls too easily you could've made it so he gets a charming skill or something that would have been more reasonable
I think the author has a great idea for the story and should continue developing it. However the sudden introduction of tons of anime and other novel X overs make it quite confusing because each of these X overs have modifications done by the author to fit with the huge X over world which aren’t obvious at first. I think more needs to be done to make world building consistent Confusing writing style of first person and lots of switching POVs even during a single chapter. Never read a book /LN/webnovel with this kind of strange POV switching, but its not done too poorly since its always relevant to situations around our MC. However I think it would be far easier to read if the author just used 3rd person even during different POV so it isnt as confusing who is who
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Im not gonna waste time when I see FF with GACHA i put it at library... GACHA GACHA GACHA GACHA GACHA GACHA GACHA GACHA GACHA GACHA GACHA GACHA GACHA GACHA GACHA
summons are a big turn off for me they shouldn't be someone outside the realm of power in a world it always makes it uninteresting to me and bypasses any actual relationship building with characters.
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揭示劇透This is a really great book author I have read a lot of books on webnovel but this is one of the best books I have read on webnovel, I hope you keep up the good work you are doing a great job thank you for the great book once again.
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have read it until the new release, what I can say is a good FF with good structure, wording, etc. so overalls I can say it's good FF to read and you will not disappoint at it
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作者 Ashtin_Pratt
Currently im planning at least 180 chapters but this is definitely a 5 star fic so please at least give it a chance to capture your interest