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摘要
Choices. Crossroads. Opportunities.
Plunged into a broken world ruled by the strong, Damien must decide how his newfound life will proceed. Navigating through conflicts and alliances, his journey intertwines with the fates of powerful figures and kingdoms, challenging the very fabric of the hellish world.
Set against the backdrop of the legendary One Piece universe, this tale reimagines familiar characters and lore, weaving a narrative that explores themes of power, redemption, and the indomitable spirit of adventure.
Damien's quest is not just for treasure or glory but a deeper pursuit of a truth that could change the course of history.
As the tides of the Grand Line shift and churn, Damien confronts the harsh realities of the pirate world, facing challenges that test his limits and forge his legacy.
In this saga of the high seas, only the bold dare to dream, and only the strong survive. Will Damien rise to become a legend among pirates, or will the unforgiving waters claim yet another soul?
The journey to discover 'One Piece' is as perilous as it is wondrous, and for Damien, every choice and battle is a step closer to his ultimate destiny.
Join him as he goes against all odds in the world of Pirates, Marines, and Revolutionaries, sailing on the Path to Power!
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Further fanfic information, QnAs and a trove of images are found here: https://discord.gg/aJHHHPvb6q
Average Chapter Word Count: ~2600 words
This story will be posted on RoyalRoad, ScribbleHub, Fanfiction.net, and AO3.
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The best fan fiction on van peace that I have read in my life. I won't say anything about grammar, since I read with the help of a translator, which makes it almost impossible to notice mistakes, but the writing style is very pleasant to the eye. The character of the characters is very natural and there is no feeling that the author has changed them for the sake of his plot. The very infusion of MC into the plot also feels natural, which is very good. The beginning may seem cringe, as well as the actions of the main character in the first chapters may cause some to discard this fan fiction, but then the author has greatly improved. The battle scenes are written beautifully, the improvement of the main character's strength is consistent and fast, but it does not go beyond the OP. Romance also pleases, although the author constantly writes that such scenes are not given to him, for me they look very nice.
A really good start for a fanfic. Nice devil fruit. Good Talent. I hope the System wont dictate his life, because the strength of the people in One Piece fluctuate very much. And I hope his cheats wont become too rediculous. I like the curse release and a bloodline. I hope he works hard for his power.
Dope, sincerely I hope it's not dropped like every promising one piece fic. By the way, for those considering dropping the story because of the system at the start being a bit much, don't it gets better, a lot better. The greatest thing about this fic is when it's set, rocks pirate era is so interesting and something I've never seen explored. Forget all those joining the strawhats fics I need more rocks fanfics.
Writing quality: Well, since I use a translator to translate into my mother tongue, I wouldn't know how to give you a rating, but I suppose it's okay, since you're quite descriptive, in fights you're ok, you know how to put a construction and continuity in fights, I highlight The fight against Enigma, which is quite decent, I put 4 stars because I cannot give an exact judgment due to the fact that I read the fanfic in translator, that's why I give a star for the margin of error. Stability of Updates: It's pretty good, a daily chapter, the only thing I miss would be to put Chapter Packs like 5 chapters in a day or something like that, but outside of that the chapter cadence is pretty good, a 5 stars in this department. Story Development: This is quite good, the beginning of the plot as Born and grows seems tremendous to me, that they give us their motivations in the first chapters is quite good, although they are lost and are not clear in some stories. What I like most about this work is how the MC acts with the world and its members, how it is a motivation for Mihawk, a help for Katakuri and Kuzan, A rival for Kaido, a Kouhai for Whitebeard and Shaky, Each one of these relationships are understood and created in a good way and do not clash at any time. Also take a risk by making history in the time of Roger and Rocks, but use this risk is used to enrich this empty part of history by setting the Overlords that are goals and that have to be reached. Although there are Power ups that could be categorized as cliches and it gains part of its power with the system, when there are important advances it is noticeable that it is due to effort and time, the author does not tremble to prepare his MC with time skips and training , although if he has some other power or cliche but in general terms it is fine, for now the main character knows where he is and where he is going, he does not get stuck in the Rocks crew, he goes to the future, and that is very good, There are some gaps such as the fact that Enigma did not use Lilin to stop the MC, since she was owing him the Gigantization Serum, and at that moment Enigma would have told him that the favor was paid if he helped him stop Damian and Kaido. Character Design: this is one of the parts that I like the most about this work, as it adapts characters that have not come out almost like Rocks or OC characters like Enigma, They cause an impression and respect as the one that Rocks should give, he feels like the leader of a crew like the Rocks and Enigma feel the same way, command respect and behave like the person they are supposed to be, a powerful Overlord who has held his position for many years. About the MC, the character is constantly evolving, he does not stay stagnant and thinks about the future, when he does not correct his mistakes the world does, but he realizes his mistakes and tries to correct them, as when Rocks explained that not all can enter the crew, he was naive and realized and corrected it, The goals are from the first chapters since the author instead of making a first arc that focuses only on the evolution of power of the MC, made a arch that also raises and gives us to show the character of the MC. World Background: The creation of the world is very good, this is made based on the time of Roger and Rocks, a time already seen but little described in the manga and anime, he takes advantage of these gaps to enrich the world by his own hand, putting characters, Islands and settings of his own authorship, which do not seem out of tune with the world of One Piece, although there are some times that he conveniently uses that freedom to drive his characters, such as the supposed island of Death, but they are minor details. When these scenarios created by the author are where an important plot happens, they are endowed with a good description to the point where we can imagine the place with the same animation of the anime
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An utterly unnecessary rewrite. The author took a one year hiatus in order to organize everything and rewrite. The previous one was already pretty good, the author could've just gradually improved their writing and the quality of the story by releasing chapters regularly. However, they said they wanted some time to rewrite everything because they wanted the whole book to be consistent in its quality. The result? This ridiculous... thing? Honestly, I'm incredibly disappointed since this was one of my favorite fanfics and the previous one certainly managed to tug at my emotional strings, but this one isn't doing it at all. The incorrect use of adjectives and certain verbs isn't helping with the immersion, the characters that were properly fleshed out in the previous writing weren't even fleshed out properly (e.g. Whitebeard vs Borealis), the world-building is worse compared to the previous one, and the story development and pacing is all over the place, it feels like you don't know what they'll do next (not in a good way) and since everthing just happens all of a sudden without a proper build up or suspense, the story ends up feeling lackluster compared to the previous one, a shadow of its former self. To conclude, this is a rewrite that turned out for the worse. WAY WORSE. If you expect this'll be as good as the previous one, just read something else and save your time.
i am tired reading cliche of mc parents died, i thought this story will be different since author said that he hated weak mc parents but it seems it's my misunderstanding what the author mean.
asking if its harem and will he get devil fruit and if gets which prefered and does he go around playing hero or is he luffys underling i need info so i dont waste time not prefered
I really love this story. It is one of the rare novel/fanfic that I'm always impatient to read the rest. Can't wait to see where it's going to go. Pls never drop this piece of art, author-sama. SUBARASHI!!!
This is the best one piece fanfic I've ever read, haha I'm tired of readers who always say harsh words or negative words and many are due to their comments, many fanfics that I like are dropped. I hope they understand the many writers who earn nothing just to entertain readers to the point of racking their brains to write a good chapter. Just because of the genre or nature of mc's characters many flock to encourage other readers to pressure the author because they don't like the content of the story, please man if you don't like it don't read it and if you want a fanfic story according to your thoughts write your own fanfic and see the reactions of the people readers who read your writing so that you feel the feelings of the writers when you comment negatively. (By google translate)
this is my favorite one piece fanfiction. LMAO99 and DaoOfEternity are lying thiefs DaoOfEternity is really impressive being able to type while in a coma while the huge idiot LMAO99 has by paradox😂 on the cover of his "amazing" and "original" fanfic.
I CAME FROM YOUR OTHER BOOK AND WHEN I SAW THIS ONE I IMMEDIATELY ADDED TO MY LIBRARY AND READ IT!!! THE STORY BACKGROUND IS ALSO REALLY INTERESTING!!! HOPE THIS TURNS OUT TO BE A SUCCESS!!! AND CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE CHAPTERS!!! IF YOU CAN PLIZZZ UPDATE REGULARY OR FREQUENTLY!!!
Don't take this review too seriously. I only read 5 chapters before dropping this. The MC sucks. He is one of those whiner/melodramatic type protagonists "who just want a peaceful life, and blah blah blah ." He knew he was in the One Piece world and how dangerous that world is. Luckily, there was a devil literally in a tree right next to him, but he said, "Nah." He said Nah for years because "who knows what abilities it might give him." That's kinda of understandable, but come on, bro. If you don't wanna risk getting a dumb ability at least freaking train, try to awaken your haki or something. You know how powerful people in the One Piece can get just through training, so why don't you? when pirates inevitably attacked his island and killed his mother, I said, "Good! this sighing bustard deserves it. " What kind of moron transmigrator doesn't know that to have a peaceful life, you gotta become the strongest in the world first. 😤 So yeah, I didn't like this fic, but a lot of people apparently do, so it's cool. 😎
One of, if not THE best One Piece fanfic I have had the pleasure to read. The idea and timeline setting at the start of the novel is new and interesting, the characters are well fleshed out, the devil fruit is interesting and the story progression and pacing is good and well thought out. The grammar is good, and I rarely notice any mistakes. Also has a good update schedule. I have no other words than that it's an amazing story. If you enjoy the One Piece world then this is a must read. 5/5.
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i never gave a book a 1 star but is not as good as the last one so im out good luck tho. .-.
This has been one of the best One piece FF. However to my immeasurable disappointment it is being stolen by vulgar theif like DaoOfEternity.
卷 0 : Auxiliary Volume
卷 1 : Home Island
- 1 [1] The Banality of Life 10 months ago
- 2 [2] Reality Check 10 months ago
- 3 [3] A New Day 10 months ago
- 4 [4] A Storm of Change 10 months ago
- 5 [5] A Frightening Reality 10 months ago
- 6 [6] Times of Turmoil 10 months ago
- 7 [7] Greta Island 10 months ago
- 8 [8] Knowledge is Power 10 months ago
- 9 [9] A Sixth Sense 10 months ago
- 10 [10] Tumultuous Seas 10 months ago
- 11 [11] A Fated Meeting 10 months ago
卷 2 : The World Beyond
- 12 [12] The Status Quo 10 months ago
- 13 [13] The Devil 10 months ago
- 14 [14] The Guardians of the Ore 10 months ago
- 15 [15] Red Metal, Black Shadows 10 months ago
- 16 [16] Evolution 10 months ago
- 17 [17] Trouble in Paradise 10 months ago
- 18 [18] To the Deep 10 months ago
- 19 [19] Let it Flow 10 months ago
- 20 [20] The New World is Dark and Full of Terrors 10 months ago
卷 3 : The Unconquered Sea
- 21 [21] The Power of Whitebeard 10 months ago
- 22 [22] Forged in Fury 10 months ago
- 23 [23] Birth of a Titan 10 months ago
- 24 [24] Ambition 10 months ago
- 25 [25] A Storm to Come 10 months ago
- 26 [26] Mora Island (I) 10 months ago
- 27 [27] Mora Island (II) 9 months ago
- 28 [28] Mora Island (III) 9 months ago
- 29 [29] Mora Island (IV) 9 months ago
- 30 [30] Mora Island (V) 9 months ago
- 31 [31] The Aftermath 9 months ago
卷 4 : Mission Impossible
- 32 [32] Trials of Leadership 9 months ago
- 33 [33] No Rest for the Wicked 9 months ago
- 34 [34] Mission Impossible 9 months ago
- 35 [35] Courting Death 9 months ago
- 36 [36] Encephala Island (I) 9 months ago
- 37 [37] Encephala Island (II) 9 months ago
- 38 [38] Encephala Island (III) 9 months ago
- 39 [39] Encephala Island (IV) 9 months ago
- 40 [40] Mission Complete 9 months ago
- 41 [41] The Tipping Point 9 months ago
- 42 [42] A Vacation of Sorts 9 months ago
卷 5 : The Excursion
- 43 [43] Experiments 9 months ago
- 44 [44] The Devil's Orchard 9 months ago
- 45 [45] Caged Bird 9 months ago
- 46 [46] Surging Currents 9 months ago
- 47 [47] A Situation 9 months ago
- 48 [48] The Anomaly 9 months ago
- 49 [49] Chains 8 months ago
- 50 [50] A World on Fire 8 months ago
- 51 [51] Amethyst Kingdom Crisis (I) 8 months ago
- 52 [52] Amethyst Kingdom Crisis (II) 8 months ago
- 53 [53] Amethyst Kingdom Crisis (III) 8 months ago
- 54 [54] Amethyst Kingdom Crisis (IV) 8 months ago
- 55 [55] Scars 8 months ago
- 56 [56] Disarmed 8 months ago
- 57 [57] Setting the Board 8 months ago
卷 6 : Land of Samurai
- 58 [58] Underworld Gambit 8 months ago
- 59 [59] Fortune Favours the Bold 8 months ago
- 60 [60] New Heights 8 months ago
- 61 [61] The Land of Samurai 8 months ago
- 62 [62] Surname 8 months ago
- 63 [63] The Flower Capital 8 months ago
- 64 [64] The Styx Passage 8 months ago
- 65 [65] The Meito 8 months ago
- 66 [66] The Legendary Shimotsuki 8 months ago
- 67 [67] A Samurai's Welcome 7 months ago
- 68 [68] A Meaningless Endeavour? 7 months ago
- 69 [69] Shifting Scales 7 months ago
- 70 [70] Forging History 7 months ago
- 71 [71] A Fruit Worth Cultivating 7 months ago
- 72 [72] Embracing 7 months ago
- 73 [73] Times of Disorder 7 months ago
- 74 [74] The Old World 7 months ago
- 75 [75] Departure 7 months ago
卷 7 : Zero Hour
- 76 [76] Logia 7 months ago
- 77 [77] Mood Swings 7 months ago
- 78 [78] A Dangerous Game 7 months ago
- 79 [79] Saints and Sinners 7 months ago
- 80 [80] One Punch 6 months ago
- 81 [81] A Pricey Failure 6 months ago
- 82 [82] Big News! 6 months ago
- 83 [83] To the Heavens 6 months ago
- 84 [84] Invincible 6 months ago
- 85 [85] Echoes of Shandora 6 months ago
- 86 [86] A New Era 6 months ago
- 87 [87] Fun 6 months ago
- 88 [88] Sorcery 6 months ago
- 89 [89] Destiny Unveiled 6 months ago
- 90 [90] Zero Hour 6 months ago
- 91 [91] Den of Scum 6 months ago
卷 8 : The Fourth Division
- 92 [92] A Pirate's Greeting 6 months ago
- 93 [93] The Fourth Division 6 months ago
- 94 [94] Storming the Base (I) 6 months ago
- 95 [95] Storming the Base (II) 6 months ago
- 96 [96] Storming the Base (III) 6 months ago
- 97 [97] Storming the Base (IV) 5 months ago
- 98 [98] Storming the Base (V) 5 months ago
- 99 [99] History in the Making 5 months ago
- 100 [100] A Legend 5 months ago
- 101 [101] Headlines 5 months ago
- 102 [102] Duel of Seeds 5 months ago
- 103 [103] Impending Mayhem 5 months ago
卷 9 : Dawn of Pride
- 104 [104] Advent of Chaos 5 months ago
- 105 [105] The Pirate Festival 5 months ago
- 106 [106] The Clash of Kings 5 months ago
- 107 [107] Dawn of Pride (I) 5 months ago
- 108 [108] Dawn of Pride (II) 5 months ago
- 109 [109] Dawn of Pride (III) 5 months ago
- 110 [110] Dawn of Pride (IV) 5 months ago
- 111 [111] Fog of War 5 months ago
- 112 [112] The Scorched Sea War (I) 5 months ago
- 113 [113] The Scorched Sea War (II) 5 months ago
- 114 [114] The Scorched Sea War (III) 5 months ago
- 115 [115] The Scorched Sea War (IV) 4 months ago
- 116 [116] The Scorched Sea War (V) 4 months ago
- 117 [117] The Scorched Sea War (VI) 4 months ago
- 118 [118] The Setting Sun 4 months ago
- 119 [119] Conflicts 4 months ago
- 120 [120] The VIP 4 months ago
- 121 [121] Sworn Enemies of the Gods 4 months ago
- 122 [122] Echoes of the Scorched Sea 4 months ago
- 123 [123] Consequences 4 months ago
卷 10 : The Key to Tomorrow
- 124 [124] The Rumbling 4 months ago
- 125 [125] No Man's Land 4 months ago
- 126 [126] The Extinct 3 months ago
- 127 [127] A Death Wish 3 months ago
- 128 [128] Pandemonium 3 months ago
- 129 [129] Solomon 3 months ago
- 130 [130] Twist of Fate 3 months ago
- 131 [131] Siege 2 months ago
- 132 [132] Ultimatum 2 months ago
- 133 [133] Purging Shadows 2 months ago
- 134 [134] Allegiance 2 months ago
- 135 [135] Dawn of the Awakened 2 months ago
- 136 [136] Invitation 2 months ago
- 137 [137] A Monumental Event 2 months ago
- 138 [138] Knowledge 2 months ago
- 139 [139] Beneath the Surface 2 months ago
- 140 [140] Shadows of Departure 2 months ago
- 141 [141] The Humbling 2 months ago
- 142 [142] One Shall Remain 2 months ago
卷 11 : Twilight of Titans
- 143 [143] The Beginning of the End 1 months ago
- 144 [144] Cradle of the Gods (I) 1 months ago
- 145 [145] Cradle of the Gods (II) 1 months ago
- 146 [146] Cradle of the Gods (III) 1 months ago
- 147 [147] Cradle of the Gods (IV) 1 months ago
- 148 [148] Cradle of the Gods (V) 1 months ago
- 149 [149] Cradle of the Gods (VI) 1 months ago
- 150 [150] The Last Stand (I) 1 months ago
- 151 [151] The Last Stand (II) 1 months ago
- 152 [152] The Last Stand (III) 1 months ago
- 153 [153] The Last Stand (IV) 1 months ago
- 154 [154] The Last Stand (V) 29 days ago
- 155 [155] The Last Stand (VI) 28 days ago
- 156 [156] The God Valley Incident 27 days ago
- 157 [157] The End of the Beginning 26 days ago
My honest review (still biased). Naturally, with respect to fanfictions, I'd round it to 4/5. It is a different timeline than most One Piece fanfics with a more driven MC, lest he is swept away by the turbulent seas. The recently posted chapters are a rewrite, thus ANY review before this one is outdated and inaccurate. I suggest reading the first arc, chapters 1-11, to get a taste of the story and whether it is for you. Check out the Disclaimers chapter for more information. Thanks for stopping by.