4評論
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
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寫檢討
StOry iDea and character is good but U need 2-3 read it.. u need editor Author san or grammar check program .. But I am Waiting More chapter or GivE me your idea..ı use it for greater good..
unreadble,bad story,bad writing quality,making bad past for only make mc's all moves true and the only clever character is mc and others just an idiot.the story is trash and unreadble
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dude truty to be told the story Is not really good....not the grammar really...dont for me who read google translated Hollywood novels it's a piece of cake....its just that the story doesn't have a direction and the fluffy parts are too much....and wasted too much time on unneccessary things.....Hope you stay safe in covid mate...
StOry iDea and character is good but U need 2-3 read it.. u need editor Author san or grammar check program .. But I am Waiting More chapter or GivE me your idea..ı use it for greater good..
unreadble,bad story,bad writing quality,making bad past for only make mc's all moves true and the only clever character is mc and others just an idiot.the story is trash and unreadble
Unreadable Unreadable Unreadable Unreadable Unreadable Unreadable Unreadable Unreadable Unreadable Unreadable Unreadable Unreadable Unreadable Unreadable Unreadable
dude truty to be told the story Is not really good....not the grammar really...dont for me who read google translated Hollywood novels it's a piece of cake....its just that the story doesn't have a direction and the fluffy parts are too much....and wasted too much time on unneccessary things.....Hope you stay safe in covid mate...