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A Self insert as a Goku in the marvel universe,
Thor and Loki's Older brother
Asgardian name Sun Wukong.
Mc X 4 women
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寫檢討I never publish reviews criticizing errors in grammar because I hardly know how to read the English language, much less write it (I write this with the help of the translator). But this time I will make an exception since the story is very difficult to read even for me, there are several sentences in a single paragraph so it is difficult to know who says each sentence; There are also cases where quotation marks are omitted in each dialogue, making it difficult to follow the conversations between the characters. As for the plot of the story, the truth is not clear to me, since from the beginning it is revealed that the mc in his strongest transformation can fight against OAA, so maybe he will only be the nanny of the Avengers. Something about the story that I found completely unnecessary is that the author took 5 CHAPTERS to describe the scene where Thor infiltrates the SHIELD base to retrieve mjolnir. Hopefully the author will take the trouble to fix these errors. (Google translate)
This is pretty enjoyable, as long as your not like me and constantly think of the fact Sun Wukong and the Norse god's are from completely different pantheons
Just why? Odin have many children and the last name is Odinson, for example: Thor Odinson, Hela Odinson, so why the MC name is Sun Gokong? if you use the Nordic naming. Will you become Sun Gokong Odinson? that just weird
Love it keep up the good work..................................................................................................................
Really nice fic... Sun is friend with the f*king Jesus hahaha.. Anyway. keep it up and good work, bro. Recomended~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
I really wanted to give 5 stars but with all the mistakes it makes it hard to understand things. Past the mistakes it's quite good till chapter 23
how is he friends with the one above all that guy doesn't even stay in the marvel universe and rarely appears.?????? but it a good story but why does every fanfic think that that actually like mortals or gods.
It is a pretty good story I like the character development and how the author writes it, though the latest chapters are shorter than usual and have less action, it is a pretty good story, I recommend it.
I won't say this is a good novel, it have no good devlopment nor character design and there are many plot holes...But I can assure i enjoy the read..and thats what I look for a fanfic, it doesn't necessarily need to have a great story, if it has then its good,, but this is the type you just enjoy without a care in the world..
this story is very good so far and I'm looking forward for more chapters and how the story will continue onwards. so please keep up the good work
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There a few mistakes, like a capitalized letter on a word/paragraph that doesn't need to be capitalized, and the almost nonexistent use of commas. It's good, other than the few mistakes that I've said, it was a good read for me.
Well, this my third review on this website and all i can say is keep up. this fic is very good. ....................................
U tixed it he doesnt meet bulma with the wish he is summoned gor the god one instead much better also like thats hes training them hope fore more
Nice. Cant wait to see the fights. Loving the story. Nice. Cant wait to see the fights. Loving the story.Nice. Cant wait to see the fights. Loving the story.
I Can't Say,But I Just Love This Story Mannn Please Don't Drop I Will Literally Just Drop Here Some Power Stones Everyday So Pleaseeeeee🥺🥺🥺🥺
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I love op mc trope but that also have to have a plot..... This story so far even though have good plot points still have some problems... Like what happened to bruce since he was effectively non hulk at that point and was captured by ross he jumped from the chopper and almost died to become hulk..... Just add hulk in previous chs so that plot hole can be fixed. Great read so far