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摘要
Pokémon, Pokémon are animal that are much stronger. They wield a supernatural power called Aura.
In times of war, there was 4 people, 2 men, and 2 women, all of them were taken by Pokémon and were protected by them.
After a few years, they learn how to use Aura, learning to ‘see’ Pokémon, ‘hear’ Pokémon, ‘help’ Pokémon, and become smarter.
Our protagonist, Kaito, has a complex past, one that many would see as... well, sad.
He has many friends surrounding him, helping him throughout his journey.
Can he get out of the darkness? Can he find the light? Or will he get consumed by it? Find out in the next episode of dragon ball z!
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3評論
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
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i gave story development less cause right i think you should rewrite it i read it first till about 10 chapters i think then dropped it cause i got bored so i think its good to re write it again waiting for chapter
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I like what you’ve done so far. The story is interesting and makes a lot of sense. Because your not that far into the story yet the world your building hasn’t taken shape yet so I only gave you 3 stars on that but otherwise the story is great and I look forward to future chapters.