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the story itself is good but the writing can be better. if you dont want to hire an editor i suggest you take only 1 extra minute of your day to ask chat gpt to proofread your chapter before uploading which is for free. i also have a complaint that a lot of back and forth in chapters which can be totally ignored. it might take 5 or more chapters to tell or do just one thing which is offputting and makes me wanna drop it everyday honestly. so a warning to readers, its very very slow paced story where you need to read like 100 chapters every time to feel things are moving albiet slowly.
This one started off at a solid 5 stars. Then promptly dropped and continued to stay there like it was reveling in it. it kept jumping back and forth like it didn't know what form of sci fi it wanted to be.
Everything is perfect recommended to someone who enjoys creation related science knowledge from previous life with current magic. And author you should update the cursemaster novel also . I recently read it and it was something new and amazing concept . So bro please give new chapters to it .
Hey, Author, Hope you are fine after your discharge and you can't die on your fans without completing the novel first... hehe it's just a joke don't take it too seriously....
First off, the grammar is plain bad. There are mistakes scattered throughout and I don't know if this is a translation issue but it is plain bad and annoying to read. The author refuses to use gender neutral words and will repeat "he/she" every time they want to refer to an anonymous person instead of words like "they, their, or them." This is one example of where the author just decides to use two words to describe something and put a slash like word/word. Misspelled words are also aplenty. The beginning was fun to read with the concepts of card creation and then it just gets ruined with bad characters. The author really tries to pull a Naruto to turn horribly designed characters into allies of the MC. The pacing is bad as well especially at the 300 chapters mark where a tournament arc takes FOREVER to progress. So much stuff is happening in the background and the fight is dragged on for so long. It is unfun to read once you get that that point. The stability of updates being a 3 star since I've just started reading and have no clue.
Hey, Author, I think you have a repeated date of 18 April as you should check it. I just wanted to tell you that and by the way, your work is great but the MC plot armor is also OP which means only he is smart and everyone else is led by their emotion and desire or their pride and only MC can see everything clearly..
I can’t rate it off of anything else other than the first half of the first chapter.the story is told weird and pretty bad grammar(idk about that though but that’s what others are talking about) and the author just doesn’t fix the mistakes.seems pretty bad overall and probably one of the least interested I’ve been in anything (this has been sence the first sentence btw) and if I was forced to read the first chapter for ten days or die I’d kill myself thirteen minutes in(idk if it’s better or actually good after this but I’m not gonna to torture myself) main thing really is that every sentence seems off like they have no base for the story other than now I’m here I’m a smart guy who can easily understand the memories of another persons life in seconds.idk how there is 2000+ chapters of something with such a horrible start.3.8 cause I’m not gonna say it’s truly bad without knowing for sure.
Translation Quality - 5.0 Stability of Updates - 5.0 Story Development - 1.0 Character Design - 1.0 World Background - 1.0 Overall - 2.6 I gave it this rating because during the early 300s the Author said that the the story line would be Competition Arc, University Arc, and then the Demon Arc hence why the big waste of multiple fight chapters with Corey was needed. The Competition Arc is basically wrapped up around 370~380...if you roll forward to the 1200 range, he's been reincarnated for 6 months, still living in the starter town, yet to go to university, and is basically trying to catch them all (runes, girl, stds...) outside of building his harem not much of anything tangible has really happened outside of the MC stealing other peoples knowledge to make his own. The MC acts like he's God's gift to the people and everyone just rolls with it....MC: Anna teach me about runes, ego gems, and why after a certain point cards don't matter what matters is a persons origin card!! Anna: No, what do you have to offer? MC: Anna I swear I'll let the government know about my plot armor based discovery!! (I told her this so she would know I wasn't fking around) Anna: No!! Please don't here's everything you ever wanted know and more!! Please I'll give you anything even my body!! MC: No!! Knowledge is enough because even though I have the biological urge to mate with other females, and know that the life expectancy here is skewed, I'm just that shallow enough to only want to date dumb bimbos around my age...and that fellow people of culture is why come chapter 1800 he's barely moved into the South Central City, still not going to a university, still not fight the demon horde, and still not really going anywhere....at this point you can't start to believe/wonder if the author is just blowing the story out of proportion to rake in some dough, or if there's actually any tangibility to this story. At the rate its going, I can see the characters/plot becoming so chaotic that, come towards the end, the story has escaped/developed beyond the authors original intentions and it just ends in a big flaming pile.
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You see, 700 chapters in, and the novel has not even left mcs starting point. Just endless side stories, pointless small arcs, and barely anything has actually gone through because it is still less then 2 weeks. Pain
does Anna wins over Susan I want answer bro ? you that 800 chapter only a month pass on story I read it and I Appreciate your work but bro when I see the genre there is mentioned of harem I don't like reading harem every novel i think you owe a answer for question
If the concept wasn't as interesting then this novel would be a 1 star. (i did not read with the account so that is 0 chapters. W/e i read logged in i for some reason can only read 2 chapters before i need to refresh or pick the chapter after) The mc is a genius who can create cards with his cheat, cool. The mc can invent new cards and know the exact ratio andnot fail once, not cool. Human interactions feel very un-human and flat. The mc is suposed to be an adult in a kids body but reacts and often says hes an adult... but he doesn't act like one. Lots and i mean lots of info dumps. A lot of these info dumps arent needed either. very tyical CN BS in there, man needs to be this and that but then hides behind woman and is proud of it. If you can handle all this then go read it. The idea behind the world is interesting enough and it seems interesting what kind of cards can be created. Sadly i'm not able to ignore all the flaws...
stop making this my daily limited free read i do NOT WANT TO READ IT. read it, didn’t like it. one star
Absolutely fantastic premise and world building. It's just a shame that this story is clearly only meant to make the author money. I say "author",however, a monkey would likely be able to write a better story. It's a shame when a very good idea is put into the hands of someone like this, it could have been so much better. The characters seem well thought out and there are very few that I dont find at the very least, interesting. Until they begin to speak, that is. The dialogue is atrocious and most of the time seems like the author is ADHD incarnate with the tangents he likes to go on. Lastly, I would be remiss if I didn't talk about the pacing. There is absolutely no reason whatsoever, that in over a thousand chapters, it has been less than 3 months since he got to that world. This story would be 10x better if the author just wrote in a few words every chapter saying that "X amount of time has passed since blah blah blah". Overall, I wish literally anyone else had thought of this idea instead of this author, it could have been a good story.
Hey guys, quick question.. has Wyatt enter university? I’ve been reading to chapter 700+ and it’s only several day after he’s transmigrated 😂
Oh my god, this just got annoying from a long time ago . Author-san, the story is very good and cannot wait to see where Wiatt will ho with all his romances, but just getting to read this kind of chapters every single day is like reading little pieces of nothing! For the love of god I could jump 20 chapters of this novel ( perhaps even more ) and the amount of information I would be messing is close to nothing. Doing that would be like fast forwarding a video just to still arrive to nowhere. I am sorry is I sound rude or disrespectful with this comment and my intention is not to be so , even less to tell a person how he/she should do things never the less write his/her novel, but common Author-san, this is to much for someone’s patience.
I'd like to see less unnecessary dialogue that develops over 20+ chapters (example: the dialogue with Courtney about the orphanage). Or to be more forceful about the southern family, because watching him constantly being cheated on and doing nothing to stand up to them somehow doesn't fit with his personality. We're shown a vindictive man, a control freak, and if he can't control something he enforces control, and that's what I like about him, the way he handles serious problems himself and doesn't seek help from others (Calamity gemstone don't count as help because he controls them too). But in the case of the Southern family, he always defers to them. In my opinion, it makes more sense for his personality that he would drive the Southern family to despair so that they don't use him as "Southern Hope" or "Deceiver".
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my favorite book on this platform. I have no complaints about this book but that it is very slow. The characters feel very real. and there is one question that I think every time I open this book profile "why is Susan is no.1 in the character panel?" personally I hate that character.
Just to give everyone an idea as to how the story is paced. At the beginning of every chapter the date time and location is posted since the book is a daily log. Chapter 1 is 17 March 2321 Chapter 1868 is 17 April 2321 Lol it’s kinda of a total drag. Premise is interesting but there’s just so much filler. I find myself skimming/skipping the vast majority of chapters especially if it’s fights without MC. There will be fights between side characters and MC’s subordinates where the whole chapter is just listing both peoples cards and their effects. Then MC’s subordinate wins and we never see there opponent again. Like, why was so much time spent on naming and describing every aspect of a persons card if they show up for 10 minutes in a battle then just die.
Wiskelfofleelsosxocoelalqqoqodlcleoalsldcocofodlsoddofofoeowowsofofodeoeowqoqlqlwooso, 2K+ CHAPTERS AND ITS ONLY BEEN 1-2 MONTHS ??????
The main character and the side characters are people who just seem to be immeasurably stupid making Irrational decisions just for the sake of it.the main character is also a self entitled hypocrite accusing other people of being double standard and selfish when he is way worse than them.other than that it has world building.
This book is giving too much information. The story is developing to slowly. A fight that should last like 3 chapters, drags on for like 7 chapters. I know it’s called card apprentice’s daily log, but seriously only like a month has passed.
One of the best novel. This is too good for readers who like details. Good world building and personal strength development by MC. So far I'm in love with it 🤩🤩💞
Read this if you like the feeling of reading a dragon ball z boss fight style story from the pacing right of the bat. Lots of text for sometime unimportant stuff, like there are whole chapters of text about one ingredient for the card crafting and then multiply this by 3-4 for a whole card. Backflashes are really long too. Anyway, the main time line of the world see about 30 days of time progression in 1700 chapters...
The story is too much slow paced. Thing that should take on 3-4 chapters, author stretch them unnecessary to 15-20 chapters. Too much unnecessary information. Unnecessary stretching of information only makes reader frustrated.
The story is no so good and not so bad, but the girl Corey is very irritating, and the mc is just a pushover for Corey. It is red flag.
Has a very well built world that is incredibly fascinating, the problem that you will run into is every time the story is moving well and at a good pace you will find the next ten chapters have almost no relevance to what the MC is doing. They will be in a life or death fight and all of sudden you spend 15 chapters going over another character who is uninvolved in this part of the story’s past. Or in the middle of a great arc there will be 5 chapters about someone’s random day or something that literally is not relevant to the story. It’s like the author didn’t know where to go so he almost puts side stories that are just boring randomly into the book
I don't even know where to start, but here we go. I would like to say that I loved the idea of grimoires and cards, but what bothers me is the size of useless content, fillers, characters with 10 pages of introduction that could be summarized in 2, the beginning starting on March 17th and chapter 1700 still being in the middle of April in the same year is what makes me wonder if the author wants to write a novel with more than 10k pages! really thinking about dropping this novel and waiting another 8 years to see if there is any good update or if it continues in the same year it started!
this story is like good and bad at same time it wastes its small chapters in introduction of a card that is not mc's or his female friends and come on a whole chapter for only introduction of a card and too slow paced not as a story but as time taken to that many changes literally its 1.7k chapter and its only been what 20 days
story is going at snail's pace,and character author doesnt connect mc background with present life
So disappointing author said there is no harem but MC kisses around and does the deed with random girl.even though he promised to Anna to consider her first if he ever to start a relationship
the story itself is good but the writing can be better. if you dont want to hire an editor i suggest you take only 1 extra minute of your day to ask chat gpt to proofread your chapter before uploading which is for free. i also have a complaint that a lot of back and forth in chapters which can be totally ignored. it might take 5 or more chapters to tell or do just one thing which is offputting and makes me wanna drop it everyday honestly. so a warning to readers, its very very slow paced story where you need to read like 100 chapters every time to feel things are moving albiet slowly.
This one started off at a solid 5 stars. Then promptly dropped and continued to stay there like it was reveling in it. it kept jumping back and forth like it didn't know what form of sci fi it wanted to be.
Everything is perfect recommended to someone who enjoys creation related science knowledge from previous life with current magic. And author you should update the cursemaster novel also . I recently read it and it was something new and amazing concept . So bro please give new chapters to it .
Hey, Author, Hope you are fine after your discharge and you can't die on your fans without completing the novel first... hehe it's just a joke don't take it too seriously....
First off, the grammar is plain bad. There are mistakes scattered throughout and I don't know if this is a translation issue but it is plain bad and annoying to read. The author refuses to use gender neutral words and will repeat "he/she" every time they want to refer to an anonymous person instead of words like "they, their, or them." This is one example of where the author just decides to use two words to describe something and put a slash like word/word. Misspelled words are also aplenty. The beginning was fun to read with the concepts of card creation and then it just gets ruined with bad characters. The author really tries to pull a Naruto to turn horribly designed characters into allies of the MC. The pacing is bad as well especially at the 300 chapters mark where a tournament arc takes FOREVER to progress. So much stuff is happening in the background and the fight is dragged on for so long. It is unfun to read once you get that that point. The stability of updates being a 3 star since I've just started reading and have no clue.
Hey, Author, I think you have a repeated date of 18 April as you should check it. I just wanted to tell you that and by the way, your work is great but the MC plot armor is also OP which means only he is smart and everyone else is led by their emotion and desire or their pride and only MC can see everything clearly..
I can’t rate it off of anything else other than the first half of the first chapter.the story is told weird and pretty bad grammar(idk about that though but that’s what others are talking about) and the author just doesn’t fix the mistakes.seems pretty bad overall and probably one of the least interested I’ve been in anything (this has been sence the first sentence btw) and if I was forced to read the first chapter for ten days or die I’d kill myself thirteen minutes in(idk if it’s better or actually good after this but I’m not gonna to torture myself) main thing really is that every sentence seems off like they have no base for the story other than now I’m here I’m a smart guy who can easily understand the memories of another persons life in seconds.idk how there is 2000+ chapters of something with such a horrible start.3.8 cause I’m not gonna say it’s truly bad without knowing for sure.
Translation Quality - 5.0 Stability of Updates - 5.0 Story Development - 1.0 Character Design - 1.0 World Background - 1.0 Overall - 2.6 I gave it this rating because during the early 300s the Author said that the the story line would be Competition Arc, University Arc, and then the Demon Arc hence why the big waste of multiple fight chapters with Corey was needed. The Competition Arc is basically wrapped up around 370~380...if you roll forward to the 1200 range, he's been reincarnated for 6 months, still living in the starter town, yet to go to university, and is basically trying to catch them all (runes, girl, stds...) outside of building his harem not much of anything tangible has really happened outside of the MC stealing other peoples knowledge to make his own. The MC acts like he's God's gift to the people and everyone just rolls with it....MC: Anna teach me about runes, ego gems, and why after a certain point cards don't matter what matters is a persons origin card!! Anna: No, what do you have to offer? MC: Anna I swear I'll let the government know about my plot armor based discovery!! (I told her this so she would know I wasn't fking around) Anna: No!! Please don't here's everything you ever wanted know and more!! Please I'll give you anything even my body!! MC: No!! Knowledge is enough because even though I have the biological urge to mate with other females, and know that the life expectancy here is skewed, I'm just that shallow enough to only want to date dumb bimbos around my age...and that fellow people of culture is why come chapter 1800 he's barely moved into the South Central City, still not going to a university, still not fight the demon horde, and still not really going anywhere....at this point you can't start to believe/wonder if the author is just blowing the story out of proportion to rake in some dough, or if there's actually any tangibility to this story. At the rate its going, I can see the characters/plot becoming so chaotic that, come towards the end, the story has escaped/developed beyond the authors original intentions and it just ends in a big flaming pile.
揭示劇透 You see, 700 chapters in, and the novel has not even left mcs starting point. Just endless side stories, pointless small arcs, and barely anything has actually gone through because it is still less then 2 weeks. Pain
does Anna wins over Susan I want answer bro ? you that 800 chapter only a month pass on story I read it and I Appreciate your work but bro when I see the genre there is mentioned of harem I don't like reading harem every novel i think you owe a answer for question
If the concept wasn't as interesting then this novel would be a 1 star. (i did not read with the account so that is 0 chapters. W/e i read logged in i for some reason can only read 2 chapters before i need to refresh or pick the chapter after) The mc is a genius who can create cards with his cheat, cool. The mc can invent new cards and know the exact ratio andnot fail once, not cool. Human interactions feel very un-human and flat. The mc is suposed to be an adult in a kids body but reacts and often says hes an adult... but he doesn't act like one. Lots and i mean lots of info dumps. A lot of these info dumps arent needed either. very tyical CN BS in there, man needs to be this and that but then hides behind woman and is proud of it. If you can handle all this then go read it. The idea behind the world is interesting enough and it seems interesting what kind of cards can be created. Sadly i'm not able to ignore all the flaws...
stop making this my daily limited free read i do NOT WANT TO READ IT. read it, didn’t like it. one star
Absolutely fantastic premise and world building. It's just a shame that this story is clearly only meant to make the author money. I say "author",however, a monkey would likely be able to write a better story. It's a shame when a very good idea is put into the hands of someone like this, it could have been so much better. The characters seem well thought out and there are very few that I dont find at the very least, interesting. Until they begin to speak, that is. The dialogue is atrocious and most of the time seems like the author is ADHD incarnate with the tangents he likes to go on. Lastly, I would be remiss if I didn't talk about the pacing. There is absolutely no reason whatsoever, that in over a thousand chapters, it has been less than 3 months since he got to that world. This story would be 10x better if the author just wrote in a few words every chapter saying that "X amount of time has passed since blah blah blah". Overall, I wish literally anyone else had thought of this idea instead of this author, it could have been a good story.
Hey guys, quick question.. has Wyatt enter university? I’ve been reading to chapter 700+ and it’s only several day after he’s transmigrated 😂
Oh my god, this just got annoying from a long time ago . Author-san, the story is very good and cannot wait to see where Wiatt will ho with all his romances, but just getting to read this kind of chapters every single day is like reading little pieces of nothing! For the love of god I could jump 20 chapters of this novel ( perhaps even more ) and the amount of information I would be messing is close to nothing. Doing that would be like fast forwarding a video just to still arrive to nowhere. I am sorry is I sound rude or disrespectful with this comment and my intention is not to be so , even less to tell a person how he/she should do things never the less write his/her novel, but common Author-san, this is to much for someone’s patience.
I'd like to see less unnecessary dialogue that develops over 20+ chapters (example: the dialogue with Courtney about the orphanage). Or to be more forceful about the southern family, because watching him constantly being cheated on and doing nothing to stand up to them somehow doesn't fit with his personality. We're shown a vindictive man, a control freak, and if he can't control something he enforces control, and that's what I like about him, the way he handles serious problems himself and doesn't seek help from others (Calamity gemstone don't count as help because he controls them too). But in the case of the Southern family, he always defers to them. In my opinion, it makes more sense for his personality that he would drive the Southern family to despair so that they don't use him as "Southern Hope" or "Deceiver".
揭示劇透 my favorite book on this platform. I have no complaints about this book but that it is very slow. The characters feel very real. and there is one question that I think every time I open this book profile "why is Susan is no.1 in the character panel?" personally I hate that character.
Just to give everyone an idea as to how the story is paced. At the beginning of every chapter the date time and location is posted since the book is a daily log. Chapter 1 is 17 March 2321 Chapter 1868 is 17 April 2321 Lol it’s kinda of a total drag. Premise is interesting but there’s just so much filler. I find myself skimming/skipping the vast majority of chapters especially if it’s fights without MC. There will be fights between side characters and MC’s subordinates where the whole chapter is just listing both peoples cards and their effects. Then MC’s subordinate wins and we never see there opponent again. Like, why was so much time spent on naming and describing every aspect of a persons card if they show up for 10 minutes in a battle then just die.
Wiskelfofleelsosxocoelalqqoqodlcleoalsldcocofodlsoddofofoeowowsofofodeoeowqoqlqlwooso, 2K+ CHAPTERS AND ITS ONLY BEEN 1-2 MONTHS ??????
The main character and the side characters are people who just seem to be immeasurably stupid making Irrational decisions just for the sake of it.the main character is also a self entitled hypocrite accusing other people of being double standard and selfish when he is way worse than them.other than that it has world building.
This book is giving too much information. The story is developing to slowly. A fight that should last like 3 chapters, drags on for like 7 chapters. I know it’s called card apprentice’s daily log, but seriously only like a month has passed.
One of the best novel. This is too good for readers who like details. Good world building and personal strength development by MC. So far I'm in love with it 🤩🤩💞
Read this if you like the feeling of reading a dragon ball z boss fight style story from the pacing right of the bat. Lots of text for sometime unimportant stuff, like there are whole chapters of text about one ingredient for the card crafting and then multiply this by 3-4 for a whole card. Backflashes are really long too. Anyway, the main time line of the world see about 30 days of time progression in 1700 chapters...
The story is too much slow paced. Thing that should take on 3-4 chapters, author stretch them unnecessary to 15-20 chapters. Too much unnecessary information. Unnecessary stretching of information only makes reader frustrated.
The story is no so good and not so bad, but the girl Corey is very irritating, and the mc is just a pushover for Corey. It is red flag.
Has a very well built world that is incredibly fascinating, the problem that you will run into is every time the story is moving well and at a good pace you will find the next ten chapters have almost no relevance to what the MC is doing. They will be in a life or death fight and all of sudden you spend 15 chapters going over another character who is uninvolved in this part of the story’s past. Or in the middle of a great arc there will be 5 chapters about someone’s random day or something that literally is not relevant to the story. It’s like the author didn’t know where to go so he almost puts side stories that are just boring randomly into the book
I don't even know where to start, but here we go. I would like to say that I loved the idea of grimoires and cards, but what bothers me is the size of useless content, fillers, characters with 10 pages of introduction that could be summarized in 2, the beginning starting on March 17th and chapter 1700 still being in the middle of April in the same year is what makes me wonder if the author wants to write a novel with more than 10k pages! really thinking about dropping this novel and waiting another 8 years to see if there is any good update or if it continues in the same year it started!
this story is like good and bad at same time it wastes its small chapters in introduction of a card that is not mc's or his female friends and come on a whole chapter for only introduction of a card and too slow paced not as a story but as time taken to that many changes literally its 1.7k chapter and its only been what 20 days
story is going at snail's pace,and character author doesnt connect mc background with present life
So disappointing author said there is no harem but MC kisses around and does the deed with random girl.even though he promised to Anna to consider her first if he ever to start a relationship