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author if I find you I am going to k i l l u if u r going to give chilffhanger after chilfhanger
Hello author! I would like to clear up some doubts... they are as follows: will there be a ntr in the work (I hope not), is the fmc a yandere? or possessive? Finally, does the work contain lemons?
Yanderes???..................................................................................................................................
author why is there only a single chapter update lately , as there is too much explanation so when you update only a single chapter and in the updated chapter MC only thinks about his future and chapter finishes you should at least update three chapters per day as there is too much explanation in the novel and try to make the three chapters update regularly otherwise there will be definitely decrement in the number of reader
After reading many novels i can openly say that this one is really special. plot, development, mc, background story, world building 🤔 we can say universe background yea in start i really did not like this novel just because that fu**ing twist where mc have to make contract with the grany we can't say her grany because mc is also a reincarnated person who have already cross 80 age i think I forgot 🥲. still after going through many ups'sand down not that ups and down 😂 i really enjoyed and i will recommend someone who likes reincarnation, scientific way of thinking, F level to sss level i mean step by step and becomes o.p this character have if you like novel like supreme gene, i have a mansion in a post apocalyptic world then you will like this novel too. just give it a try. Read at least till where mc gets his parents book after that this novel becomes very addictive and likeable. i have given 4 stars for reason of updating stability because this novel chapter comes on time but small chapters.
author just wants to extend novel by using fillers and nonsense trolls.he is just trying to milk readers coins so don't read preview chapters so that author writes story neatly without concentrating on nonsense fillers.
I liked it..............................................................................................................................................
La historia 4/5, el romance 2/5 (usaste todo los cliche posibles y el carácter del MC cambiaba demasiado, y Anna la diste vuelta como un panqueque en actitud así porque si), el tecnicismo.... heee vamos a ponerle 5/5 (me entretuvo bastante), el corte a los capítulos 1000/5 hiciste que una comida en burgenking fuera más de 10 capítulos y lo peor es que estas alargando y alargando cada ves más diciendo el mismo párrafo simplemente cambiando el contexto ( como por ejem, ahí un burro en la montaña y después pones en otro párrafo que la montaña sostiene a un burro y después te pones a explicar como la gravedad afecta al burro y la suposición de cómo el burro subió la montaña) [img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
the overall story is good, but the constant entire chapters regarding a one-off characters absolutely ruins the story. the cohesion us constantly broken by entire chapters passing for things like backstory mid fight or card details that we honestly dont need to know. why spend a chapter on a card when the entire fight is a chapter? its a cool concept and other than this well done but over half the chapters are not worth paying for.
i just read the last chapter but don't understand why he need to go to the University to get knowledge he can just use the virtual library where they have to share their knowledge to get knowledge from him and make the library like that in another library where he is getting knowledge from another world and all knowledge of the world come to him like nothing.whatever this is my view Don't blame me if you don't like it but you can comment where i am wrong. i am a friendly person 😊
This book name should be how to become omnipresent within a month. It's been crossed 1400 chapters but he didn't cross a month in the novel after his transgression.
Can someone tell me how age MC is in the last chapter? ..................................................................................................
Good story, my only problem being it’s too long, it’s been more than 1300 chapters and there’s NO actual progression. It took this long just for 1-2 months to pass in the story! Stop extending it so much, there’s too much redundant writing. I mean, why would you place full details on each card introduced and make that half the chapter when you can just slowly insert information like that into the story as it progresses?! Other than that it’s a gem of a story
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really good i would want to read it but can t please make it free at least halfway xD so sad it s really good
I like the novel, but at the same time get really annoyed by it. The writing style consists of repeating itself and going in circles which causes very little progress is made in a lot of chapters. The MC is arrogant petty and once showed his superiority by basically argueing with a 5-year old by being more childish. Overall: I like the powersystem and the world but the writing and characters not.
even though the story is nice, there are too many fillers. i already at 800+ chapter and the timeline is only less than a month because too many needless explanation here and there, not to mention the story of each character. i tell u this is filler madness novel.
good plot ,greedy writer....mc and side side side C have more then 20-40 chp just talking with zero info
Now this is just my opinion But The mc has clones/avatars and somehow doesn’t use them to just replace him in public gathering or anywhere he has to go Instead risking his life again and again Why? yes they can’t use grimoires but he can perfectly control his dungeon daughter cores using hive Ai who can use grimoires He can take full control of said dungeon daughter core Use flesh transformation or other cards and change their looks Since their souls are already protected by said cores they can be indistinguishable from him And he can be a true mastermind behind the shadows Well not sure if it can work exactly like that But there has to be something similar in such a wonderfully abstract world
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the only bad thing about this novel is when a character by the name of "Anna" appears in the story: a hoe over 80 years old with a high card level (aka higher cultivation level) who was sleeping with thousands of people over the years and taking the MC hostage for more than 300 chapters because she liked him.
Let's become a demon merchant, ........................... ........ ........... ......... ........ Let's become a demon merchants. ............ ............. .....
the story is a bit slow trying to explain alot and others perspective but the concept and story are great👍
Awesome storyline and a great plot, I love where the story is currently heading. I need a mass release. Mass release, mass release, mass release.
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Good book but with an over-explained plot. Gotta love the side characters. Especially Corey. .................................................. .................................................................
Read it! Loved it! Will recommend it! Love you all! Exp, Exp, Exp! Exp, Exp, Exp! Exp, Exp, Exp! Exp, Exp, Exp! Exp, Exp, Exp! Exp, Exp, Exp! Exp, Exp, Exp!
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Cards, card fights, Card craft, Card fusion, pleasure cards I want to read more web novels on cards. My favorite anime were Dual Masters, Yu-gi-ho, and Card fight vanguard. I love this genre. But web novel does not have enough.
I want to love this book. I really do but it makes it so hard. It has an interesting power system, nice characters and Im interested in where it goes. Yeah okay, the chapters are short which would be palatable if they were 'nutritious' but no, it's endless exposition, unnecessary detail of the cards, how they work, needless drama. Ffs, theres a fight that goes on for almost a 100 chapters and is shown/reshown from three different perspectives. There's world building, wordpadding and then there's shameless wordpadding, this novel walks the line straddling the latter reaching out but not quite. Honestly, this novel could be compressed to 2/3s or even 1/2 it's length and be all the better for it
揭示劇透 author if I find you I am going to k i l l u if u r going to give chilffhanger after chilfhanger
Hello author! I would like to clear up some doubts... they are as follows: will there be a ntr in the work (I hope not), is the fmc a yandere? or possessive? Finally, does the work contain lemons?
Yanderes???..................................................................................................................................
author why is there only a single chapter update lately , as there is too much explanation so when you update only a single chapter and in the updated chapter MC only thinks about his future and chapter finishes you should at least update three chapters per day as there is too much explanation in the novel and try to make the three chapters update regularly otherwise there will be definitely decrement in the number of reader
After reading many novels i can openly say that this one is really special. plot, development, mc, background story, world building 🤔 we can say universe background yea in start i really did not like this novel just because that fu**ing twist where mc have to make contract with the grany we can't say her grany because mc is also a reincarnated person who have already cross 80 age i think I forgot 🥲. still after going through many ups'sand down not that ups and down 😂 i really enjoyed and i will recommend someone who likes reincarnation, scientific way of thinking, F level to sss level i mean step by step and becomes o.p this character have if you like novel like supreme gene, i have a mansion in a post apocalyptic world then you will like this novel too. just give it a try. Read at least till where mc gets his parents book after that this novel becomes very addictive and likeable. i have given 4 stars for reason of updating stability because this novel chapter comes on time but small chapters.
author just wants to extend novel by using fillers and nonsense trolls.he is just trying to milk readers coins so don't read preview chapters so that author writes story neatly without concentrating on nonsense fillers.
I liked it..............................................................................................................................................
La historia 4/5, el romance 2/5 (usaste todo los cliche posibles y el carácter del MC cambiaba demasiado, y Anna la diste vuelta como un panqueque en actitud así porque si), el tecnicismo.... heee vamos a ponerle 5/5 (me entretuvo bastante), el corte a los capítulos 1000/5 hiciste que una comida en burgenking fuera más de 10 capítulos y lo peor es que estas alargando y alargando cada ves más diciendo el mismo párrafo simplemente cambiando el contexto ( como por ejem, ahí un burro en la montaña y después pones en otro párrafo que la montaña sostiene a un burro y después te pones a explicar como la gravedad afecta al burro y la suposición de cómo el burro subió la montaña) [img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
the overall story is good, but the constant entire chapters regarding a one-off characters absolutely ruins the story. the cohesion us constantly broken by entire chapters passing for things like backstory mid fight or card details that we honestly dont need to know. why spend a chapter on a card when the entire fight is a chapter? its a cool concept and other than this well done but over half the chapters are not worth paying for.
i just read the last chapter but don't understand why he need to go to the University to get knowledge he can just use the virtual library where they have to share their knowledge to get knowledge from him and make the library like that in another library where he is getting knowledge from another world and all knowledge of the world come to him like nothing.whatever this is my view Don't blame me if you don't like it but you can comment where i am wrong. i am a friendly person 😊
This book name should be how to become omnipresent within a month. It's been crossed 1400 chapters but he didn't cross a month in the novel after his transgression.
Can someone tell me how age MC is in the last chapter? ..................................................................................................
Good story, my only problem being it’s too long, it’s been more than 1300 chapters and there’s NO actual progression. It took this long just for 1-2 months to pass in the story! Stop extending it so much, there’s too much redundant writing. I mean, why would you place full details on each card introduced and make that half the chapter when you can just slowly insert information like that into the story as it progresses?! Other than that it’s a gem of a story
揭示劇透 really good i would want to read it but can t please make it free at least halfway xD so sad it s really good
I like the novel, but at the same time get really annoyed by it. The writing style consists of repeating itself and going in circles which causes very little progress is made in a lot of chapters. The MC is arrogant petty and once showed his superiority by basically argueing with a 5-year old by being more childish. Overall: I like the powersystem and the world but the writing and characters not.
even though the story is nice, there are too many fillers. i already at 800+ chapter and the timeline is only less than a month because too many needless explanation here and there, not to mention the story of each character. i tell u this is filler madness novel.
good plot ,greedy writer....mc and side side side C have more then 20-40 chp just talking with zero info
Now this is just my opinion But The mc has clones/avatars and somehow doesn’t use them to just replace him in public gathering or anywhere he has to go Instead risking his life again and again Why? yes they can’t use grimoires but he can perfectly control his dungeon daughter cores using hive Ai who can use grimoires He can take full control of said dungeon daughter core Use flesh transformation or other cards and change their looks Since their souls are already protected by said cores they can be indistinguishable from him And he can be a true mastermind behind the shadows Well not sure if it can work exactly like that But there has to be something similar in such a wonderfully abstract world
揭示劇透 the only bad thing about this novel is when a character by the name of "Anna" appears in the story: a hoe over 80 years old with a high card level (aka higher cultivation level) who was sleeping with thousands of people over the years and taking the MC hostage for more than 300 chapters because she liked him.
Let's become a demon merchant, ........................... ........ ........... ......... ........ Let's become a demon merchants. ............ ............. .....
the story is a bit slow trying to explain alot and others perspective but the concept and story are great👍
Awesome storyline and a great plot, I love where the story is currently heading. I need a mass release. Mass release, mass release, mass release.
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Good book but with an over-explained plot. Gotta love the side characters. Especially Corey. .................................................. .................................................................
Read it! Loved it! Will recommend it! Love you all! Exp, Exp, Exp! Exp, Exp, Exp! Exp, Exp, Exp! Exp, Exp, Exp! Exp, Exp, Exp! Exp, Exp, Exp! Exp, Exp, Exp!
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揭示劇透 Cards, card fights, Card craft, Card fusion, pleasure cards I want to read more web novels on cards. My favorite anime were Dual Masters, Yu-gi-ho, and Card fight vanguard. I love this genre. But web novel does not have enough.
I want to love this book. I really do but it makes it so hard. It has an interesting power system, nice characters and Im interested in where it goes. Yeah okay, the chapters are short which would be palatable if they were 'nutritious' but no, it's endless exposition, unnecessary detail of the cards, how they work, needless drama. Ffs, theres a fight that goes on for almost a 100 chapters and is shown/reshown from three different perspectives. There's world building, wordpadding and then there's shameless wordpadding, this novel walks the line straddling the latter reaching out but not quite. Honestly, this novel could be compressed to 2/3s or even 1/2 it's length and be all the better for it
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