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Into marvel as a celestial

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作者: Witch_King_2838

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Ikar0z
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story could be interesting but the grammar and overall english will probably fry your brain if you try to read it............................

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natman
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first of all I love the idea, it has so much potential...... Buuuuuuut! the execution is simply horrible, the grammar, the pacing even the spacing. again great idea, proofread it.

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MichaelSingh

Awesome story. It is one of the best op series that i have seen till now . Keep it up. Don't drop . It has alot of potential man. 💯🥳🔰😝😊🤑👝👻😤✌🙂😇🙏😆👍💀😃😍🤣🤣💕❤💯🥳🔰

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BorisTakerman

Hard to read, hard to understand, requires you to edit the novel yourself just to read it, also its fan-fic about the marvel universe, I dont know why its in the novel section.

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YogSothoth805

The grammar is horrible and the sentences are horibbly structured ................................................................................

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Paradgrim

I just can't man, I would read more but I noped out from reading the first chapter. The grammar is beyond terrible. This would be a great read if chapters were edited and grammar was fixed.

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Solomon_Bourne

Looks like it was written by a child tbh ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

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Jmtxam

If you could stop rewriting the story with only the mc being a celestial and the rest being completely different from the previews versions and simply make them into different stories that would be great. Also, I don't understand how, after so many different versions of the story, your english is still so horrible? One would think that you would improve your english after rewriting the story so many times...

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File_01_Adam

Amazing. What you did my friend is beyond plus ultra. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

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JayGelani

Very Nice book , I'm very excited to read the story further. Please update chapters soon. [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]

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Corrupted_Puppet

I and my poor friend, godzilla had a heart attack and died from reading this BAD WRITING vvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvv

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TyrantTron335

I wonder will he become destroyer. So he can balance the creation In the universe. I love op Mc forever.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

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Zicarius

Dude This So Cool And Op We need more chapters I wanna know what happens next.... .. . .............. ...... ....... ............ .......... .....

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ggg_0865

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Dretno

You drop it and you are dead....!.......,....,.................................................!...............................................

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Corrupted_Puppet

get better at writing before ya write a book hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhgggghhghggggghyyhtugtuhguhhuhygggggg . 5se6grisyrbid64huuygyegjtucet

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James8026

This what I want to read. This what I want to read. This what I want to read. This what I want to read. This what I want to read. This what I want to read. This what I want to read. This what I want to read. This what I want to read. This what I want to read. This what I want to read. This what I want to read. This what I want to read. This what I want to read. This what I want to read. This what I want to read.

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Daoist650551

he keeps in deleting it and redoing it with is good but when you read it knowing how the other ones felt it feels like it's getting worse each re write with I understand but is annoying to read

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Dao_of_infinity

I feel like the author either needs to have an editor or needs to learn how to speak and type english better. Even though the synopsis seems interesting I would not recommend this book because of the poor writing quality.

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Mr_Birb
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I'm enjoying this more than I thought I would. Also, maybe its cuz I'm used to mtl but the writing doesn't actually bother me that much. All in all, neato.

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