An Anime Summoning System

This whole "FanFic" sucks. First of all, this isn't even a fanfic, it just has some ideas/inspiration from animes, besides that, this is original so please put it there. Secondly is Your MC, You are nerfing him to much by making him an idiot with him acting like he is 10. There is no character development, not even his powers develope much. You are given no information about the world he is in, and the Arthur doesn't dwell into it. Some things happened like when his mother suddenly knows about his power for absolutely no reason and is looked over by the Arthur. The Grammer sucks, you can read that in the synopsis. The only good thing about this "fanfic" is the updates as this is a new "fanfic" it updates often. TLDR: The idea is good its just that the Arthur written it poorly, he nerfs his MC really hard by making him dumb and you don't know much about the world. I rate this a 2/10 don't waste your time on this.

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Daoist708179

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ManEater

I can only review once, or i would review more to get you to 10 reviews to help your book but webnovel doesn't allow it. Good book though. Have a nice day.

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MIR_Sajeeb

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Alien_Space_Bat

The story have a nice plot.[img=recommend][img=recommend] It's also fun to read.......like the interaction with family members[img=recommend][img=recommend] Hope it will be a good story [img=update][img=update][img=update]

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The_Zen_Boy

there not many conversations , the mc is so much busy with the upgrades that i feel that i am playing some mobile games with so many character and BS amount of upgrades , the background isn't explained and i can't imagine enough about the events for ex/ the place he lives in , the kingdoms , the names of the kingdoms , who are his siblings ? . his summons look so emotionless as if they were machines or slaves only to obey the master and no interaction at all .

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GoldShiresInn

this is a really great and unique idea i have seen but this is dragged down by the grammar the story development and how the world isnt explained much but i think one of the bigger problems is how you limit yourself by just using three animes for this novel it doesnt create much diversity

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Love_venerable

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El_Lector_Aburrido

por ahora bien espero que traigas mas capitulo seguido xn xn nxx nxxx nxnx nxnxnx nx xnxnx xxxx xxx x x x x x x x x x x x x x x x x x x x x x x

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Gd_Sys

can you do a reborn as sasukes twin brother fanfic plssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss

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NowGoWithTheFlow

A great idea for a novel. That's all it has though. First grammar is bad well not that bad but still bad. Sentences Don't make sense sometime. Nerf many people an MC. Then summoning the worst characters that anyone would summon. What I mean by worst is weak, unskilled, useless character compared to the dozens of other characters MC could of chosen. For example MC gets to chose a character from DBZ an chose's Bardock? now I have nothing against bardock but there are so many better than him that actually know martial arts an many other stuff while being more powerful. Not only that you actually nerf an already weak Bardock!!! I won't read this now.

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Dr200

So tired of the cliche “trash mc/crippled”

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kobeblackmamba

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DabanCrow

Giving a 5 star review in hope that the author will work on it. I kinda want to read something like this so I can only wish the author good luck.

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LUNAZEN

Either this will be dropped like he's other fanfictions or this will be completed im hoping for the author to complete it but we'll have to wait and see

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Sai_Swami

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